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VN Ren'Py VIRTUAL DAUGHTER [v0.6a] [LaFamilleClub]

I looked at the screenshots for your game and they were kinda bad. Not so much posing and whatnot but the lighting is atrocious. Too bright. Much too bright in my opinion. Also some had shadows and others didn't. I personally prefer shadows since they add more depth to the images. I would recommend working on lighting for the renders before going forward. I read a lot of good comments about the story and I am interested in that but if the images are too bright they make my eyes hurt so it would be much appreciated if you could look into fixing it.
 
Why the fuck would you put the intro before the main menu? There should be no obstacle before changing game settings, ever.

Also, mixed tense narration is awful writing. Stick to present tense outside of limited flashbacks.

Edit: Neat story so far, though I hate the cutscenes. They look like shit because of the compression, and making them a video makes I can't click through them without missing content. Please just make them images. "But then the voices won't work right" they sound like garbage anyway so that's no loss. "But the animations!" yeah they're awful too. Extremely uncanny valley, clipping everywhere. It'd look so much better if you just focused on getting nice still image renders.
 
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Anybody else get bounced back to the login page on LFC's site? Seems weird. Interesting game, though.
 
Anybody else get bounced back to the login page on LFC's site? Seems weird. Interesting game, though.
Never tried. The daughter looks too much like Sylvester Stallone's daughter, and I don't wanna fuck with a girl who's dad is a professional boxer. :LOL:
 
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finally got around to playing this one, love the statement the artist is making and integrating it into the entire story, which I find original and enjoyable, can't wait for an update
 
There hasn't been an update in a while, is there anything else coming ?
not much detail into why but on the AVN's site it says "So, it’s been a while. I ended up having to make a big revision to the Saving the Pixels animation. I hope you like the new one." I haven't played this since last year and don't even remember seeing an animation, but redoing that took up most of his time.
 
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Thank you for your patience. There have been more than a couple of bug fixes, more voices and a new Saving the Pixels animation added to chapter 1. Doing two animations at the same time and having technical difficulties took some serious time. Among the bug fixes is separating the media channels more in line with the standard (which was clear as mud, much like some other Ren'Py stuff), a glitch where the player would get stuck trying to dominate Audriana in spite of doing things semi-correctly (there still is a loop if you are just careless), fixing of several pretty gross typos and awkward sentences, and more that I cannot even remember any longer. Also, there is an Android build!

I'll be updating the 3rd party anonymous links if you don't wish to play it on or download it from the website. Password for those will be "DaraLovesDaddy" without the quotes.
 
LFC doesn't seem to have a download link even though I signed up and activated my account. Am I missing something?

I decided to get the file from anonfiles but the password is incorrect. DaraLovesDaddy isn't the password.

Last edit: I finally found the files on LFC. I guess after activating and logging in, I still had to shut down my browser and relog to see the files. No password needed to unzip the LFC files but in the case of the Win/Linux: ANONFILES needs a password and DaraLovesDaddy is not the correct password. Good luck gang!
 
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In the last update 0.5 i download from anonfiles for windows and says the password is wrong i try with cquotes adn witout quotes and cannot decryp the zip
 
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As far as I could tell there is no new content, unless I did something wrong. So if you've already played 0.4, nothing new here.
 
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As far as I could tell there is no new content, unless I did something wrong. So if you've already played 0.4, nothing new here.
Chapter 1 is almost complete. Other than bug fixes and more voices, the main change is the new Saving the Pixels animation. I tried putting that in the update section, but the layout of the game entries makes it easy to miss. More effort is going to go towards chapter 2, but I of course will add more voices to ch 1, so if you do find a bug I still want to know. Also I would appreciate it if you recheck any you previously reported.

Next ch 1 release should be the final test version, barring something that forces me to reconsider, as occurred this time.
 
game good but need a hide ui button for droid since keyboard dont stay on screen no way to take screenshot on droid
 
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game good but need a hide ui button for droid since keyboard dont stay on screen no way to take screenshot on droid
I'll have to look into that. This is the first Android version, so feedback is very much appreciated.

Bingo! Thanks!
My apologies for that. I thought I'd updated it in the main description, but apparently not. It should read correctly now.
 
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game good but need a hide ui button for droid since keyboard dont stay on screen no way to take screenshot on droid
I just took a look, and I'm able to take a screenshot using the knock gesture. Even though I dislike it, the power + volume down works as well. Options for these and older devices are pretty much laid out at , just in case your device is different. If I am misunderstanding what you are asking, please try again, along with the make and model of the device.
 

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VIRTUAL DAUGHTER [v0.5] [LaFamilleClub]​

Alternate Download Mirrors for Windows

I've looked everywhere, and I don't see that. I even did a search on "mirror", tried a different browser, etc. Where is this being displayed?
 
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