discussion VN Ren'Py VAM Uncanny [v0.8.0] [Goosenards]

[Stelevein]

Yep.

Since this is the long-term project, I'll probably give this one a try. Though it wasn't because the games were short that I don't particularly like them, it was mainly because the endings were bad. Hopefully with this being a long-term project it won't have that issue.

 

[Peter]

This is a great start for a fantastic game.
The story is written well and humorous until here.
The characters (especially cora) are lovable and very charming.
The render quality is high quality and was implemented with great attention to detail (especially facial expressions and gestures).
Compared to most other VN games, this is an AAA production and for me a Candidate for the Games of the Year Award.
This is finally a game without a motherfucker and incest Story, and without senseless violence or abuse fantasies.
I can hardly expect it to see how it goes on.
Dear developers, Keep going and continue this great work !!!

 

[Davidtoxy]

The story semms so interesting, so i take a seat here for futures updates <3

 

[saltydogmk]

This has potential to be great. The animation is topnotch of course. And the characters are very likable. I hope it turns out to be a lengthy story. Perhaps have some more love interests at some point. I don't know what he has planned for the game. But it's a great first impression for the game. Definitely keeping an out for future updates.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

No incest?

not yet? Consider the title name. Maybe the run away is actually his daughter from some hookup 11 years prior and they just don't know it yet but gets revealed later.

 

[Peter]

How many chapters have you planned for the game?
According to the pictures in the game folders, there are four.
However, this contradicts your statement that the game would be a long -term project.
I very much hope that there will be more than four, can you say something about that?

 

[rsxxxxx]

I was peeved that it ended so abruptly. Seriously, great story so far. It's actually very wholesome, and I don't say that too often.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

I was peeved that it ended so abruptly. Seriously, great story so far. It's actually very wholesome, and I don't say that too often.

It's just a 0.1, the loli fucking will come later most likely. This probabaly going to be a slow-burn so they won't fuck until much later (prob a few updates in at least).

 

[Montimer]

It's just a 0.1, the loli fucking will come later most likely. This probabaly going to be a slow-burn so they won't fuck until much later (prob a few updates in at least).

That is assuming story doesn't abruptly end like always.

 

[-Sikishi-]

It's been a long time since I saw such good writing and renders. Hope we get to see more of Magnus.

 

[Goosenards]

How many chapters have you planned for the game?
According to the pictures in the game folders, there are four.
However, this contradicts your statement that the game would be a long -term project.
I very much hope that there will be more than four, can you say something about that?

10 chapters are planned. The chapter pictures you found in the game folder are just tests that I forgot to remove.

 

[chester1530]

That is assuming story doesn't abruptly end like always.

Well yes, he left us with the gun loaded and ready to shoot... and then the game was abandoned and you were unable to shoot your stiff and erect gun.

 

[Peter]

10 chapters are planned. The chapter pictures you found in the game folder are just tests that I forgot to remove.

That's good news!

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Even if it takes a while for the game to be finished, I will stay excited and wish you a lot of fun and success in implementation.
Thumbs up.

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[-Sikishi-]

Well yes, he left us with the gun loaded and ready to shoot... and then the game was abandoned and you were unable to shoot your stiff and erect gun.

For an erotic VN that's a fair critique. But if they are done right the real goal is the journey of falling in love with the characters, not the final erotic scene.

 

[TheSidewinder]

@Goosenards The current tags seem wrong? There's no oral or anal sex yet, only vaginal. (And we don't yet actually know that there's a virgin, do we? It's assumed, I agree, but... *shrug*)
Regardless, a very good start to the game.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

@Goosenards The current tags seem wrong? There's no oral or anal sex yet, only vaginal. (And we don't yet actually know that there's a virgin, do we? It's assumed, I agree, but... *shrug*)
Regardless, a very good start to the game.

damn, I know girls are getting their cherries popped earlier these days, but 10yo? I hope they're still virgins at that point, or at least before the MC pops it.

 

[lolcow30]

10 chapters? Yeah not happening.
I'll give it 5 before he/she gets bored.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

10 chapters? Yeah not happening.
I'll give it 5 before he/she gets bored.

eh Rational Chaos was 3 seasons (maybe 10-12 updates total), though all in the same year rather than the usual 5gb split, so I guess we'll see

 

[jeff1005]

Just started this one. It kind of reminds me of Sandra (LiriusArt): young neglected/rejected girl taken under the wing of an older man. The main difference seems to be that Cora seems to be far more street-wise and rather manipulative (unlike Sandra). It will be interesting to see where this VN goes

 

[Elezghar]

damn, I know girls are getting their cherries popped earlier these days, but 10yo? I hope they're still virgins at that point, or at least before the MC pops it.

What are you on about? All characters are of legal age, it says so when starting the game.

No but great to see another goosenards project. Kind of an interesting story so far but hard to really get a grasp if there is going to be any real story or if that was just a set up for them to start living together.