discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ The Sunset Fairies [v0.15] [Ethan Krautz]

[Nubis93]

last scene, and future scenes option without blood planned? I like to corrupt my girls, but not make a blood bath out of them. (if that is planned for the twin)

the bulge, and rough sex is very hot, but the blood during sex and in bed mixed with cum killed it for me

also urination planned? I ask cause the game seems to be going in a very kinky, slave, cum dump direction, wich I love

there probably wont be any blood with that twin next time something happen....

 

[Stoni1234]

Really? I didn't have a hard time following the plot. Some minor spelling mistakes, but as far as I can tell both the renders and story itself are solid.

its not that I dont understand what is happening. I just didnt like it. All the timejumps (one week here, three month there) + the translation (mother calling the daughters her "Treasures" for example) just killed the flow of the story for me. As I said in my other post its just a personal thing.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Maybe you could adapt his tongue to his cock first

So this becomes The Sunset Kombat and the MC becomes Reptile? That's a turn I didn't anticipate in the story.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Pray with me brothers and sisters. this could be a meme

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"Please don't let us suffer the same fate as nuns in Between Salvation and Abyss..."

 

[Raul_Duke]

the translation (mother calling the daughters her "Treasures" for example) just killed the flow of the story for me.

the hell is wrong with that?!?!?!
what is wrong for a parent to refer to their children as "Treasures"
is it everyday common place? prolly not.
is it completely alien and unheard of? dear fucking christ no!

 

[Stoni1234]

the hell is wrong with that?!?!?!
what is wrong for a parent to refer to their children as "Treasures"
is it everyday common place? prolly not.
is it completely alien and unheard of? dear fucking christ no!

whats your problem with me not liking the game. id say that treasures is a translation from german where "Schatz" is very common.
Never saw it used in an english context. maybe im wrong with this cause english isnt my first language.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

whats your problem with me not liking the game. id say that treasures is a translation from german where "Schatz" is very common.
Never saw it used in an english context. maybe im wrong with this cause english isnt my first language.

It's definitely not very common in English, but I don't think it sounds strange. In English, terms of endearment include things like honey, sugar, sweetie, sweetie pie, dumpling, princess, and so on — many of which are odd if taken literally. However, in the context of these terms of endearment, they sound normal (or at least not odd) to our native-English ears. I have also heard (rarely) treasure, so it's probably just something you've not run across. That doesn't surprise me at all.

 

[sfree4ever]

there probably wont be any blood with that twin next time something happen....

Hope so, but if there was a option to turn off blood from sex, the first time with the other twin would so much enjoyable for those that are not into blood/gore in sex scenes

 

[lewdest]

It's definitely not very common in English, but I don't think it sounds strange. In English, terms of endearment include things like honey, sugar, sweetie, sweetie pie, dumpling, princess, and so on — many of which are odd if taken literally. However, in the context of these terms of endearment, they sound normal (or at least not odd) to our native-English ears. I have also heard (rarely) treasure, so it's probably just something you've not run across. That doesn't surprise me at all.

To add to this, I think treasure is used in the South (Florida, Alabama, Mississippi, Louisiana etc. Especially if you say that word with a southern accent.

 

[lewdest]

Spoiler: Last scene of Update question

Was the last sex scene supposed to be super over the top then repeat but in a slow more loving manner or were there supposed to be two different options to choose from and whatever you select is either the slow more loving way or the he looses complete control way? Or was that just mine that repeated the scene in two different ways?

 

[Tiur]

Spoiler: Last scene of Update question

Was the last sex scene supposed to be super over the top then repeat but in a slow more loving manner or were there supposed to be two different options to choose from and whatever you select is either the slow more loving way or the he looses complete control way? Or was that just mine that repeated the scene in two different ways?

There is a bug: if you have identical values for romance and corruption, both scenes play, because they're two sequential blocks written as if [corruption] >= [romance] and if [romance] >= [corruption], instead of being a single if/else block like they should have been.

 

[lewdest]

There is a bug: if you have identical values for romance and corruption, both scenes play, because they're two sequential blocks written as if [corruption] >= [romance] and if [romance] >= [corruption], instead of being a single if/else block like they should have been.

Thanks for the info. Wasn't sure.

 

[whisperpuppy]

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[BlackCat_MH]

they are so cute, love them.

 

[Raggi45]

To add to this, I think treasure is used in the South (Florida, Alabama, Mississippi, Louisiana etc. Especially if you say that word with a southern accent.

In Russia, it's always like sweet, sweet, etc.

 

[Arikania]

Missing tag: "male protagonist"

 

[meduzha]

glad for another update

 

[bOUNCE]

1 cute redhead is never enough also a big fan of fallout so the perfect game really.

 

[snow123789]

nice characters, ok story.

 

[EthanKrautz]

When there are no pets around you, but you decide to make one.

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