discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ The Sunset Fairies [v0.15] [Ethan Krautz]

[mrbobby]

overall 6 out of 10
attention to detail in the images 8/10
image quality 5/10
story 5/10
writing quality 4/10


first this in NOT a game, it's a plain VN absolutely no choices, the graphic is ok but just average nothing special, but the writing is at places hard to follow or sounds like it's written by someone that doesn't understand human language, there a few places where you can't even explain the writing by just "oh English is not the writers' first language" but at a point, the writer writes " don't be surprised to see a military ship by sea or air" what does that even mean? and there are quite a few "mistakes" like that, the idea for the story is like most VN is just a slightly different copy/paste, but it's nice to see that Ethan is taking some care into what images go with the text

 

[Myuhinny]

don't be surprised to see a military ship by sea or air

That means you can see it by sea or air as in see if from another ship or aircraft.

 

[mrbobby]

That means you can see it by sea or air as in see if from another ship or aircraft.

i freely admit i don't know where Ethan is from, but that's not how to talk in English or any other language i know,

 

[perheiro]

Route smoot I just want to drill Camila and I'm betting I'm not the only one.

 

[Vulkan117]

Not gonna lie. I see red heads snd I’m there.

 

[Nastastic]

Not gonna lie. I see red heads snd I’m there.

Redheads

Twins

Smols

Redheaded twin smols

 

[Thiaslaf]

So, it seems that 0.02 i is out since March 18. We need a hero now!

 

[Myuhinny]

We need a hero now!

The DEV is the hero and the one that updates the links when it's time to.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Thread updated to latest version.

 

[ZerueL]

I just realized, the dev loves starting their games inside a car

Spoiler: Spoiler

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[Myuhinny]

I just realized, the dev loves starting their games inside a car

Maybe that's where the magic always happens at.

 

[Boogere]

i freely admit i don't know where Ethan is from, but that's not how to talk in English or any other language i know,

Seems like an easy mistake to make, if they've heard of the word airship(which is a word used for a blimp or zeppelin) they might think ship is applicable to airplanes as well as boats despite airship only being used for goodyear tires advertising and hitler mobiles. Coincidently aircraft and watercraft are both equally generic for their respective mediums of locomotion but "craft" by it self is never used by it self, so the sentence would be weird with that as well. The best replacement I can think of is android port, when? or perhaps, vehicle.

 

[MicoJive]

Is this any different than the version on f95? I don't see why this is restricted right now.

 

[Moss]

Is this any different than the version on f95? I don't see why this is restricted right now.

I think they’re the same though F95 shows 3x as many tags including the four shown here.

 

[Dar7777777]

Ghost's android port

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[PTPorts]

Android port updated​

 

[Mmushy]

I like how the game looks. Really like the twins.
However I do find the story really disjointed. Especially dialogue, it's like a very bad editing job happened. There is no flow to it. It's like parts were cut out.
MC also omes across as a sexual predator. Not sure whether by designed or as a result of the writing

 

[EthanKrautz]

My sweet Camila...

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[akmad95]

Hi dev first of all your game is great and is MC's mom and sister will be part of the game

 

[Yodasy]

Will there in futher also watersport/peeing or maybe tickling content in there?