discussion Complete KN Ren'Py DAZ The Island - [1.0] [Anonymous]

[Dean]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

Developer Name

Anonymous

Developer Links

N/A

Version

1.0

Latest Update

Feb 9, 2024

Release Date

Feb 11, 2023

Language

English - German

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. MacOS
4. Android

Other Games

Playtime - Weekend house - Family Michel - Black and White - Sandra - Susan - The Trio

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Overview:
Rene (the only man on the island at the moment) has arranged for their joint vacation with Bianca on Sun Island. Finally a vacation together, which is still on an island that allows nude bathing. Rene does not suspect that there is not only Bianca he knows. The adventure can begin...​

Spoiler: Genre:

3dcg, Creampie, Group Sex, Kinetic Novel, Loli, Male Protagonist, Oral Sex, Shota, Small Tits, Vaginal Sex

Spoiler: Installation:

1. Extract and run.

Spoiler: Changelog:

N/A

Spoiler: My Games

Black & White

The Trio

Playtime

Susan

Sandra

Weekend House

Family Michel
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Due to a situation/request, please do not mention the name of this dev if you know it.
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[User_124703]

Mirrors, if you cannot dl, from the original source in OP.

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* This port/version is unofficial and is not released by the developer. Download at your own risk!​

 

[Moss]

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Hi guys I am LiriusArt and I make art, on Discord you are welcome to look at my stuff.

Now I make my first game - The Island - which I put online here.


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[AshlaEkkreth]

looks great

 

[Mahikola]

Love the art, looks really good. The dialogue and story needs to be worked on tbh, nothing makes any sense.

 

[XoMo]

Objective analysis with constructive suggestions: (English translation)

1. The phrasing seems as if it was directly translated without consideration for the nuances of the English language. Perhaps MTL? It could use some revision, especially in areas that use past/future/present-tense verbs (Example: coming, came, went, will go).
2. The quantity of girls is generous, to the point of confusion due to both unusual girl names as well as the suddenness of switching between them with little or no connection to the previous or next character. Sure, it's an introduction to them all, but could use some polishing.
3. Rene? Isn't that a girl's name? Until "he" shows up, we are not certain the girls are talking about a boy.
4. This is presented from an omniscient POV, not a first-person POV. No one has internal thoughts, only bluntly spoken dialogue.
5. The game ZIP FILE size is 543MB for around 3 minutes of gameplay. That includes 472 MB for 82 images. The images are all JPG 3840x2160 5MB-10MB per image. They could be converted to smaller resolution and WEBM format to reduce every image to less than 1MB each. If compressed, reduced, and converted to WEBM format, that would be around 40-60MB total for all current images.

I am not judging this game. It has promise, potential, and looks nice. I am simply presenting objective observations from a Native-English-speaking mid-western American POV.

Please take these analyses with a grain of salt. I look forward to the progression of the writing and art. I hope there will be animation and sound added (at least music, hopefully sound effects).

 

[Myuhinny]

Rene? Isn't that a girl's name?

Nope. Rene/René which originated from French was a male name that has crossed over into female form however the female form being spelled with an extra E on the end of the name.

 

[LiriusArt]

Objective analysis with constructive suggestions: (English translation)

1. The phrasing seems as if it was directly translated without consideration for the nuances of the English language. Perhaps MTL? It could use some revision, especially in areas that use past/future/present-tense verbs (Example: coming, came, went, will go).
2. The quantity of girls is generous, to the point of confusion due to both unusual girl names as well as the suddenness of switching between them with little or no connection to the previous or next character. Sure, it's an introduction to them all, but could use some polishing.
3. Rene? Isn't that a girl's name? Until "he" shows up, we are not certain the girls are talking about a boy.
4. This is presented from an omniscient POV, not a first-person POV. No one has internal thoughts, only bluntly spoken dialogue.
5. The images are all JPG 3840x2160 6mb per image. That could be converted to smaller resolution and WEBM format to reduce every image to 1MB or less. The game ZIP FILE size is 543mb for around 3 minutes of gameplay. That includes 472 MB for 82 images. If compressed, reduced, and converted to WEBM format, that would be around 40-60MB total for all current images.

I am not judging this game. It has promise, potential, and looks nice. I am simply presenting objective observations from a Native-English-speaking mid-western American POV.

Please take these analyses with a grain of salt. I look forward to the progression of the writing and art. I hope there will be animation and sound added (at least music, hopefully sound effects).

sorry about the writing, the German and English may well be far apart. There is no I... it is my narrative. Rene is a male name, very popular in Europe, Germany. I'm not the best narrator either... hopefully that will get better with time.

 

[XoMo]

sorry about the writing, the German and English may well be far apart. There is no I... it is my narrative. Rene is a male name, very popular in Europe, Germany. I'm not the best narrator either... hopefully that will get better with time.

I understand the cultural difference. I mean no disrespect. But some names are ambiguous. Or uncommon in different cultures.
I have met only 2 people named "Renee" or "Rene" and both are women. Perhaps throwing in the pronoun "he" or "his" early on in reference to Rene will simplify clarity that they mean a guy.

 

[Myuhinny]

Rene will simplify clarity that they mean a guy.

Overview:
Rene (the only man on the island) has arranged to meet Bianca on Sun Island for their vacation together. Finally a joint vacation that is still on an island that allows nude bathing. Rene does not suspect that there is not only Bianca he knows. The adventure can begin...

 

[BgileMunro]

Bravo! Beautiful girls, and beautiful artwork in general, and I like the story because it's simple and to the point and leads right away to enjoying the girls and their relationship with Rene. This has great potential and I look forward to updates. I will see updates here of course, but I'd like to follow the dev if you have a portal somewhere. There doesn't seem to be advertising for one with the game itself.

Oh, and I love that at least one of the girls has pubic hair! I like bald pussies, but also some variety!

I don't have a problem with the name Rene at all, and I am a native English speaker and have no problem following the dialogue. Sure, it's not perfect English but I wasn't confused at all.

Please continue with your project!

 

[Chikoungouna]

Android port?

 

[LiriusArt]

you can follow me on Discord to not miss anything, link can be found above.Bravo! Beautiful girls, and beautiful artwork in general, and I like the story because it's simple and to the point and leads right away to enjoying the girls and their relationship with Rene. This has great potential and I look forward to updates. I will see updates here of course, but I'd like to follow the dev if you have a portal somewhere. There doesn't seem to be advertising for one with the game itself.

Oh, and I love that at least one of the girls has pubic hair! I like bald pussies, but also some variety!

I don't have a problem with the name Rene at all, and I am a native English speaker and have no problem following the dialogue. Sure, it's not perfect English but I wasn't confused at all.

Please continue with your project!

you can follow me on Discord to not miss anything, link can be found above.

 

[LiriusArt]

Android port?

no unfortunately not yet but I am working on it.

 

[BgileMunro]

OK my bad I found the links in the heading of this thread.

 

[Myuhinny]

Android port?

https://lewdcorner.com/threads/android-port-requests-renpy-only.213/ Use the android request thread.

 

[BaeScout83]

This looks promising. I always welcome games that make use of my 1440p screen so it doesn't need to upscale from 1080p.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Moved to restricted after reviewing the renders.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Mirrors added to the OP.

 

[LiriusArt]

Hi Lirius.
Congratulations on the game release!

I've looked at your script and made a few corrections to the German and English dialogues. I'll also maybe add code for a custom MC name since most players prefer that.

I'll send you the files in a bit.

old friend, good to see you again, for the help I am grateful.