discussion VN KN Ren'Py DAZ The Five Star Stories [v0.9.0] [Narrator Studios]

[Shiva]

Does anyone else feel that the story is missing several scenes? I mean we have the Sexy Fun with Sis, then things shift to the MC is a workaholic and needs to be dragged out of their room. How did things change so quick? Also, where is the Sis in these recent scenes (she just vanished).

Just wondering.

 

[Viber0111]

Good luck with your game!

 

[zmladvzv]

I have enjoyed the game so far but for some reason my first save didn't work so I had to start again. I'm hoping the next update will be more of the cousin and aunt.

 

[The Narrator]

Does anyone else feel that the story is missing several scenes? I mean we have the Sexy Fun with Sis, then things shift to the MC is a workaholic and needs to be dragged out of their room. How did things change so quick? Also, where is the Sis in these recent scenes (she just vanished).

Just wondering.

There's a new path in the next version where you stay at home and you're just with your sister.

 

[Ferdinand321]

I want to see the next step with the aunt's daughters

 

[ArchX]

It's straightforward, maybe a bit too straightforward for someone. It has some kinetic novel vibes, but there is no tag for it... And when it comes to the love interests—sis, mom, and aunt—the models are fine, but their personalities could use a bit of a tune-up. Overall, it's an okay experience, but nothing to write home about. MC is meh... Obviously I don't want a full chad MC, but this one is a little bit off-putting.

 

[Republican Bear]

Well...what can I say about this game...basically the whole premise is good, but man it gets confusing
quickly. Hopefully the writing gets better with future updates were I wont be left scratching my head.

 

[AshlaEkkreth]

greatly enjoying this. knowing that it started intending to be little one offs and then expanding on the first story makes me smile, sometimes a little encouragement is all we need.

 

[nutcracker]

loved the first part; imo it's nice to see some bush on the female models once in a while

 

[Thanatos]

I'm enjoying this one. I will say that the cousin is too small for the role an elder cousin, so I've had to mod the script to make her a younger cousin just for my own sanity while playing. Regardless, I look forward to more releases.

 

[EasyB]

I haven't finished this, so I can't give a full review, but the story feels a bit... rushed. You go from debating whether you should try to kiss your sister to straight up having sex around the clock with her in like 24 hours. While I don't want an epic, the timing was a tad ridiculous. Other than that, no complaints about the models.

 

[lewdlove]

Really good, like playing it.. too bad I don't have patch password

 

[RandyBoy]

Nice game, will wait for update.

 

[rogueai]

Then again, I don't know if this story's dev is actually in this forum at all, so my suggestions might've gone silently into the ether...

That was helpful for anyone who might want to refine or learn the intricacies of coding, though.

 

[Harliqyn]

good story!

 

[RandyBoy]

Is it normal, in open mode the preg bar doesn't change? Saw someone having same issue but a while back, may still be have bug.

 

[TarekMar]

The game is nice but I found a few mistakes. The name of the aunt (Randy in my case) ist used instaed of aunt and a few times for the (step)mom too. And as the aunt gives MC the water she said MCs age is 18 (default) and not the age I choosed. And by the trip to aunties house where the heck is the hot twin sister?

 

[The Narrator]

Is it normal, in open mode the preg bar doesn't change? Saw someone having same issue but a while back, may still be have bug.

Normally I fixed that, but in the next version, it's only for patrons right now. Soon at 1.50 $.

 

[The Narrator]

The game is nice but I found a few mistakes. The name of the aunt (Randy in my case) ist used instaed of aunt and a few times for the (step)mom too. And as the aunt gives MC the water she said MCs age is 18 (default) and not the age I choosed. And by the trip to aunties house where the heck is the hot twin sister?

I'll look into it. Thank you!

 

[The Narrator]

So cute!
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This is fresh. Hasn't been edited yet and even my patrons haven't seen it. Coming up in v0.6