discussion Take a Peek: My Latest Renders Await Your Thoughts!

[skred]

Looks good. A bit noisy and grainy. Should be easily fixed.

 

[killua00002]

mc is cute looks good especially for a first attempt

 

[CrapFace]

Great start if these are your choice of models.
Yeahm same about the MC's age though.... and I'm guessing this has school type setting? Which have been done to death...

And... I see a fair number of male characters... reduce those, make'm co-workers or something, but if they even look funny at my girls... I'm out... no sharing...

 

[mangsm]

Characters look really pretty. Camera angle of the scenes sometimes has more impact than the characters though, keep that in mind.

 

[flumflam]

It looks decent. You should render an indoor and outdoor scene to give an example of how you control lighting.
I find what separates bad and decent/good renders is the devs ability to handle lighting a scene both with directional lighting and strength.

For me, a game can have lower quality renders if the lighting is good.. but if the quality is top notch but it looks like characters have flashlights pointed at them from all directions, I'm out.

 

[Gogols]

The bullies have punchable faces. Nice!

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

The art is good but the MC looks like fag. More than one male screams NTR or gay, not a good sign.

 

[ultimav]

Looks pretty good

 

[Mid1969]

I like the girls. Male characters not so much. Reminds me a bit of NLT's earlier works. Good luck with your game!

 

[User_75975]

I think it looks great! The girls are very cute and unique

 

[BirdPonyo]

I think the eyes on some of them are too dark? something seems off about the eyes, I think that's it but could be wrong.

 

[lespamon]

In my opinion, you have managed to develop new character models that have not yet worn out. I wouldn't comment on the individual characters themselves, as everyone certainly has their own preferences. The pictures themselves look promising, good luck with further development.

 

[Sybarita]

Not bad.

Personally I think 18 year old MCs have been played out and you should make a dad/daughter game.

But that's what I always say.

I'm sure plenty of people will like your game.

Wait what? 18 yo mc is played out, but Dad/Daughter isnt? Are you sure about that?

 

[alvin]

looks good! what tags are you planning?

 

[susa5411]

NGL The MC-Friend #1 looks more like a bully to me and the Bully #1 looks more like a typical friend in other VN´s (ofc if we dont count VN´s with the fat friend). Other that that i think others look pretty decent.

 

[KSAS]

I like that the characters are different from the repetitive models that everyone uses, but I don't see any reason for so many male characters unless it's one of those games, anyway you're on the right track good luck.

 

[Viber0111]

Looks well.

 

[Utopia]

Good luck @iCheetos!

 

[lhkkii]

It's good to see Brazilian games, I've met few Brazilian developers making good games in our language
I liked the renders, they deviate from the standard of known characters

 

[Mike85]

Am I the only one who thinks that the forehead from some of the girls seems a bit too big?
And also I would prefer if there would be some chubby models. I don't mean fat, only whats considered chubby in the porn industry aka normal girls