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[Darthblutbad13]

looking good so far lots of well wishes to your project ,be encouraged!

 

[Thedengenlurker]

These are very nice. My minor complaint is the girl on the left in the first render she looks like she is sucking in her cheeks and I think it looks unappealing but thats probably just me.

 

[User_89876]

While not exactly my taste, the renders show a distinct style that would make your game distinguishable, which is big big plus in my eyes. As others said, you could aim for more variety in body types and more important on faces. Don't worry about tuning down the age visually. As long as you allow to set the age at the beginning of the game, even Frickin95 would allow you to distribute it (although I never understood their criteria).

If your story also finds some unique viewpoint to make it different, even in a typical trope like a school setting, then you might be up to something.

 

[iCheetos]

While not exactly my taste, the renders show a distinct style that would make your game distinguishable, which is big big plus in my eyes. As others said, you could aim for more variety in body types and more important on faces. Don't worry about tuning down the age visually. As long as you allow to set the age at the beginning of the game, even Frickin95 would allow you to distribute it (although I never understood their criteria).

If your story also finds some unique viewpoint to make it different, even in a typical trope like a school setting, then you might be up to something.

I'm thinking about doing the following regarding age: you can give the MC's age at the beginning, say (14-17), and other characters will have ages different by -2 or +1 [from the MC's age]. Did you get it? I found it simpler and easier. Sometimes it's cool to meet a character and they're younger or older than you.

Of course, if the characters are shorter or taller, or have an adult appearance, they'll have an appropriate age. I want to try to deviate a bit from the standard of the games (VNs) I've played
What do you think?

 

[nsfwrev]

Looks pretty good! Keep up the work!

 

[iCheetos]

Looks pretty good! Keep up the work!

thx man

 

[User_89876]

I'm thinking about doing the following regarding age: you can give the MC's age at the beginning, say (14-17), and other characters will have ages different by -2 or +1 [from the MC's age]. Did you get it? I found it simpler and easier. Sometimes it's cool to meet a character and they're younger or older than you. What do you think?

Yes, setting just one age and have the others fixed relaitve to that one is THE perfect method. It allows for you to write a consistent story around it, and is easier to do in the artwork. And I hate it to set the age of protagonists in the beginning if I don't know anything about them.

For distribution purposes you should state that the default age of the MC is 18, but allow for lower ages in this setting, maybe also giving some hint of what is actually intended.

 

[iCheetos]

Yes, setting just one age and have the others fixed relaitve to that one is THE perfect method. It allows for you to write a consistent story around it, and is easier to do in the artwork. And I hate it to set the age of protagonists in the beginning if I don't know anything about them.

For distribution purposes you should state that the default age of the MC is 18, but allow for lower ages in this setting, maybe also giving some hint of what is actually intended.

yeah their all have +21y COF COF ! even the future [lolis]

 

[HuevosAzules]

Looks amazing!
Nice, unique models.
Keep up the good work!

 

[gandrews2k3]

Damn those girls are sexy as hell! You've got a great eye for beauty

 

[bdogvn25]

Great work, good luck dev

 

[Al Catz]

Looking good....now gotta wait to see them naked

 

[Deleted member 123133]

they look great! looking forward seeing

 

[Impulse 9]

Looks good. But honestly, the MC combined with his family members indicate what type of game this will be, which means half those friends could have been made female and aunt and cousins...unless you are going the NTR route. In which case you should probably throw in a Dad and still throw in the aunt and cousins and let the player have a choice of who fucks who. Too many games just sacrifice being unique for the same old formula that the majority seems to want, namely the son fucking everything that moves. I mean it works but you will never pull in extra players on top of that usual crowd.

On a side note: I'm still awaiting a game where anyone can have fun with anyone, or at least include character variety in scenes. You want the MC in every scene...fine, but mix up your threesomes to include every character at some point. It's not like the main storyline in these games are Christopher Nolan masterpieces. Also, the girls should interact with each other in threesomes or it was pointless having one. And a render of a peck on the lips that so many games seem to throw in is not hot or considered actual kissing. Those are just some opinions I have based on what I've played so far.

 

[yobnis13]

Nice renders, this could be an interesting game

 

[max.smith1987]

Interesting characters, look foward to seeing more of them