4 Years of Service
Well the sex scenes were hot... But it just it all just feels very rushed. It's a little disappointing since the first season was great.
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4 Years of Service
It could be one of the best out there, but the last Season makes sure it isn't
I have to agree with the comments, I think it is overall still a very decent game, not "bad" as it may seem only reading comments about the ending, but it did start out fantastic and ended veryweak. "Ah well, they will be angry if they don't get the smol girl, so lets just tack it on in a Ending slide"... I can overlook the horrible design of the kids that are just one slide or the Ending for Delilah, even tho that is clearly not what any player would have wanted (sometimes you dont get what you want xD)... but the rushing of the end and the treatment of the smallest? No sorry, that IS a bad and rushed end, just because it has some really hot scenes with the smalles and preggo girls doesn't change that.
Season 1 was in my "Download as soon as a update is there" while Season 3 ended up in my "Maybe take a look when its done", honestly a miracle that I did download and play already
Now, I don't know the mentioned game before this I think? And I do still overall like this one, it is decent, as said, still better then the average AVN, so I have hope for a good new game of the Dev and will take a look once it comes out. All of this is really a "this is a bad end", not a "this is a horrible game" thing.
2 Years of Service
Nice! Personally more a fan of young teens over smols, so looking forward to see it.
3 Years of Service
You've come long way from the start Goosenards.
If I may give my 2 dimes on potential future. But first of all - congratulations on completing the story!
For future projects, If I may have a healthy suggestion.
It would be really nice for sex scenes in future games to have an actual dialogue. As in two people talking, talking dirty. Whatever suits.
Instead of the system you have currently where you make a slideshow and thats how the scene ends.
Most people play the games for these scenes. For them to start and end so abruptly can be rather anticlimactic.
Additionally, take your time man. Deliver sizable updates. I know it on surface seems like a nice deal to get a game update every month or two. But when each update lasts 10 minutes, it... leaves a bitter taste in mouth.
Best person to take example from would be seath black. 3-4 month cycles for projects. Consistent updates. Big chunk of scenes and progress every time. All you need is to keep people busy and show you are in fact working on it. People understand.
Either way, I wish you good luck in future projects. Will be here keeping an eye on it!
If I may give my 2 dimes on potential future. But first of all - congratulations on completing the story!
For future projects, If I may have a healthy suggestion.
It would be really nice for sex scenes in future games to have an actual dialogue. As in two people talking, talking dirty. Whatever suits.
Instead of the system you have currently where you make a slideshow and thats how the scene ends.
Most people play the games for these scenes. For them to start and end so abruptly can be rather anticlimactic.
Additionally, take your time man. Deliver sizable updates. I know it on surface seems like a nice deal to get a game update every month or two. But when each update lasts 10 minutes, it... leaves a bitter taste in mouth.
Best person to take example from would be seath black. 3-4 month cycles for projects. Consistent updates. Big chunk of scenes and progress every time. All you need is to keep people busy and show you are in fact working on it. People understand.
Either way, I wish you good luck in future projects. Will be here keeping an eye on it!
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Sadly, I must agree with the most comments - great start, huge potential, rushed ending.
3 Years of Service
I agree with many of the comments above.
Season 1 was a pretty good start.
Season 2 was more for the story but not fulfilling.
Season 3 was rushed with sex scenes to complete the game.
The models, scenes and everything involving graphics are really good and I enjoyed them.
The biggest problem was the storytelling and I think that's where most of the critique comes from. The chapters were to short to tell a good story (no deepdiving) thus it feels like you click through the game, read some lines of text, watch the sex scenes and done.
There are other short story games where you don't expect a big story but sex scenes. This game had potential to be more.
In the end - mixed feelings.
Still, congratulations on finishing your game Goosenards! I'm really curious about the next game (the 3models are looking great).
One more thing: I loved the older version of Paisy! But there is one thing with her and Kayleigh - I hope I saw correctly that both of them have a lip piercing (one madonna, one monroe). Honest question: Are there really people out there who think that those piercings look good? Where I am coming from you see those piercings on dumb girls, sluts and others in that category^^ So from my POV the piercings are a big downgrade in attractiveness.
The other piercings are okay.
Season 1 was a pretty good start.
Season 2 was more for the story but not fulfilling.
Season 3 was rushed with sex scenes to complete the game.
The models, scenes and everything involving graphics are really good and I enjoyed them.
The biggest problem was the storytelling and I think that's where most of the critique comes from. The chapters were to short to tell a good story (no deepdiving) thus it feels like you click through the game, read some lines of text, watch the sex scenes and done.
There are other short story games where you don't expect a big story but sex scenes. This game had potential to be more.
In the end - mixed feelings.
Still, congratulations on finishing your game Goosenards! I'm really curious about the next game (the 3models are looking great).
One more thing: I loved the older version of Paisy! But there is one thing with her and Kayleigh - I hope I saw correctly that both of them have a lip piercing (one madonna, one monroe). Honest question: Are there really people out there who think that those piercings look good? Where I am coming from you see those piercings on dumb girls, sluts and others in that category^^ So from my POV the piercings are a big downgrade in attractiveness.
The other piercings are okay.
3 Years of Service
Yeah, the first Season was the only really promising part to me that felt like a "Game". Season 2 already felt like a big step backwards from a Choice based VN to a Kinetic VN and at the same Time the Story got worse and felt rushed and incomplete. Season 3 continued the bad traits from S2 and even doubled down in the "fuck the Story" department. In the end, to me, the only interesting thing left about the "Game" where the Animations, that looked really good, but not good enough to ignore all the other problems the Game had.
3 Years of Service
It's nice and imersive to see models that actualy look like teenagers.
4 Years of Service
I see and appreciate everyone's thoughts on the game as a whole, and I don't disagree with a lot of you.
The reasoning behind it is not a secret, in fact I've been quite open about it throughout the dev process here, on discord and on my substar page. This was my first full solo project, my initial ambition was far greater than my ability. If I had stuck to my original plan for the story, it would've ended being (at least) twice as long, with more side characters and stories affecting the cast, but by the end of season one I knew if I wanted to keep that plan that I would end up spending years on developing it, and I just didn't want to do that. As it is, All three seasons sucked just about all of my free time up in the year it took to develop (which is minimal as I usually work 50-60 hours per week). I haven't even finished BG3 yet because I've spent so much time on this!
Good news is RC was a great lesson in time-management and improving my workflow as a dev. I don't like to quit things, in my opinion a rushed ending is better than no ending, so that's what I did. And by rushed ending I still mean sinking months of work into a project I knew I couldn't really finish the way I truly wanted to. I understand it's not ideal, but what really is?
All in all it was a great experience for me; To my awesome fans and supporters, I truly appreciate all your kind words and encouragement, and I look forward to continue making smut for both your, and my pleasure.
The reasoning behind it is not a secret, in fact I've been quite open about it throughout the dev process here, on discord and on my substar page. This was my first full solo project, my initial ambition was far greater than my ability. If I had stuck to my original plan for the story, it would've ended being (at least) twice as long, with more side characters and stories affecting the cast, but by the end of season one I knew if I wanted to keep that plan that I would end up spending years on developing it, and I just didn't want to do that. As it is, All three seasons sucked just about all of my free time up in the year it took to develop (which is minimal as I usually work 50-60 hours per week). I haven't even finished BG3 yet because I've spent so much time on this!
Good news is RC was a great lesson in time-management and improving my workflow as a dev. I don't like to quit things, in my opinion a rushed ending is better than no ending, so that's what I did. And by rushed ending I still mean sinking months of work into a project I knew I couldn't really finish the way I truly wanted to. I understand it's not ideal, but what really is?
All in all it was a great experience for me; To my awesome fans and supporters, I truly appreciate all your kind words and encouragement, and I look forward to continue making smut for both your, and my pleasure.
2 Years of Service
I think a lot of people especially didn't like the Delilah part. It made the rushed ending somewhat sad. Well her and the Paisy fans were pretty unhappy. Thanks for being upfront with what's going on with you and I can see you do have talent so good luck in your future endeavors.I see and appreciate everyone's thoughts on the game as a whole, and I don't disagree with a lot of you.
The reasoning behind it is not a secret, in fact I've been quite open about it throughout the dev process here, on discord and on my substar page. This was my first full solo project, my initial ambition was far greater than my ability. If I had stuck to my original plan for the story, it would've ended being (at least) twice as long, with more side characters and stories affecting the cast, but by the end of season one I knew if I wanted to keep that plan that I would end up spending years on developing it, and I just didn't want to do that. As it is, All three seasons sucked just about all of my free time up in the year it took to develop (which is minimal as I usually work 50-60 hours per week). I haven't even finished BG3 yet because I've spent so much time on this!
Good news is RC was a great lesson in time-management and improving my workflow as a dev. I don't like to quit things, in my opinion a rushed ending is better than no ending, so that's what I did. And by rushed ending I still mean sinking months of work into a project I knew I couldn't really finish the way I truly wanted to. I understand it's not ideal, but what really is?
All in all it was a great experience for me; To my awesome fans and supporters, I truly appreciate all your kind words and encouragement, and I look forward to continue making smut for both your, and my pleasure.
3 Years of Service
I feel like half of this game is one of my favorite avn's i've ever played and then the rest is a bit of a bummer. I don't wanna just complain because the dev put in a ton of hard work. The girls were sexy, the horny scenes were great. Seriously the first half was incredible. I feel like it would have come out better if it was just a story about a family exploring their desires and kinks, the cult didn't really amount to anything and the ending did feel rushed. Maybe instead of the cult we got more after the time jump.
Still though, loved a lot of what's here, looking forward to the next game.
Still though, loved a lot of what's here, looking forward to the next game.
3 Years of Service
Final? With completed tag?I see and appreciate everyone's thoughts on the game as a whole, and I don't disagree with a lot of you.
The reasoning behind it is not a secret, in fact I've been quite open about it throughout the dev process here, on discord and on my substar page. This was my first full solo project, my initial ambition was far greater than my ability. If I had stuck to my original plan for the story, it would've ended being (at least) twice as long, with more side characters and stories affecting the cast, but by the end of season one I knew if I wanted to keep that plan that I would end up spending years on developing it, and I just didn't want to do that. As it is, All three seasons sucked just about all of my free time up in the year it took to develop (which is minimal as I usually work 50-60 hours per week). I haven't even finished BG3 yet because I've spent so much time on this!
Good news is RC was a great lesson in time-management and improving my workflow as a dev. I don't like to quit things, in my opinion a rushed ending is better than no ending, so that's what I did. And by rushed ending I still mean sinking months of work into a project I knew I couldn't really finish the way I truly wanted to. I understand it's not ideal, but what really is?
All in all it was a great experience for me; To my awesome fans and supporters, I truly appreciate all your kind words and encouragement, and I look forward to continue making smut for both your, and my pleasure.
Oh no!
This is one of the few VNs I started new, with each update.
I hope @Goosenards has something else in the pipeline. (After a well deserved vacation)
*Beavis* huh huh.... smut
2 Years of Service
Looks pretty good. I just need now a mod to remove the Mc face and change the girls age! Pretty please :3
3 Years of Service
Paisly having teased content from almost the very first update in the game, only to have that shit milked to death and get one disappointing as fuck scene at the end of the game was such a massive, massive disappointment. Its shit like that that will honestly get me to just ignore devs completely.
I will just never understand the decision to skip over her content and have 400x more content with the daughters shitty ass girlfriend.
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