discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ Origin Story [S2 v0.9.3] [JDOR]

[nlh]

gonna give a try

 

[allkaida007]

Keep up the good work. Love the renders

 

[red baron]

ohhh this looks interesting. how is the story and what's the setting? is it post apocalyptic or horror genre type?

 

[soawarhorse]

CG looks incredible i am downloading now thank you for sharing

 

[Insig]

After reading reviews i have no idea what the game has in it for me

 

[supermario272]

No android port sadly

 

[Nomadius]

I'm not here for a debate, I just want to know if the NTR is 100% optional/avoidable as it it didn't happen and you can prevent it?

And by NTR I mean any other penis going beer any of the girls regardless of context it circumstances... It doesn't matter if she was a LI at the time or not of if she was a victim or assault I still view it all the same.

So can I play the whole game with only MC penis or is the NYT not avoidable?

 

[hrmm]

I'm not here for a debate, I just want to know if the NTR is 100% optional/avoidable as it it didn't happen and you can prevent it?

And by NTR I mean any other penis going beer any of the girls regardless of context it circumstances... It doesn't matter if she was a LI at the time or not of if she was a victim or assault I still view it all the same.

So can I play the whole game with only MC penis or is the NYT not avoidable?

I'd probably steer clear of this game, then. I haven't played the latest version, but so far the only real NTR is the Parker/waiter thing (see my post on the first page for details) and it is avoidable. That said, the game is filled with "not really NTR" stuff that will none-the-less rub NTR haters the wrong way.

A bit (or a lot, didn't mean to write this much) of extra clarification in the spoiler:

Spoiler

First read my post on the first page of the thread. Ready? Okay. I haven't played the newest version yet (or possibly ever), but judging from what's been said about it, a few details of the Parker/waiter thing were apparently changed. The line about her having a guy over every few days was changed so that her having guys over was less frequent. And I guess she moans the MC's name now when she's masturbating in the bathroom on the non-voyeurism route. Not really sure how that changes all that much; she still gets hot and bothered by the waiter, she still ditches the MC at his birthday dinner to go rub one out or get eaten out. The dev just seems really hellbent on keeping this scene even though all it does is show what a trash love interest Parker is.

For another example of the "not really NTR", let's talk about Evelyn, who I mentioned in the post about Parker. She and the MC are best friends, and they have a pact to lose their virginity to each other. Evelyn's superpower is the sticking part about this though. If she touches someone, when she goes to sleep that night she can experience their entire tomorrow (so, seeing the future) from their point of view, including all the various sensations of touch/taste/etc. that they feel. And apparently she has done this a lot, with the purpose of experiencing sex (supposedly so she'd have some experience for her first time with the MC). In the other site's thread, defenders of this will claim that people getting upset about this is like a wife getting upset at her husband for having a sex dream about her friend or whatever. Which, sure that's fair... the first handful of times that Evelyn did it before she realized what was happening. Once she started seeking it out, then it was more analagous to that husband finding out that his wife's friend did some VR porn videos and watching it on his headset while fucking a real doll or something, except even more realistic than that.

The people that are bugged by this, but haven't yet been driven away by it, are essentially waiting to see if Evelyn keeps doing it even after she and the MC start being together. Some people are pessimistic about it though, because of some of Evelyn's other comments that make her seem like she's not really all that devoted to the MC. An example would be when Parker is getting ready to go to a fancy party, wearing a sexy dress (with no panties). Eve asks who the lucky guy is, and Parker says "Guys." Eve says (paraphrasing) "Woah, I like your style." Parker then clarifies that she's just going to be schmoozing to get research funding (and using her looks/sensuality to tip the scales in her favor). But Eve didn't know that when she made her comment.

 

[Nomadius]

I'd probably steer clear of this game, then. I haven't played the latest version, but so far the only real NTR is the Parker/waiter thing (see my post on the first page for details) and it is avoidable. That said, the game is filled with "not really NTR" stuff that will none-the-less rub NTR haters the wrong way.

A bit (or a lot, didn't mean to write this much) of extra clarification in the spoiler:

Spoiler

First read my post on the first page of the thread. Ready? Okay. I haven't played the newest version yet (or possibly ever), but judging from what's been said about it, a few details of the Parker/waiter thing were apparently changed. The line about her having a guy over every few days was changed so that her having guys over was less frequent. And I guess she moans the MC's name now when she's masturbating in the bathroom on the non-voyeurism route. Not really sure how that changes all that much; she still gets hot and bothered by the waiter, she still ditches the MC at his birthday dinner to go rub one out or get eaten out. The dev just seems really hellbent on keeping this scene even though all it does is show what a trash love interest Parker is.

For another example of the "not really NTR", let's talk about Evelyn, who I mentioned in the post about Parker. She and the MC are best friends, and they have a pact to lose their virginity to each other. Evelyn's superpower is the sticking part about this though. If she touches someone, when she goes to sleep that night she can experience their entire tomorrow (so, seeing the future) from their point of view, including all the various sensations of touch/taste/etc. that they feel. And apparently she has done this a lot, with the purpose of experiencing sex (supposedly so she'd have some experience for her first time with the MC). In the other site's thread, defenders of this will claim that people getting upset about this is like a wife getting upset at her husband for having a sex dream about her friend or whatever. Which, sure that's fair... the first handful of times that Evelyn did it before she realized what was happening. Once she started seeking it out, then it was more analagous to that husband finding out that his wife's friend did some VR porn videos and watching it on his headset while fucking a real doll or something, except even more realistic than that.

The people that are bugged by this, but haven't yet been driven away by it, are essentially waiting to see if Evelyn keeps doing it even after she and the MC start being together. Some people are pessimistic about it though, because of some of Evelyn's other comments that make her seem like she's not really all that devoted to the MC. An example would be when Parker is getting ready to go to a fancy party, wearing a sexy dress (with no panties). Eve asks who the lucky guy is, and Parker says "Guys." Eve says (paraphrasing) "Woah, I like your style." Parker then clarifies that she's just going to be schmoozing to get research funding (and using her looks/sensuality to tip the scales in her favor). But Eve didn't know that when she made her comment.

Yeah thanks for pointing me to your first post and clarifying stuff for me.... Yeah this is sadly a game I would avoid, I don't have an issue with girl in girl if it mutual and the other girl isn't trying to be some boss birch trying to steal her away but that's a different game apparently.

The fact that there are these weird off handed comments by parker and eves actions really do steer towards the controversial shit I don't like for sure.

By the sounds of it the Dev doesn't know the Harem fans/NTR haters... It seems like the dev is basically just dropping hints that NTR is happening in the background but we just don't know if because the MC himself doesn't hear or see so we also don't hear or see unless you pick that voyeurism path.
If you don't pick the voyerism path it still sounds Sus like the MC saying it's her playing with her dildos sound like he just doesn't fully know what's happening because he hasn't peeked so he has made an assumption.

The eve girl doing that super power shit sounds like a crap excuse too because most guys myself included don't care about a girl having experience and we rather they don't because we would have more fun teaching them what we like instead and yeah a girl can have a past in my opinion as long as I don't have to see or hear about it like okay you've dated before and your not a virgin but we don't want a character who gets around like a trailer park lot lizard.

Overall it sounds like shitty writing and no real passion behind the character or story and it's mostly just to earn an income... I swear so many Devs these days are so our of touch with what NTR haters like or dislike and half the NTR games don't even please the NTR Lovers because they want to hurt or some bullshit, NTR lovers I don't think care for smut for the sake of it, they don't want a random gangbang but they want some build up to make the betrayal all that more dramatic or something.


Yeah I don't mind lon replies and thank you, I've decided to avoid this and maybe... Just maybe I'll come and see if anything has changed when the game is labelled "Complete"

 

[brimal12343]

Best superhero VN game I've played. Top notch renders and girls.

 

[GrouseZero]

One of the good ones. Was blown away when I tried this one a few days ago. Great renders, exiting characters. I liked the story and dialogue. At one point I felt bad because of a choice and had to double back to an old save to make "the right choice".

 

[AllyFlower32]

Looks cute

 

[userloser80]

I'm excited to play this one for the first time. The renderings of the women looks like it will be great! Thanks

 

[jjansen]

looks interesting and i do like super powers

 

[Coomflation]

Neat character models.

 

[jamjam]

Awesome renders, my only issues with this so far is the way the story does a lot of flashbacks with the "remember" scenes instead of moving the plot along

I look forward to next release

 

[C0smicShadøw]

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Overview:
Taking place twenty years after the Metagen-92 virus – aka the “Superflu” – has swept the world and rendered many of its adult population superpowered or mutated, Origin Story follows MC (name customizable), a seemingly normal nineteen-year-old struggling with his social status and his virginity, who is shunned by his peers due to his ability not yet manifesting. After the death of his parents when he was just a baby, he was raised by their close friend Parker Samson, an influential and beautiful woman who is now the co-owner of the lead organization behind Metagen research and development of the Metagen Vaccine.

Spoiler: More:

When MC is targeted and violently attacked for reasons unknown to him, The Sisterhood – a government-backed team of celebrity superheroines and sex icons - comes to his aid. While under their care, his ability manifests and MC finds himself juggling his school life with an ability he must keep secret, his family, a blossoming relationship with his best friend and girl-next-door Evelyn and his involvement with The Sisterhood. MC soon finds himself on the path to determine whether this is the origin story of a hero, or a villain.

Spoiler: Genre:

3dcg, anal sex, big tits, creampie, exhibitionism, graphic violence, groping, group sex, humor, interracial, lesbian, male domination, male protagonist, masturbation, milf, oral sex, point & click, school setting, spanking, superpowers, titfuck, vaginal sex, virgin, voyeurism

Spoiler: Installation:

1 - Extract and run.

Spoiler: Changelog:

v0.3.0 CH3
*Voyeurism mode renamed to "safe mode".
*Warning for safe mode now occurs before starting the game.

Amendments To Previous Chapters:
*Voyeurism warning no longer comes up in conversation during cafeteria conversation with Fraser.
*Other minor rewrites to opening cafeteria scene.
*Rewrites to the controversial restroom scene.
*Parker's level of nymph toned down a tad.
*Due to my naivety on Patreon's community guidelines, some significant changes to the backstory of MC and his relationship with Parker & Riley.
*Some small rewrites in other scenes in line with the changes of family dynamic (freeroam, memories, conversation with Moonsong).
*Spanking sound effect added to Emerald lewd scene.
*Swallowing sound effect added to Moonsong lewd scene 2.
*Scene where MC & Moonsong accidentally witness another student in threesome now only visible with safe mode off.
*On Screen checklist of recommended/required tasks during the CH1 & CH2 freeroam events.

New features:
*Character profiles menu added.
*Character "special render" galleries added (Lady Steel Gallery intentionally empty)

Chapter 3:
649 renders

v0.2.0 CH.2
CH1 Updates:
*Rewrites and extra lines of narration into the introduction scene (1 extra render).
*Additional content added to MC's TV during the freeroaming section. (56 renders)
*Fap scene now skippable.
*Some typos and grammar errors fixed.

CH2:
Renders: 794

v0.1.0 CH.1
Initial release

Spoiler: Developer Notes:

I am a very new developer, and just one guy, with no experience in either Ren’Py or Daz until roughly a year before work on Origin Story began. I spent much of that year learning both, and my skills have improved significantly, but I’m certainly not up there with the big boys of AVNs yet. So as much as I would like it to be, Origin Story will not be an all singing and dancing technical marvel with complex mechanics, GUIs and affection systems. It will instead be a somewhat linear story but for some exceptions and alternate paths.
As a new developer, and one who has already written twenty chapters of this, I wanted to address some concerns or criticisms players may have about my AVN or upcoming content in advance.
So here we go…

Planned Tags for future chapters
BDSM, Footjob, Harem, Female domination, Multiple penetration.

Kinetic Novel/Lack of player choice
If basing your option on the first few chapters, you’d be forgiven for thinking Origin Story is a kinetic novel because of the small number of choices the player can make. I promise you, it isn’t, but it will take some time for this to be clear. For reasons I cannot explain without spoiling the whole plot, the very nature of the story requires the MC to be forced through certain events and interactions with characters.
In the earlier chapters of the game, there is some smaller choices which will result in a few alternate scenes depending on the choice made. However, significant choices will start to occur more in the future. This will take some time so please stick with it.

Forced Love Interests
Again, I cannot explain why without spoiling the plot, but the MC will be forced to have some sexual interaction with one particular character (or maybe two, depending on a choice). However, once the MC has had their moment with this character(s), all interactions with them in the future will be optional. All other love interests will be entirely optional.

Animation
This may be a dealbreaker for some, but it is what it is. There are currently no animated scenes (well… maybe one and you’ll see exactly why). I have tried it, and so far, I am useless at it. I have played far too many AVNs that would have been decent but for the terrible animations that ruin the overall quality of the package, and until I am better, I do not want Origin Story to be considered among them.
So, at present, all lewd scenes are comprised of static renders only. I do intend to practice and get better at it, but it is so time consuming I cannot completely focus on this under the limited time I have to work on Origin Story. If this ever gains enough traction and supporters to allow me more time to work on this, then by all means I will be putting a lot of focus on improving my animation skills until its good enough to start retroactively replacing static renders with animation.

Freeroaming
THIS IS NOT A SANDBOX GAME, however, there will be some free roaming sections within the story, however, these will be sporadic and not too involved. The first freeroam section in Chapter 1 contains roughly 45 minutes of backstory and lore, so I highly recommend exploring it fully.

Music & Sound
There is both music and sound effects in the story. Some of them, however, I am considering as placeholders until I find something better, or maybe even commission some in the future. One can dream.

Update/Release Schedule
So far I have been maintaining a release schedule of 2-3 months per chapter. Hopefully this can continue.

Lesbian content
There will be lesbian content, however, it will all be optional and alternate content will take its place if opted out.

Gay/Bi Male content
There is no planned gay or bi (on the male side) content.

Futa/Trans content
There is no planned futa/trans content.

“Fake harem”
As mentioned, the nature of the story requires the MC to interact with a number of different LIs. So by definition this game will be a “harem game”. However, these girls will also have some fun with each other (if girl on girl content is enabled). So, you’d be correct in labelling it a “fake harem” game, and I’m absolutely fine with that because that is the kind of story I want to tell.

Is there any NTR/cuckolding?
No, there is no NTR in the textbook definition of it, and most certainly no cuckolding. However, while there are some minor scenes showing female characters interacting with other male characters, these are rare and the majority of these do not involve LI characters, though full disclosure, one extremely brief scene does.
Regardless, Origin Story comes with a warning and the ability to play in Safe Mode for those who may define such content as NTR (no matter how minor it is), or simply just don't wish to see other male characters having fun. Safe mode removes these rare scenes and either replace them with alternate content, or removes them entirely if they do not serve the story. However, I would recommend playing in default mode for the story as I intended it because - I will stress again - these scenes are extremely rare and not the focus of the game.

Anal sex/ass play content
All anal sex content is optional.
There will also be ass-play and rimming (both giving and receiving) content. Again, these will only become available if the player has opted into the anal content in the first place, and then both giving and receiving content are separate optional content because some people might be open to sticking their dick in an ass but not their tongue. Some people might like sticking their tongue in an ass, but not having one in theirs. You get the picture.

BDSM/Femdom Content
There will eventually be some BDSM and femdom content in the game, but both of these will be completely optional (and some will have alternate content if you opt out).
The BDSM will not be particularly hard – there’ll be some cuffs, chains, spanking, paddling, clamps & gags. But no severe pain because that’s not my bag.
The femdom is not particularly hard either – Just some light cuffing, foot worship, face-sitting, edging, degradation, and submission. There is no pegging or anal play on the MC’s part or anything else like that.

Incest Patch
For the love of all that is holy, if one ever becomes available, please do not incest patch Origin Story. It is vital to the plot that the MC is NOT related by blood to Parker and Riley. If you do this you will completely ruin the story, and you won’t know why for a long time. But then finally a chapter release will come, and you will think “shit – well this incest patch makes no sense anymore.”
Even the very basic premise of the game renders an incest patch nonsense. The MC is awaiting the manifestation of his power. Parker does not have powers because she was vaccinated. The MC cannot be expecting powers if he comes from a vaccinated mother. Plus, there is also the mystery of what happened to the MC’s actual parents.

Why did you do this/that? Why is a character or the MC this way?
This is in response to pretty much 90% of the criticism I have gotten so far but I can't answer them without spoiling the future. And as frustrating as it is, and much as I want to spoil things to nip that criticism in the bud, I would much rather things unfold naturally as they should for the sake of those who enjoy the story without being spoon-fed.
All I can say is, bear in mind that I have written 20 chapters of Origin Story already. I plan incredibly far in advance. I foreshadow... a lot. I make characters do things for reasons that might not be revealed until 15 chapters in. Nearly everything I do is intentional. I don't make certain characters super horny because "porn game", I do it for a reason. If you don't like a particular character because of a certain thing they have done or a way they act, maybe something will happen in the future that will make you thing "oh... I probably shouldn't have been mad about that". Maybe sometimes things are not always as they seem.
Please just bear with me and don't write it off because of one particular character's behaviour, because you might be wrong about it. Just saying.

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It says Android is one of the download options, but there's no Android link???

 

[User_48642]

It says Android is one of the download options, but there's no Android link???

Probably a leftover from when there was an Android port in the OP. Edited it to fit with what's actually available, thanks.

 

[purplerat]

Look at these renders!

 

[Fla24xxx]

Superheroine harem is a must see, gonna take a look