Hey! WTF man?
Tom not even one time hit but MC whines what "my ribs hurt where Tom hits me" - what a liar?!!!
or is it a forever rule "no plot without a idiot or even a pussy" heh?
again, the author's forgetfulness - who loves whom, who kisses whom...
the whole plot collapses because of this, by the way!
EDIT: wait a minute! they drinking beer? WTF man?
EDIT2: GAME OVER
plot is good.
but Stabby Mike - imba!!! he jumps like imp from the box in right moment in right place and save the plot with many plotholes. need to alternative name to VN "Mike saves the world"