discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ My New Father [v0.1.4.8 Preliminary] [Diego]

[drcstack]

Judging by the comments this does not seem worth the try...

 

[lillo]

Judging by the comments this does not seem worth the try...

Visually-wise renders are nice, the problem (at least as far as I'm concerned) is the plot being a bit disconnected...I'm not opposed to intricate plots, as long as I at least understand what's going on...I'd advise you to give this a shot and decide if to keep on following this or not

 

[drcstack]

Visually-wise renders are nice, the problem (at least as far as I'm concerned) is the plot being a bit disconnected...I'm not opposed to intricate plots, as long as I at least understand what's going on...I'd advise you to give this a shot and decide if to keep on following this or not

Idk. Sometimes the plot is even more important than the renders to me (sometimes) I like getting immersed in a good story especially with great build up. According to you and many more this doesn't have that. Good Renders are necessary, but I'll lose interest if scenes aren't good along with a decent story. Are there at least any good spicy scenes? Also this has lesbian ntr?

 

[lillo]

Idk. Sometimes the plot is even more important than the renders to me (sometimes) I like getting immersed in a good story especially with great build up. According to you and many more this doesn't have that. Good Renders are necessary, but I'll lose interest if scenes aren't good along with a decent story. Are there at least any good spicy scenes? Also this has lesbian ntr?

I agree with you about the importance on the plot Exactly, the problem with this one is that you basically are thrown scenes in your face that make little sense in the main plot without a proper explanation...for what concerns spicy scenes, there's a couple not bad ones with sm0ls, no LNTR that I've seen

 

[maximus]

very little content, story mostly just a bunch of POV conspiracy bits. oh, and no options.. only one choice in the game and the option you get is a non-option where only one choice progress story.

 

[Uh nona miss]

Welp, Ik a korean made this game lol. 1 word and i knew :') i love it!

 

[ExiledBurger]

Judging by the comments this does not seem worth the try...

Putting my previously stated thoughts aside, I think it does have potential.
It certainly does need a little more time to develop properly.

Just noticed it's google translated into English so, if someone in the community or elsewhere could provide translation edits, that would help a lot as well for better story flow.

 

[cdvbtgnyew]

Mac Version?

 

[korochan48]

One of those that really don't last gets abandoned early or stays on limbo. Its better to make short quality loli avn so devs can garner subs then make their desired project.

 

[Nikt_Wazny]

As an empathetic person I always try to empathize with the MC but here I can't. This is too stupid. The dialogues ARE there and that's all I can say about them. The game has a lot of letters but they don't form anything constructive.

Spoiler alert:

Spoiler: spoiler

At the beginning we have the MC and a girl with trauma. Her father beat her, her mother beat her and that's why she ran away from home. Such a person always has problems with trust but instead we have "trust at first sight". It doesn't take a day and the girl trusts the MC, after two days they are already sleeping together in the same bed, after three days there is already a romantic interest. The author definitely doesn't know what trauma is. Is it a big problem to write in the game:

"- We've been together for two weeks when Sofi first spoke to me and finally told me her name. Sofi is a beautiful name. I know she's been through some trauma, and that she'll be opening up to me for a very long time, but I feel that it's worth investing every free moment in this little angel just to put a smile on her face."

Two, we have an MC who says he'll give the girl time and then pressures her to tell everything, acting like an asshole.

I came to the conclusion that the developer wanted to spend a lot of game time building a relationship between the MC and the girl but didn't know how to do it, so most of the dialogue revolves around the girl's trauma.

 

[Beduin123]

As an empathetic person I always try to empathize with the MC but here I can't. This is too stupid. The dialogues ARE there and that's all I can say about them. The game has a lot of letters but they don't form anything constructive.

Spoiler alert:

Spoiler: spoiler

At the beginning we have the MC and a girl with trauma. Her father beat her, her mother beat her and that's why she ran away from home. Such a person always has problems with trust but instead we have "trust at first sight". It doesn't take a day and the girl trusts the MC, after two days they are already sleeping together in the same bed, after three days there is already a romantic interest. The author definitely doesn't know what trauma is. Is it a big problem to write in the game:

"- We've been together for two weeks when Sofi first spoke to me and finally told me her name. Sofi is a beautiful name. I know she's been through some trauma, and that she'll be opening up to me for a very long time, but I feel that it's worth investing every free moment in this little angel just to put a smile on her face."

Two, we have an MC who says he'll give the girl time and then pressures her to tell everything, acting like an asshole.

I came to the conclusion that the developer wanted to spend a lot of game time building a relationship between the MC and the girl but didn't know how to do it, so most of the dialogue revolves around the girl's trauma.

Good analysis. I found the same kind of cringey writing in Found in Translation where the situation is somehow similar.

Unfortunately, good writing is the rarest kink in the world of AVNs.

 

[justaguyhere]

One of those that really don't last gets abandoned early or stays on limbo. Its better to make short quality loli avn so devs can garner subs then make their desired project.

If only we could get some more quality long ones.

 

[Galat]

If only we could get some more quality long ones.

thank you so much

 

[justaguyhere]

Keep

thank you so much.

YW. Keep it up. I see so much potential and I yearn for more.

 

[Double07]

Well that was quick.

 

[0bora]

It started decent and understandable but at some point it turned into a Daddy's Angel
I could not understand much from the plot An now is discontinued. That is just wonderful !

 

[goregames]

It started decent and understandable but at some point it turned into a Daddy's Angel
I could not understand much from the plot An now is discontinued. That is just wonderful !

Wow, thanks!

 

[jbartendgod]

Wow, thanks!

Ignore them. I still love ya!!!

 

[ontach]

In India and Pakistan, the word galat means wrong. Go figure.

 

[adavi]

So from what I understand it has too many branches but before we could get to the tree it got abandoned, was it abandoned because of too many branches and the dev got lost of how to make it all connect back to each other