discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ Midlife Crisis [v0.36.2 - v0.1 Dark] [Nefastus/Farwest AVNS]

[FarwestStudios]

Mostly changes to the models and writing tone not being consistent with previous characterizations. I'm sure others can have more direct feedback,
but changing the models is a big one.

I'm using all the actual models straight from Nef, the only one I took liberties with was the MC, but even he was the OG model before I tweaked him. I did adjust Amanda's and Christine's skin tone a bit to breathe life into them, but they are the exact same models I promise you. As for writing tone, yeah... Sadly, I will never be him, but I'm still sticking to the same plot points and conversations Nef and I worked out from the beginning. If anything, he just isn't here to take my input and filter it through he's own thoughts like before. I'll be the first to say, that he gave it the heart that is probably missing now... I never was the sentimental one... I mostly just helped with jokes and sex scenes. I never promised it would be perfectly the same as people remember, I just want to get us to the finish line as close in tone as I am able to... I'll continue to take feedback and make adjustments as needed. Luckily, we had worked out all the key moments between here and there before he left us.

 

[jaysin]

i dont understand the negative comments ive seen. This is really good. Looking forward to the next update.

 

[javyon]

I'm using all the actual models straight from Nef, the only one I took liberties with was the MC, but even he was the OG model before I tweaked him. I did adjust Amanda's and Christine's skin tone a bit to breathe life into them, but they are the exact same models I promise you. As for writing tone, yeah... Sadly, I will never be him, but I'm still sticking to the same plot points and conversations Nef and I worked out from the beginning. If anything, he just isn't here to take my input and filter it through he's own thoughts like before. I'll be the first to say, that he gave it the heart that is probably missing now... I never was the sentimental one... I mostly just helped with jokes and sex scenes. I never promised it would be perfectly the same as people remember, I just want to get us to the finish line as close in tone as I am able to... I'll continue to take feedback and make adjustments as needed. Luckily, we had worked out all the key moments between here and there before he left us.

I for one thank you immensely for trying to finish the work of a friend.
I was always under the impression that it would feel different in many hard to describe ways, and it does, but for me not in a way that would make not support you moving forward.

I would say that in the original writing there was more teasing and a sense that the acts need be hidden, that added a sense of the taboo that is clearly enjoyed by incest lovers. It is possible that since you are picking up so late into the story that you might feel everyone is at the just fucking and having fun stage. If so i would try add some sense of the taboo back with the newer characters or when the mom gets involved directly with the daughters.

All the best and good luck pushing through the neigh sayers

 

[Republican Bear]

Please, elaborate? I do welcome feedback as long as it's civil and at least tries to offer a better solution to the issues.

Nothing to bad just the way the characters interact, and the writing it just feels different.

Just my opinion though and in the end really doesn't matter.

 

[XFGlassial]

Thank you so much for pickup the game and continuing. Its increasingly becoming a rarity that a game actually gets to hold a good amount of content.

 

[Ama02]

We’re happy about the update—it took just two or 3 years to achieve the same end result (well, maybe with one extra scene).

 

[Dubbie]

I can't believe the new dev did Tracy like that. Off screen, too.