discussion VN Ren'Py VAM Let Me In 3D [0.03 Reworked] [DarkNirvana]

[DSmith]

im sorry but this rework needs a rerework,

she was sound asleep, curled up under the covers..... picture shows a giant girl lying across the bed on top of everything

also, you really need to look at how you're sizing her, there is nothing in the story hinting at her being a giant, but in almost all pictures she is drasticly larger than a small girl should be,

girl on a bed 1½person bed (sorry don't know what you call that size in english), she reaches from side to side
girl in a door frame, she is far too large
girl on sofa, again same problem, she is out of proportion against the sofa,
and again girl in door frame, she looks like a giant

Yeah, she needs to be about half that size.

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

I believe the developer just recently started with VAM and now with Renpy.
Good job so far and it should only improve.

 

[jfive77]

is there no way to resize the game?

 

[1213grilz]

Too bad this is a crash fest on android. The models are pretty cute.

 

[maestromancer]

Great to see this remade in Renpy. Just as good as before but such a nice quality of life boost. Thanks for that, looking forward to more

 

[lewdlove]

Tried download from Kraken,Mixdrop and VIkingfile, all flagged by Chrome

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

Animations aren't playing for me, on PC version. Just black screens with dialogue between the still images. :/

 

[DSmith]

Animations aren't playing for me, on PC version. Just black screens with dialogue between the still images. :/

Did you mute everything? It's cropped up on other games where muting the sound breaks the animations somehow. Try setting the sound to 1% or something and seeing if the animations work then. I haven't downloaded this yet, waiting for the models not to have gigantism.

 

[NotLooking]

By what I'm reading of her scaled size, she's not actually a loli but instead a 6'8" "flat is justice" warrior? 23yr old WNBA or pro swimming champion?

 

[i_patchy]

Non of the links work for me.

 

[Kurupted]

Links do not work at all.

 

[SloppySqueezer]

Does this game not have a full screen mode? It covers less than one third of my screen.

Have you tried Alt+Enter? I'm currently downloading but will post a solution if I find one.

 

[Lorudo]

Separate downloads would be nice instead of making us download all 3 PC/MAC/Android versions while we only want 1

 

[NotLooking]

Curiosity got the better of me, and I played through it. Seems not only is the scaling off but the script was never revised after choosing the animations. That yields scenes where the words describe an outfit made of denim when the visuals display spandex workout clothes, or another where it's stated she slithered off the couch and crawled on all fours across the floor only to then have the visuals display her perched on the couch on all fours. The developer needs to either start animating to match the script they storyboarded or revise the script to narrate the animations they created. They can't say she stretched her leg onto the counter until her skirt rose revealing the curve of her ass and then give you a scene where she lifts her knee displaying her bare legs and looks back at you with playful suggestion. If it is described that a character performs an action, the image should then show that actions result. None of this currently is bad. Simply rough and not truly finished to a release state. If they can't animate scenes that match what they imagined while writing the script they should animate scenes loosely following the script they envisioned and then revise the narrative text to match what actually was animated.

It also doesn't do anything for anyone having it packaged with 3 systems files in a single archive as the end user will likely only run it on a single chosen platform.

Ultimately the issues to deal with are size scaling of models within the environment, narration matching visuals offered, and bespoke packaging for the intended system of deployment.

 

[highlrecommend]

Links do not work at all.

seems that you need a good adblocker
every link works just fine

 

[Sagesage]

Flagged as virus on firefox as well. And I have a good adblocker.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

I can't believe there's people that still use McAfee lmfao

Antivirus is bloatware mostly only grandpas still use. This PC is still on W7 even and I still don't need it with proper backups (that I haven't even needed in over a decade).

Flagged as virus on firefox as well. And I have a good adblocker.

Use Chrome, problem solved. I clicked download anyway and it's fine on my end. Seems to be yet another false positive like most all Renpy games, though this one has all 3 versions within the .rar, that might have something to do with it as most are separate .zips.

im sorry but this rework needs a rerework,

she was sound asleep, curled up under the covers..... picture shows a giant girl lying across the bed on top of everything

also, you really need to look at how you're sizing her, there is nothing in the story hinting at her being a giant, but in almost all pictures she is drasticly larger than a small girl should be,

girl on a bed 1½person bed (sorry don't know what you call that size in english), she reaches from side to side
girl in a door frame, she is far too large
girl on sofa, again same problem, she is out of proportion against the sofa,
and again girl in door frame, she looks like a giant

yeah, lolis' heads are supposed to be barely above the door knob, wtf is this? Isn't the sister supposed to be 12 or something? I never met any 6-foot 12yo girls (a couple of 17's were in HS though). Oh well, better luck with 0.3.

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

Did you mute everything? It's cropped up on other games where muting the sound breaks the animations somehow. Try setting the sound to 1% or something and seeing if the animations work then. I haven't downloaded this yet, waiting for the models not to have gigantism.

I didn't mute, but I did set all the sound levels to about 50% as I do with all new Ren'Py games because they default to 100% and often are jarringly loud if they use sound. I set them back to 100 and now the videos play. How odd.

 

[lopolone]

It should be more obvious that it's an improved version of the first version, and it should retain some aspects of the relationship with the other sister.

 

[GreenByteLuigi]

no gofile link for the new version? :/