discussion Complete VN Ren'Py Hi Emi [v1.0] [Rnot2000]

[Wannabe]

Been a while since I played the beach minigame and don't really remember. Isn't that the one with the sandcastles and floating buckets and such? You just have to click fast to catch all the buckets and shovels if I remember correctly. There's no trick to it, just click away and keep the mouse moving.

 

[NotRedeemed]

Been a while since I played the beach minigame and don't really remember. Isn't that the one with the sandcastles and floating buckets and such? You just have to click fast to catch all the buckets and shovels if I remember correctly. There's no trick to it, just click away and keep the mouse moving.

Its the minigame after that one unfortunately.

 

[Jeno]

Its the minigame after that one unfortunately.

I just kept clicking the cpr button and that got me through it...

JFC this game though! After a certain point, it basically incredibly guilt trips you so you just leave her alone at night...
If you just want some fun with her, enable the lewd cheat and do your thing. Do not play the story through if you don't wanna be depressed.
Really not sure what the aim of this dev was...

 

[Almirage001]

OH DEAR GOD NOT AGAIN.....
please no more...

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[mayumi]

Wow... I wanted to rate this game but I couldn't, it's too complicated, sometimes I wanted to rate it 0 and sometimes 5.
And since I didn't really finish it, I have no right to rate it.

I can't tell if I recommand it or not.


At first the girl looks like a teenager -> OK
But you can't choose her age, so she's 8 soon to be 9 -> NOT OK
At night she doesn't look the same at all, like a 5-6 years old child -> NOT OK AT ALL
From that point it turned me off (like really soon in the game).
But as always before trashing a game I try to fast forward its content to see what's really inside.
At some point, there was something weird about the story of the parents... I wanted to know the end of the story...
At the end, it's heart breaking.
I'm glad I didn't play it the right way because I would have felt like shit of abusing this poor little girl, even if it's just game.


What's is the aim of this game?


Technically, the game is poorly coded, but that's not the point, I'm sure the dev could have made it a lot better.
The thing is, I think the dev just wanted to focus on the story and the impact on the players, on introspection.

Did you continue abusing her after the heartbreaking twist?
Or do you feel bad about it? Starting to act like a real caring uncle to protect her?
Everybody knows that (real) people are not objects and have feelings, and if you just tell that to anyone, they will just agree and it will not make any difference.
But if you can lure your target to invest some time in a 'well made' game/story (trap?) to really feel your purpose, then it's the perfect piercing arrow through your chest... and after being hit, you'll know if there's a heart in it or not.

 

[Almirage001]

Wow... I wanted to rate this game but I couldn't, it's too complicated, sometimes I wanted to rate it 0 and sometimes 5.
And since I didn't really finish it, I have no right to rate it.

I can't tell if I recommand it or not.


At first the girl looks like a teenager -> OK
But you can't choose her age, so she's 8 soon to be 9 -> NOT OK
At night she doesn't look the same at all, like a 5-6 years old child -> NOT OK AT ALL
From that point it turned me off (like really soon in the game).
But as always before trashing a game I try to fast forward its content to see what's really inside.
At some point, there was something weird about the story of the parents... I wanted to know the end of the story...
At the end, it's heart breaking.
I'm glad I didn't play it the right way because I would have felt like shit of abusing this poor little girl, even if it's just game.


What's is the aim of this game?


Technically, the game is poorly coded, but that's not the point, I'm sure the dev could have made it a lot better.
The thing is, I think the dev just wanted to focus on the story and the impact on the players, on introspection.

Did you continue abusing her after the heartbreaking twist?
Or do you feel bad about it? Starting to act like a real caring uncle to protect her?
Everybody knows that (real) people are not objects and have feelings, and if you just tell that to anyone, they will just agree and it will not make any difference.
But if you can lure your target to invest some time in a 'well made' game/story (trap?) to really feel your purpose, then it's the perfect piercing arrow through your chest... and aftet being hit, you'll know if there's a heart in it or not.

Spoiler: yup it's a spoiler, don't read this if you haven't played the game yet..

the moment her parents died, I've stopped. my goal that time was just to make her feel better, but turns out, it was all for naught...
she died but at the least she's happy and found her peace... that was really heart breaking. didn't really expect that kind of ending for this game but it is what it is, and the fact that she died at the end is really unacceptable imo..

 

[chester1530]

Wow... I wanted to rate this game but I couldn't, it's too complicated, sometimes I wanted to rate it 0 and sometimes 5.
And since I didn't really finish it, I have no right to rate it.

I can't tell if I recommand it or not.


At first the girl looks like a teenager -> OK
But you can't choose her age, so she's 8 soon to be 9 -> NOT OK
At night she doesn't look the same at all, like a 5-6 years old child -> NOT OK AT ALL
From that point it turned me off (like really soon in the game).
But as always before trashing a game I try to fast forward its content to see what's really inside.
At some point, there was something weird about the story of the parents... I wanted to know the end of the story...
At the end, it's heart breaking.
I'm glad I didn't play it the right way because I would have felt like shit of abusing this poor little girl, even if it's just game.


What's is the aim of this game?


Technically, the game is poorly coded, but that's not the point, I'm sure the dev could have made it a lot better.
The thing is, I think the dev just wanted to focus on the story and the impact on the players, on introspection.

Did you continue abusing her after the heartbreaking twist?
Or do you feel bad about it? Starting to act like a real caring uncle to protect her?
Everybody knows that (real) people are not objects and have feelings, and if you just tell that to anyone, they will just agree and it will not make any difference.
But if you can lure your target to invest some time in a 'well made' game/story (trap?) to really feel your purpose, then it's the perfect piercing arrow through your chest... and aftet being hit, you'll know if there's a he

The game itself is well thought out to have a really impressive effect at the end, but in terms of fun and playability, it's a disaster.
The graphics aren't that bad, but it lacks (in my opinion) more postures, being awake, etc.

 

[Malakai]

The game itself is well thought out to have a really impressive effect at the end, but in terms of fun and playability, it's a disaster.
The graphics aren't that bad, but it lacks (in my opinion) more postures, being awake, etc.

Iam sure that was the whole point of this game.
Promising a Loli Porn game, but....actually make it annyoing with bugs and REALLY broken and stupid minigames....
But for the freaks that have stamina and dont close a game after 2 minutes fapping......

Tell a heartbreaking story.....

Rnot2000 did a rly good job with that. Hell, i shed a few tears and felt....stupidly bad for molesting her :'(

The last game that made me really feel something was The Walking Dead Season 1 from Telltale


Do i recommend this game? NO! Most people here just want their loli porn for a quick fap....this isnt it!

 

[Smexydaddy]

Bro... Such a dark story. Was not expecting that ending.

 

[trickybeast]

Many people here write about the depth and emotional impact of the story in this game. I genuinely can't understand them. What could possibly be deep about a story that can be summarized in two or three sentences? How can you empathize with a girl who, at 8 years old, acts like a spoiled teenager at the peak of puberty? How can you empathize with her father, who, for no reason, kills himself despite having a child to take care of? How can you immerse yourself in this story when most of the events are complete nonsense, straight out of a mushroom trip? Come on, you're playing as a guy who literally can't lock a front door or keep an eye on a little girl. Not once, not twice, but constantly. He's literally mentally challenged. Everyone in this game is an idiot, and there's not the slightest bit of sympathy for any of them. Your choices don't matter, and you can't influence the "plot" in any way.

The author knows nothing about child psychology. Do you seriously expect me to believe that an 8-9-year-old girl would mourn her dead parents for over a year without saying a word? All while having lived with her uncle for a year before that. I can't believe that even at an older age, let alone at that age. When my father died, my brother was 10 years old, and he took it much easier than anyone else in our family.

And I'm not even talking about the level of writing skill (or lack thereof), the level of English, the stupidest arcs with the clown-rapist and the ice cream man. The bugs, the dragging pace, the mini-games, the visual style (done half-heartedly).

I'm just curious, who are all these people giving this game 5 stars?

 

[Malakai]

Many people here write about the depth and emotional impact of the story in this game. I genuinely can't understand them. What could possibly be deep about a story that can be summarized in two or three sentences? How can you empathize with a girl who, at 8 years old, acts like a spoiled teenager at the peak of puberty? How can you empathize with her father, who, for no reason, kills himself despite having a child to take care of? How can you immerse yourself in this story when most of the events are complete nonsense, straight out of a mushroom trip? Come on, you're playing as a guy who literally can't lock a front door or keep an eye on a little girl. Not once, not twice, but constantly. He's literally mentally challenged. Everyone in this game is an idiot, and there's not the slightest bit of sympathy for any of them. Your choices don't matter, and you can't influence the "plot" in any way.

The author knows nothing about child psychology. Do you seriously expect me to believe that an 8-9-year-old girl would mourn her dead parents for over a year without saying a word? All while having lived with her uncle for a year before that. I can't believe that even at an older age, let alone at that age. When my father died, my brother was 10 years old, and he took it much easier than anyone else in our family.

And I'm not even talking about the level of writing skill (or lack thereof), the level of English, the stupidest arcs with the clown-rapist and the ice cream man. The bugs, the dragging pace, the mini-games, the visual style (done half-heartedly).

I'm just curious, who are all these people giving this game 5 stars?

People have empathy, even for game characters. you dont.

 

[trickybeast]

People have empathy, even for game characters. you dont.

There have been many works, including games, that evoked deep emotions in me, that left a mark—not just a negative one. And in almost all of them, there was deep world lore, well-developed characters, logically connected events, and moral choices.

Empathy for fictional characters arises when you believe in what's happening, when you can associate yourself with someone, when you can project their experiences onto yourself. It's hard to feel empathy for someone you dislike and whose realism you don't believe in. And as I wrote above, all the characters in this story are negative for me.

If you start crying over any lazy, unrealistic, emotionally manipulative thing, that's not empathy—it's either stupidity or emotional immaturity.

 

[Malakai]

There have been many works, including games, that evoked deep emotions in me, that left a mark—not just a negative one. And in almost all of them, there was deep world lore, well-developed characters, logically connected events, and moral choices.

Empathy for fictional characters arises when you believe in what's happening, when you can associate yourself with someone, when you can project their experiences onto yourself. It's hard to feel empathy for someone you dislike and whose realism you don't believe in. And as I wrote above, all the characters in this story are negative for me.

I play porn games for the porn. If i want what you are describing, i play other games. This game catched me offguard. Stupid mini games, bugs, and not much actual lewd content.
But still i wanted to see the end of it. Story tickled my heart and i found it sad..., if it didnt for you, well.... YOUR opinion that this game is just plain Negativity. No need to write an essay about it

If you start crying over any lazy, unrealistic, emotionally manipulative thing, that's not empathy—it's either stupidity or emotional immaturity.

Well, thats just your own opinion. Many people think otherwise. And calling people stupid or emotional immature just because they dont have your opionion pretty much shows
how stupid and immature YOU actually are People have different tastes, live with it.
Moving on.

 

[trickybeast]

And calling people stupid or emotional immature just because they dont have your opionion pretty much shows
how stupid and immature YOU actually are

You were the first to make it personal and, without reason, called me "incapable of empathy," and now you're upset about a harsh response. Funny you

People have different tastes, live with it.

Indeed. People have different opinions, and I have mine too. My goal here isn't just to throw hate, but to save people like myself from playing this lazy piece of work. Because it wasted my time, my nerves, and I have empathy for others who might consider playing it.

 

[Malakai]

You were the first to make it personal and, without reason, called me "incapable of empathy," and now you're upset about a harsh response. Funny you

Indeed. People have different opinions, and I have mine too. My goal here isn't just to throw hate, but to save people like myself from playing this lazy piece of work. Because it wasted my time, my nerves, and I have empathy for others who might consider playing it.

Isnt THAT exactly what i just said, several posts above yours? or even on the last page?
This game isnt for everyone....its NOT what people think it is, cumming to this section...(haha)
I think we mean the same thing, just with other words :S
....
The exeption might be only that i actually...."liked" the story, kinda, maybe....its sad ( the story ) .

EDIT: No matter how old you are.... please dont, in nice words, call people that dont have the same opinion as yours, stupid or/and emotional challanged -.-

 

[chester1530]

When Bamby's mother died of an overdose, Bamby had to become a prostitute to take care of her and her orphaned and mentally handicapped siblings, that's sad.

I see insulting in a discussion as banal, each person expresses their truth and the others theirs. But the result is always the same; Politics, religion, ethnicities...

Homo sapiens sapiens likes to cut his brother's throat for anything.

 

[angband]

My problem with this story is that the MC just gets completely dumped on throughout. First, he gets thrust into putting his life on hold and caring for his niece. While this doesn't have to be a bad thing, he gets little support from his brother, and his niece only occasionally shows much affection to him. Her feelings for her uncle are always overshadowed by how much she wants to see her dad again, and she only seems to really be nice to her uncle when she wants him to do or buy something for her. I don't fault her for acting like this, because I think it is just normal behavior for a kid her age, and her excitable nature in the early story is actually very cute and endearing. But she could still be written to show more genuine love for her uncle without losing her desire to get to her mom and dad.

Events unfold and her mom and dad are gone, leaving the MC as primary caregiver and adoptive parent. This could be a chance for a closer relationship, as the MC provides love and support to help her get over it the best a kid can hope to. Instead, she goes mute and emotionless, other than one or two quick flashes that are gone before you know it. Finally, the MC has to deal with losing her, and only after that do we see her again happy and expressing love for her uncle as she looks down from above, and while "we" see it as readers, it is unclear whether the MC in the story even gets to be aware of this.

So that is my issue with it. For those of us who self-insert into stories, "we" (as MC) pour ourselves into this character and get little if anything back out. And that's a shame, because the potential was there for a lot more.

 

[Jan Meier]

Hey Guys, she sits in the wheelchair now. No matter what I do, nothing changes. What do I have to do to continue?

 

[appreciate143]

shes on the wheelchair and crying for what happened and still have options to molest her. i feel so bad on it and there is nothing to do when shes on the wheelchair .

 

[zom423]

shes on the wheelchair and crying for what happened and still have options to molest her. i feel so bad on it and there is nothing to do when shes on the wheelchair .

I’m also stuck there, any help would be appreciated as this is suppose to be a finished game I think. I wouldn’t be surprised if that’s just the end…