discussion VN Ren'Py Final Project [0.1.0] [The Black Hand]

[The Black Hnad]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

Developer Name

The Black Hand

Developer Links

https://app.unifans.io/c/theblackhand

Version

0.1.0

Latest Update

Jul 10, 2026

Release Date

Jul 10, 2026

Language

English

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. Android

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Overview:
The Final Project puts you in the shoes of a 45-year-old man who travels to a small island with 5,000 residents to start a new chapter in his life and open an adult entertainment agency.​

Spoiler: Genre:

bbc, twins, blackmail, nts, blowjob,

Spoiler: Installation

Extract and run

Spoiler: Change-Log

N/A

Spoiler: Dev Notes

This is my latest project; I’ll try to post updates regularly. I’ve fallen behind for personal reasons; I’m trying to catch up, but it’s tough. This is the last project I’ll launch; if it gets support, I’ll keep going with it; if not, I’ll release one or two updates, wrap it up, and start another project—an NTR one, since that seems to get more attention these days. There are too many cucks, sons of bitches, byeee.

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[Total Dago]

This one need a lot of work. Looks like a demo for my (and not a good one )

 

[The Black Hnad]

This one need a lot of work. Looks like a demo for my (and not a good one )

Yes, it's a demo. Could you tell me what you didn't like so I can improve it? Thanks for your feedback.

 

[Total Dago]

Yes, it's a demo. Could you tell me what you didn't like so I can improve it? Thanks for your feedback.

Oh well ... One : If it´s a demo release, announce it
( si es una demo , avisa)
Two :CHANGE the color of the text . White in a back white it´s a bad combination.
(Cambia el color de las letras, blanco con fondo blanco es ilegible)
Three: A good way to inmerse in the story it´s : let me change the name of the MC.
( Déjame cambiar el nombre del MC , da la ilusión que me hablan y pasan las cosas a mí)
Three: Today, an animation it´s always welcome and needed.
( Hoy en día, animaciones son bienvenidas e indispensables)
Four: You need to improve the graphics, but this it´s a personal opinion.
( Gráficos son toscos y necesitan mejoras, pero es mi opinión)
Five : 3 minutes of game play not worth the download and make me think wait until 0.8.0 for something good.
( 3 minutos de juego hacen que no valga la pena la descarga, y si lo hago, posiblemente esperare a la versión 0.8 para ver algo bueno)
Six: And tralated for diferent lenguages always welcome ( but we know english it's default for most of the games)

Good luck with the game.

 

[The Black Hnad]

Oh well ... One : If it´s a demo release, announce it
( si es una demo , avisa)
Two :CHANGE the color of the text . White in a back white it´s a bad combination.
(Cambia el color de las letras, blanco con fondo blanco es ilegible)
Three: A good way to inmerse in the story it´s : let me change the name of the MC.
( Déjame cambiar el nombre del MC , da la ilusión que me hablan y pasan las cosas a mí)
Three: Today, an animation it´s always welcome and needed.
( Hoy en día, animaciones son bienvenidas e indispensables)
Four: You need to improve the graphics, but this it´s a personal opinion.
( Gráficos son toscos y necesitan mejoras, pero es mi opinión)
Five : 3 minutes of game play not worth the download and make me think wait until 0.8.0 for something good.
( 3 minutos de juego hacen que no valga la pena la descarga, y si lo hago, posiblemente esperare a la versión 0.8 para ver algo bueno)
Six: And tralated for diferent lenguages always welcome ( but we know english it's default for most of the games)

Good luck with the game.

Thank you very much for your reply; I'll try to improve it and add some of the things you mentioned. Unfortunately, I can't improve the graphics—that's the best my PC can handle—but I can improve the rest, so I'll try to add those in the next update. Have a great day!

 

[pornmustache]

May want to look into your translation/localisation
j is not pronounced as a breathy sound in english - it's more like an 'i'/'y' (think of how you pronounce 'jump')
"ejej" just doesn't make any kind of sense, especially since people don't tend to laugh backwards, even if you ignore the 'j'
ejej -> hehe || "Ujum-jumjum-jum" -> *Humming* (it's better to just describe the action instead of trying to make the sounds into words)
Also - don't use the upside down ?/! - they're just plainly not used by any1 except spanish/portuguese afaik ^^

Note: the part about the price is repeated twice (tho one line has a slight difference) - I think you made a little blunder when you changed something there.
as Dago mentioned - white text on white background (like when textbox goes over his white tank top) makes it hard to read - adding a black border to the text will solve that issue.

"Can we play games like One and others?" <- no clue what that actually means, is "One" a game? or is "One and others" a game? - never heard of either, might be a local thing. - consider editing for clarification.

There are some issues with punctuation and such - but that's just polishing mostly and not a big deal for now.

 

[fallendarkstar]

@The Black Hnad I think you have an excellent start, and your leading lady is quite adorable. Here are my two cents:

1. I don't think the white text is the problem. The text needs a thicker black boarder so it is easier to read. And I appreciate that there is no text box.
2. There is no sexual content yet, so you should put a note on it until there is.
3. There is nothing wrong with your renders, though I think your massive protagonist could lose a few inches of height. The size disparity is plausible, but kinda awkward. Hopefully MC's third leg doesn't look like a third leg.
4. If you can't render animations, sound effects and pseudo animations, alternating images to simulate animations, will do in a pinch.
5. Someone to review the script would help a bit. Was her name supposed to be Cloe and not Chloe?
6. I LOVE the callback to Minnie. Hopefully she can cameo to show the new girl the ropes? A little MFF action? An aged up Minnie as your personal slut would be superb.
7. I dont want to see your talents wasted on NTR content, though maybe you could have one game with two routes to choose from, netorare or netori. The best of both worlds, like cuck and bull content.

Overall I like it so far. Hopefully it is longer than your first two projects. Once you get some sexual content and iron out the translation quirks, I think you should also post your game on F 95Zone for more support. If you need someone to proofread, run ideas past, or just to chat with, hit me up.

 

[The Black Hnad]

May want to look into your translation/localisation
j is not pronounced as a breathy sound in english - it's more like an 'i'/'y' (think of how you pronounce 'jump')
"ejej" just doesn't make any kind of sense, especially since people don't tend to laugh backwards, even if you ignore the 'j'
ejej -> hehe || "Ujum-jumjum-jum" -> *Humming* (it's better to just describe the action instead of trying to make the sounds into words)
Also - don't use the upside down ?/! - they're just plainly not used by any1 except spanish/portuguese afaik ^^

Note: the part about the price is repeated twice (tho one line has a slight difference) - I think you made a little blunder when you changed something there.
as Dago mentioned - white text on white background (like when textbox goes over his white tank top) makes it hard to read - adding a black border to the text will solve that issue.

"Can we play games like One and others?" <- no clue what that actually means, is "One" a game? or is "One and others" a game? - never heard of either, might be a local thing. - consider editing for clarification.

There are some issues with punctuation and such - but that's just polishing mostly and not a big deal for now.

I understand, thanks for your comment; I'll try to make those changes. By “one,” I meant the board game, which is played with cards—“UNO”—but the translator changed it. I'll try to make those changes for the next update. Thanks.

 

[The Black Hnad]

@The Black Hnad I think you have an excellent start, and your leading lady is quite adorable. Here are my two cents:

1. I don't think the white text is the problem. The text needs a thicker black boarder so it is easier to read. And I appreciate that there is no text box.
2. There is no sexual content yet, so you should put a note on it until there is.
3. There is nothing wrong with your renders, though I think your massive protagonist could lose a few inches of height. The size disparity is plausible, but kinda awkward. Hopefully MC's third leg doesn't look like a third leg.
4. If you can't render animations, sound effects and pseudo animations, alternating images to simulate animations, will do in a pinch.
5. Someone to review the script would help a bit. Was her name supposed to be Cloe and not Chloe?
6. I LOVE the callback to Minnie. Hopefully she can cameo to show the new girl the ropes? A little MFF action? An aged up Minnie as your personal slut would be superb.
7. I dont want to see your talents wasted on NTR content, though maybe you could have one game with two routes to choose from, netorare or netori. The best of both worlds, like cuck and bull content.

Overall I like it so far. Hopefully it is longer than your first two projects. Once you get some sexual content and iron out the translation quirks, I think you should also post your game on F 95Zone for more support. If you need someone to proofread, run ideas past, or just to chat with, hit me up.

Thank you very much for your comment. Yes, the first thing I need to do is find someone to help me with the translation; I use DeepL, and I don't think the translation is very good.
1- As for Minnie, everything happens at the same time; in fact, it takes place a few weeks after the events in the protagonist’s apartment. I was planning to add content featuring her, but I’m not sure yet if I should modify the character model, since she looks a little… young.
2- What do you mean by NTR and Netori?: Sorry, I didn’t understand that. Are you referring to the idea of implementing an alternate route that features Chloe’s father’s point of view? Or are you referring to an alternate route where the protagonist’s girlfriends are taken away from him? To clarify, the protagonist is in the business of “stealing” other men’s daughters and wives; that’s what I plan to include in this project.
3- Would F95 Zone allow this type of content? I didn’t upload it to that site because I thought they wouldn’t allow it.
4- I like your suggestion to review the text and give me your opinion before releasing the update, and I appreciate it; once I’ve finished the project before its release, I’ll send you a message so you can take a look and tell me which errors I need to fix.
5- Thanks for your suggestions and for taking the time to point out all the errors I need to fix. I’ll try to fix them for the next update.

 

[fallendarkstar]

Thank you very much for your comment. Yes, the first thing I need to do is find someone to help me with the translation; I use DeepL, and I don't think the translation is very good.
1- As for Minnie, everything happens at the same time; in fact, it takes place a few weeks after the events in the protagonist’s apartment. I was planning to add content featuring her, but I’m not sure yet if I should modify the character model, since she looks a little… young.
2- What do you mean by NTR and Netori?: Sorry, I didn’t understand that. Are you referring to the idea of implementing an alternate route that features Chloe’s father’s point of view? Or are you referring to an alternate route where the protagonist’s girlfriends are taken away from him? To clarify, the protagonist is in the business of “stealing” other men’s daughters and wives; that’s what I plan to include in this project.
3- Would F95 Zone allow this type of content? I didn’t upload it to that site because I thought they wouldn’t allow it.
4- I like your suggestion to review the text and give me your opinion before releasing the update, and I appreciate it; once I’ve finished the project before its release, I’ll send you a message so you can take a look and tell me which errors I need to fix.
5- Thanks for your suggestions and for taking the time to point out all the errors I need to fix. I’ll try to fix them for the next update.

Don't worry too much about the translation. It is not bad, by any means. DeepL is one of the better ones in my opinion, more than a little better than Google translate, it doesn’t do gender, punctuation, or certain language specific things (think hahaha for laughing) very well. Regardless, the translation is fully understandable, it just needs a bit of polish.

For Minnie, I recommend aging her up, and maybe having a flashback or prologue that retelling the events of Cassette #1. I say that just to make sure there is no complaints about the ages of your characters for the F95 crowd, if you wanted to include Minnie on the fun.

I believe F95 would be fine with this game. Your leading lady is obviously of age, just young and naive. I would use her as the baseline; to be safe, don't include any characters who look younger than her. I also recommend holding off until there is sexual content on offer. First impressions are key, and a lot of people love to review games too harshly. Besides, if they reject it, the worst thing they can say is no.

Regarding NTR and Netori, I was referring to your Dev Note about making an NTR game if this one fails. I propose keeping the game as it is (Netori), but adding a side NTR route for the cucks out there from the dad's perspective, or maybe a male friend like Minnie's friend. Hell, they may even appreciate a scene where Cloe's (Chloe's?) daddy watches the MC plowing his daughter. Maybe he's even into it.