discussion VN Ren'Py Final Project [0.1.0] [The Black Hand]

[The Black Hnad]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

Developer Name

The Black Hand

Developer Links

https://app.unifans.io/c/theblackhand

Version

0.1.0

Latest Update

Jul 10, 2026

Release Date

Jul 10, 2026

Language

English

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. Android

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Overview:
The Final Project puts you in the shoes of a 45-year-old man who travels to a small island with 5,000 residents to start a new chapter in his life and open an adult entertainment agency.​

Spoiler: Genre:

bbc, twins, blackmail, nts, blowjob,

Spoiler: Installation

Extract and run

Spoiler: Change-Log

N/A

Spoiler: Dev Notes

This is my latest project; I’ll try to post updates regularly. I’ve fallen behind for personal reasons; I’m trying to catch up, but it’s tough. This is the last project I’ll launch; if it gets support, I’ll keep going with it; if not, I’ll release one or two updates, wrap it up, and start another project—an NTR one, since that seems to get more attention these days. There are too many cucks, sons of bitches, byeee.

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[Total Dago]

This one need a lot of work. Looks like a demo for my (and not a good one )

 

[The Black Hnad]

This one need a lot of work. Looks like a demo for my (and not a good one )

Yes, it's a demo. Could you tell me what you didn't like so I can improve it? Thanks for your feedback.

 

[Total Dago]

Yes, it's a demo. Could you tell me what you didn't like so I can improve it? Thanks for your feedback.

Oh well ... One : If it´s a demo release, announce it
( si es una demo , avisa)
Two :CHANGE the color of the text . White in a back white it´s a bad combination.
(Cambia el color de las letras, blanco con fondo blanco es ilegible)
Three: A good way to inmerse in the story it´s : let me change the name of the MC.
( Déjame cambiar el nombre del MC , da la ilusión que me hablan y pasan las cosas a mí)
Three: Today, an animation it´s always welcome and needed.
( Hoy en día, animaciones son bienvenidas e indispensables)
Four: You need to improve the graphics, but this it´s a personal opinion.
( Gráficos son toscos y necesitan mejoras, pero es mi opinión)
Five : 3 minutes of game play not worth the download and make me think wait until 0.8.0 for something good.
( 3 minutos de juego hacen que no valga la pena la descarga, y si lo hago, posiblemente esperare a la versión 0.8 para ver algo bueno)
Six: And tralated for diferent lenguages always welcome ( but we know english it's default for most of the games)

Good luck with the game.

 

[The Black Hnad]

Oh well ... One : If it´s a demo release, announce it
( si es una demo , avisa)
Two :CHANGE the color of the text . White in a back white it´s a bad combination.
(Cambia el color de las letras, blanco con fondo blanco es ilegible)
Three: A good way to inmerse in the story it´s : let me change the name of the MC.
( Déjame cambiar el nombre del MC , da la ilusión que me hablan y pasan las cosas a mí)
Three: Today, an animation it´s always welcome and needed.
( Hoy en día, animaciones son bienvenidas e indispensables)
Four: You need to improve the graphics, but this it´s a personal opinion.
( Gráficos son toscos y necesitan mejoras, pero es mi opinión)
Five : 3 minutes of game play not worth the download and make me think wait until 0.8.0 for something good.
( 3 minutos de juego hacen que no valga la pena la descarga, y si lo hago, posiblemente esperare a la versión 0.8 para ver algo bueno)
Six: And tralated for diferent lenguages always welcome ( but we know english it's default for most of the games)

Good luck with the game.

Thank you very much for your reply; I'll try to improve it and add some of the things you mentioned. Unfortunately, I can't improve the graphics—that's the best my PC can handle—but I can improve the rest, so I'll try to add those in the next update. Have a great day!

 

[pornmustache]

May want to look into your translation/localisation
j is not pronounced as a breathy sound in english - it's more like an 'i'/'y' (think of how you pronounce 'jump')
"ejej" just doesn't make any kind of sense, especially since people don't tend to laugh backwards, even if you ignore the 'j'
ejej -> hehe || "Ujum-jumjum-jum" -> *Humming* (it's better to just describe the action instead of trying to make the sounds into words)
Also - don't use the upside down ?/! - they're just plainly not used by any1 except spanish/portuguese afaik ^^

Note: the part about the price is repeated twice (tho one line has a slight difference) - I think you made a little blunder when you changed something there.
as Dago mentioned - white text on white background (like when textbox goes over his white tank top) makes it hard to read - adding a black border to the text will solve that issue.

"Can we play games like One and others?" <- no clue what that actually means, is "One" a game? or is "One and others" a game? - never heard of either, might be a local thing. - consider editing for clarification.

There are some issues with punctuation and such - but that's just polishing mostly and not a big deal for now.

 

[fallendarkstar]

@The Black Hnad I think you have an excellent start, and your leading lady is quite adorable. Here are my two cents:

1. I don't think the white text is the problem. The text needs a thicker black boarder so it is easier to read. And I appreciate that there is no text box.
2. There is no sexual content yet, so you should put a note on it until there is.
3. There is nothing wrong with your renders, though I think your massive protagonist could lose a few inches of height. The size disparity is plausible, but kinda awkward. Hopefully MC's third leg doesn't look like a third leg.
4. If you can't render animations, sound effects and pseudo animations, alternating images to simulate animations, will do in a pinch.
5. Someone to review the script would help a bit. Was her name supposed to be Cloe and not Chloe?
6. I LOVE the callback to Minnie. Hopefully she can cameo to show the new girl the ropes? A little MFF action? An aged up Minnie as your personal slut would be superb.
7. I dont want to see your talents wasted on NTR content, though maybe you could have one game with two routes to choose from, netorare or netori. The best of both worlds, like cuck and bull content.

Overall I like it so far. Hopefully it is longer than your first two projects. Once you get some sexual content and iron out the translation quirks, I think you should also post your game on F 95Zone for more support. If you need someone to proofread, run ideas past, or just to chat with, hit me up.