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Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Early Love [v0.8.2] [KindyGuY]

Ok, thanks for your attention, in the current edition there are already scenes with Tommy and I missed them? Or only in future updates?
 
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Ok, thanks for your attention, in the current edition there are already scenes with Tommy and I missed them? Or only in future updates?
There are two little scenes, the first one when she is going for a walk with him after school (but this scene is not shown) and the second one when she send him a selfie naked. In the next update there will be another scenes with them together.
 
I'm still in the early days of the game, where Arya plays the two true, one lie game.
How can I reach the dare "get spanked 5 times from Lily"?
THX
 
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I'm still in the early days of the game, where Arya plays the two true, one lie game.
How can I reach the dare "get spanked 5 times from Lily"?
THX
there is a section 'Scenes' in the main menu, just check out the 25th image to read the hint
 
Downloaded the full game from Mixdrop ( )
But the password advised to unlock does not work.
Why are you using a password at all?
 
Downloaded the full game from Mixdrop ( )
But the password advised to unlock does not work.
Why are you using a password at all?
Prevents hosts from scanning for questionable content (they can scan unencrypted files) when links are reported. What software are you using to decrypt it? I am able to decrypt mentioned file without a problem using 7-Zip.
 
Prevents hosts from scanning for questionable content (they can scan unencrypted files) when links are reported. What software are you using to decrypt (I am able to decrypt mentioned file without a problem using 7-Zip)?
7Zip. Tried downloading using Pixel Drain and same thing. Very strange.
 
I did a quick translation to Portuguese, it is not a professional translation, and a simply amateur translation.

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Fiz uma tradução para o português, não e uma tradução profissional, e uma tradução simplesmente amadora.
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Tradução com pouca revisão para a versão: V.0.6a

PS: jogo traduzido direto do russo pode ter erros de interpretação

What is password to file 0.7.1 tranlatin please.
Qual a senha da tradução após baixar V 07.1??
 
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The scenes you attached are not part of the game, they are from old gallery that not related to the plot. You develop a relationship with Arya just like with others, just wait and you will see what happens in the next update. Lily develops a relationship with Tommy if you are not on her path and you will watch them and sometimes make decisions for her. Miley is something like another plot for the game that you will take part and help her, and there will be some choices in the next update to open her path.
can we find these scenes in your games somewhere ?They are georgeous!
 
@KindyGuY said:

"I'm sorry, I'm not a programmer, I don't know a lot of things to fix them"

I beg to differ, seriously, dude.
You coded the game, didn't you? Or are you saying that someone else coded it, and that's why you don't know how to fix issues?
Because, if you did in fact code the game yourself, then I hate to burst your bubble, but then you tecnically are a programmer,
just not a very good one. And, to be clear, I'm not hating on you or anything, but if you made the game's content, and put it together
with code in Ren'Py, then you are a programmer, bro, and your statement about not being one, is at least technically speaking, incorrect.

On another note, after updating the game from 0.7.1 to 0.8.2 which was a hassle and a half in itself, first because of the password problems, and
then after that was sorted, having to start from scratch, since my previous save made the game crash, I just gave up, because that's too much
problems just to play it, but hey, that's just me.

And it's a shame too, as I liked your game before, but just like with 'Milf's Plaza', that quickly evolved into a bugfest, I can't be bothered, when
games turn out like that, and I'm really sorry about that, because there's potential there, but the issues needs to be fixed properly, and in a way so
that old saves work too, at least that's my opinion on that, and I'm sure others feel the same way when (trying) to play a game, but then having to
go through 14 steps before that's even an option, and then on top of everything else, not being able to pick up where you left off previously.
 
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@KindyGuY said:

"I'm sorry, I'm not a programmer, I don't know a lot of things to fix them"

I beg to differ, seriously, dude.
You coded the game, didn't you? Or are you saying that someone else coded it, and that's why you don't know how to fix issues?
Because, if you did in fact code the game yourself, then I hate to burst your bubble, but then you tecnically are a programmer,
just not a very good one. And, to be clear, I'm not hating on you or anything, but if you made the game's content, and put it together
with code in Ren'Py, then you are a programmer, bro, and your statement about not being one, is at least technically speaking, incorrect.

On another note, after updating the game from 0.7.1 to 0.8.2 which was a hassle and a half in itself, first because of the password problems, and
then after that was sorted, having to start from scratch, since my previous save made the game crash, I just gave up, because that's too much
problems just to play it, but hey, that's just me.

And it's a shame too, as I liked your game before, but just like with 'Milf's Plaza', that quickly evolved into a bugfest, I can't be bothered, when
games turn out like that, and I'm really sorry about that, because there's potential there, but the issues needs to be fixed properly, and in a way so
that old saves work too, at least that's my opinion on that, and I'm sure others feel the same way when (trying) to play a game, but then having to
go through 14 steps before that's even an option, and then on top of everything else, not being able to pick up where you left off previously.
I'm sorry you had problems with the game, but I think I've fixed the last problems that everyone had because there are no complaints anymore. On the one hand, you're right, but on the other hand, I tell you that I didn't study programming in college, I didn't learn programming languages, I just learned RenPy on YouTube, but most of the problems and bugs that arise are not described in these videos so that I could easily fix them. And also I often change lines of code in the game to make the game better, so that's why there are problems with old saves, but I really don't know how to deal with it, I try to fix what I can, so I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
 
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approximate date of new update?? great game
The next update will take a lot of time, because it will be a big one, another 3 new game days and also I will add the path where MC didn't tell Frank the truth about what Abby told him, so that's why there will be a lot of content. I hope I will release it before the end of this year but can't promise anything ?
 
@KindyGuY

Damn dude, that last scene with Lori was pure evil. Usually I don't like those kind of scenes, but this one caught me off guard completely and actually made me laugh. :LOL:
Great work so far, I love the game and especially the girls obviously, kudos! I wanted to give my two cents regarding your paths. You should make whatever game you want to make, and I have no clue where your priorities lie - artistic expression, commercial success, pleasing the audience? The following is only relevant if commercial success or pleasing a (major?) part of the audience, the NTR haters, is important to you. Anyway, IF you care about the anti-NTR audience and want to offer a no-NTR path, I really want to emphasize the point user hrmm made here:
If you're reading this KindyGuY: while I wouldn't call it ntr, the stuff where Lori flirts with Frank (like the spanking scene in this update where she tells him "*whispers* It's okay, daddy, I don't mind, and I'm sure you want this too") will likely rub ntr-haters the wrong way, and might be worth hiding that sort of stuff behind the fr_trust variable.
Speaking for team "NTR-haters", yes, that scene really rubs me the wrong way. As long as I like the rest of the game as much as I do, I wouldn't quit playing because of such a scene now and then, but it would negatively impact my enjoyment. I've noticed a lot of times that writers who at least sometimes write NTR often have such scenes in their non-NTR paths too. It probably doesn't seem like a big deal to them; but it is a very big deal for the NTR haters. If you want to please us (oh god, this sounds wrong:ROFLMAO:), take extra care to follow these rules:
  1. Any somewhat attractive girl or woman introduced that hasn't 'whore' tattooed on her forehead is a LI regarding the player, no matter what her romantic status is or what MC thinks about her. In more seriousness, if you want to introduce a girl who isn't going to have any scenes or who will not be exclusive for the player, make that clear in her first few lines of dialogue (and make all scenes with non-exclusive girls optional).
  2. No LI shows ANY signs of sexual attraction to another male or talks about phantasies or past experiences (most should be inexperienced anyway) with other males. Except maybe as a ploy to make MC jealous. For a much smaller subset of NTR haters (including me), this extends to other females as well, at least if stuff happens without MC present.
  3. LIs are either no sluts at all, or sluts for MC only. They don't like being ogled by people other than MC, unless MC enjoys them being ogled, in which case they enjoy that MC enjoys, nothing else.
That's it. Pretty easy, huh? The difficulty lies in not slipping up and letting other paths you have written or developed in your mind, bleed into it. And don't be too afraid of being not realistic in these regards. Most of us would prefer a ridiculous explanation for an inexperienced 18 year old virgin to a realistic 18 year old any day all day.
Really keeping to those rules of course means you either have to write more path-specific content or have less content in the no-NTR path. But, speaking for myself, if I had to choose between the volleyball scene as it is, and a scene that just ends after the match, I'd choose the latter with less content. In an ideal world there would be a scene with MC spanking both girls, but otherwise having a spanking scene with LI1 doesn't outweigh having to watch another male spank LI2 so to speak.
Hope that helps in case you want to write a "pure" NTR path, if not, I'll still keep playing for the time being. All the best for your game!

Edit: Almost forgot: Maybe edit your first post here and paste a fresh copy of the password in. The invisible character that makes the password fail is in the post and gets copied along with the rest when people copy the password from your post. (You can see the invisible character if you paste the text into an editor like notepad++, maybe you need to turn on a option to see non-printing characters or something similar.)

2nd edit: Not trying to offend anyone, but from a commercial standpoint, you might think about changing MC's glans too. That form of glans is relatively rare and will probably turn some people off. Not too big a fan myself to be honest.:oops:
 
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@KindyGuY

Damn dude, that last scene with Lori was pure evil. Usually I don't like those kind of scenes, but this one caught me off guard completely and actually made me laugh. :LOL:
Great work so far, I love the game and especially the girls obviously, kudos! I wanted to give my two cents regarding your paths. You should make whatever game you want to make, and I have no clue where your priorities lie - artistic expression, commercial success, pleasing the audience? The following is only relevant if commercial success or pleasing a (major?) part of the audience, the NTR haters, is important to you. Anyway, IF you care about the anti-NTR audience and want to offer a no-NTR path, I really want to emphasize the point user hrmm made here:

Speaking for team "NTR-haters", yes, that scene really rubs me the wrong way. As long as I like the rest of the game as much as I do, I wouldn't quit playing because of such a scene now and then, but it would negatively impact my enjoyment. I've noticed a lot of times that writers who at least sometimes write NTR often have such scenes in their non-NTR paths too. It probably doesn't seem like a big deal to them; but it is a very big deal for the NTR haters. If you want to please us (oh god, this sounds wrong:ROFLMAO:), take extra care to follow these rules:
  1. Any somewhat attractive girl or woman introduced that hasn't 'whore' tattooed on her forehead is a LI regarding the player, no matter what her romantic status is or what MC thinks about her. In more seriousness, if you want to introduce a girl who isn't going to have any scenes or who will not be exclusive for the player, make that clear in her first few lines of dialogue (and make all scenes with non-exclusive girls optional).
  2. No LI shows ANY signs of sexual attraction to another male or talks about phantasies or past experiences (most should be inexperienced anyway) with other males. Except maybe as a ploy to make MC jealous. For a much smaller subset of NTR haters (including me), this extends to other females as well, at least if stuff happens without MC present.
  3. LIs are either no sluts at all, or sluts for MC only. They don't like being ogled by people other than MC, unless MC enjoys them being ogled, in which case they enjoy that MC enjoys, nothing else.
That's it. Pretty easy, huh? The difficulty lies in not slipping up and letting other paths you have written or developed in your mind, bleed into it. And don't be too afraid of being not realistic in these regards. Most of us would prefer a ridiculous explanation for an inexperienced 18 year old virgin to a realistic 18 year old any day all day.
Really keeping to those rules of course means you either have to write more path-specific content or have less content in the NTR path. But, speaking for myself, if I had to choose between the volleyball scene as it is, and a scene that just ends after the match, I'd choose the latter with less content. In an ideal world there would be a scene with MC spanking both girls, but otherwise having a spanking scene with LI1 doesn't outweigh having to watch another male spank LI2 so to speak.
Hope that helps in case you want to write a "pure" NTR path, if not, I'll still keep playing for the time being. All the best for your game!

Edit: Almost forgot: Maybe edit your first post here and paste a fresh copy of the password in. The invisible character that makes the password fail is in the post and gets copied along with the rest when people copy the password from your post. (You can see the invisible character if you paste the text into an editor like notepad++, maybe you need to turn on a option to see non-printing characters or something similar.)

2nd edit: Not trying to offend anyone, but from a commercial standpoint, you might think about changing MC's glans too. That form of glans is relatively rare and will probably turn some people off. Not too big a fan myself to be honest.:oops:
Thank you so much for such a view of the game, I read from word to word, and I think I understood everything you wrote, considering my English skills, and I'll take note of some things from your comment :);)
 
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