discussion VN Ren'Py Diary of my perversion [V0.7c] [Neytan Games]

[-CookieMonster666-]

Since I still have a long way to go to improve my English, I'm very grateful for all these corrections. Thank you very much. If you see more mistakes I would be very grateful if you report them to me.

Spoiler

If Lorena wins on the gaming console against the MC (Day 13), she says, "I - WON - YOU". In English, you can win a game or you can win a prize. You cannot win a person (doing so implies they own that person). The statement she should say is "I - BEAT - YOU", meaning against the MC she won the series of games — since a game is one of the things in English a person can win.

 

[STasH15]

I know this had been mentioned pretty early on in this thread, but I have to point it out. The second conversation the MC has with Irene the MC refers to Irene as a brother-in-law. Also, when the MC is texting Emma while he is at the school, Emma refers to Irene as a he during her response to the MC. Since Irene and Emma are siblings I feel like she probably knows Irene's birth sex. This is either two huge oversights by the author our Irene is trans.

 

[hrmm]

Dev's native language is Spanish, as far as I can tell. Spanish to English tends to have issues with mixed up pronouns/genders, especially (or maybe exclusively) when it's machine translated. I'm guessing this game is machine translated and then someone goes over it to fix errors, but things slip through sometimes.

 

[MiguelYamazaki]

Thanks! lets try

 

[helent]

how can you add 3.815 renders, I can't imagine the .815 render would even function?

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

how can you add 3.815 renders, I can't imagine the .815 render would even function?

Some other countries use the decimal point instead of commas to separate the thousands. Yeah, I don't get it either, you'd think MATH would be universal but some people just gotta drive on the wrong side of the road.

 

[angband]

Yeah, I don't get it either, you'd think MATH would be universal

Reminds me of how NASA lost a mission because some people weren't on the metric system.

 

[whinegummi]

Some other countries use the decimal point instead of commas to separate the thousands. Yeah, I don't get it either, you'd think MATH would be universal but some people just gotta drive on the wrong side of the road.

Yeah comma as decimal separator is just used by "some" people....

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What I personally find somewhat interesting is that the US chose to use the decimal numeral system, when (someof) their imperial measurements are more compatible with a duodecimal numeral system...

EDIT: duodecimal = 12-based. Divides by 2,3,4 and 6, as compared to decimals 2 & 5.

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

What I personally find somewhat interesting is that the US chose to use the decimal numeral system, when (someof) their imperial measurements are more compatible with a duodecimal numeral system...

Hee hee, I just realized how silly that sounds. The entire world decided at some point centuries ago that the Arabic numeral system was waaaaaay better than trying to do long division with Roman numerals and so base-10 is the standard. All the US has chosen is to not make everyone's lives easier by going metric. As to why,

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Yeah comma as decimal separator is just used by "some" people....

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What I personally find somewhat interesting is that the US chose to use the decimal numeral system, when (someof) their imperial measurements are more compatible with a duodecimal numeral system...

EDIT: duodecimal = 12-based. Divides by 2,3,4 and 6, as compared to decimals 2 & 5.

Hee hee, I just realized how silly that sounds. The entire world decided at some point centuries ago that the Arabic numeral system was waaaaaay better than trying to do long division with Roman numerals and so base-10 is the standard. All the US has chosen is to not make everyone's lives easier by going metric. As to why,

Just to irritate folks like you that think everyone needs to fall in line. Realistically, it's just because we're used to the traditional English system and are too stubborn to change. I'm frankly shocked that other parts of the world didn't say, "Nah, we already have a system we like. Thanks anyway." We've never been a nation to "toe the line" just b/c others do....

Seriously, though, there's actually an Office of Weights and Measures in the United States that's responsible for what system we use. The fact that they've never changed things over completely is a mystery to pretty much all Americans. (Although the point of finding it a pain in the ass to change things over is a sentiment the majority of us share.) As an aside, I would point out that I do still hear Brits sometimes saying things like "stone" for weight, feet / inches for height, acres for area, etc. So it's not "only us stupid Americans" or anything. But sure, let's go with the "all Americans are dumb" joke that's staler than 3-day-old cum-socks.

 

[PTPorts]

Android port updated​

 

[legendaryjhon]

Wow, nice Game!!

Is Lori played by the same actress who played Amber in "Corrupted Love"?

 

[ramy668]

Great game, I really enjoyed it.Good mix of characters.Looking forward to more updates

 

[Ribaso]

Opened this game again, to find my latest save was 18 months ago....(felt like yesterday!)

 

[TwistedEarss]

Similar to Corrupted Love. The characters are well designed and the story looks very good. It has some loli content, which always takes the game up a notch. Very good staging. And if the age of the girls could be changed, it would be incredible.

 

[MajMockingBird]

Hope this game is still alive

 

[mrsanon07]

did enjoy this one

 

[Lazarus͏]

A very lovely game.

Only criticism is that the dialogue is a bit.. clunky. Not sure if it's due to translation or lack of writing experience but it's the only flaw.

Even with that, though, the story is a lovely mix of wholesome and silly. The story doesn't take itself too seriously, while also never compromising on heartfelt moments.

I hope we see more from this. It was a genuine treat. <3

 

[DiaperLove]

amazing story, twists, and characters .. cant wait so see more

 

[pervanon]

Great game, lovely lolis in this one.