discussion VN Ren'Py Daily Challenges [v0.3.0] [TheAlex]

[User_124703]

So what remains? I could add this genuinely good guy to the game. But at this point I would end up having the same problem I mentioned before. I would leave the main vision of the game for that and that also wouldn't feel normal. So this is no solution either.

Yes!
Please you should do, what you and nobody else want to do.
And have in mind.
People follow or support you for the work you have done so far. And that way it should remain.
As I wrote to other dev. If you not love, what you are doing it can´t be as good, as it would be, if you love it.
So please. Do what you want to do. not what anybody else want to do. even if they wanna send you money.

 

[knopfler1]

How can the option "maybe I could" be active at the restroom?

 

[lideyo]

It's still an early release but it looks promising! The fact that you can switch character perspectives with a button on the top left during some scenes is a nice touch.

 

[mistakenident7]

I'm not normally someone who goes for female protagonists, but the premise of this seems really good and the renders are great! Will be giving it a try

 

[TheAlex]

I'm not normally someone who goes for female protagonists, but the premise of this seems really good and the renders are great! Will be giving it a try

Thanx alot. Tell me what you think if you like! ^^

 

[Freyr]

Review of v0.3.0:

Disclaimer: I tend to dislike female protagonist corruption games.

You play the game as mainly a female protagonist, who is a young woman about to go on a road trip with her brother / childhood friend and her uncle / family friend (you can define the relations at the beginning).

In some cases you can switch to the perspective of her younger brother and make choices for him.

This shifting of perspective is quite refreshing and one of the things I like most about the game. It is definitely a corruption style game, but because you can play both characters, you have quite a lot of control over how things unfold.
It also gives quite some variety in the ways scenes unfold and I do hope that the dev is able to track all of that so that past decisions continue to make sense in the future.

The downside of the game is that most characters fit in pretty well defined tropes. The female MC is the typical girl, she's a bit uptight and thinks she's much better than her pervert brother. The brother is, well, a pervert, but if you choose, he can be nice as well, which I think is the redeeming factor in this game. The uncle seems to be the typical "ugly bastard" but it's a bit early to say.

The renders are pretty good. Sometimes the dev also uses sprites on top of a rendered scene and that can be a bit confusing, but overall the graphics are pretty good.

Writing is pretty solid as well.

Conclusion:
As I said, I tend to dislike female protagonist corruption games. But due to the incest and the fact that the brother doesn't have to be an asshole, this game is actually pretty nice. The female MC doesn't have to a mindless victim to all the corruption and I hope the dev continues like that.

The biggest downside of the game is that it does still follow a lot of the tropes from the female MC corruption genre, which I personally dislike but which is, more objectively, also a bit stale and boring.

All in all however, it's a surprisingly enjoyable game and I'd rate it 4/5,

 

[Freyr]

And now I come to the point: Because many voices from the community asked for lesbian content, I thought about doing a sidestory or two with it. But it's no kink of mine so I have no idea how the result should look like. For sure it's not done by two girl touching each other!

After playing it, I think the game is fine also without lesbian content, although it would still be nice.

So what remains? I could add this genuinely good guy to the game. But at this point I would end up having the same problem I mentioned before. I would leave the main vision of the game for that and that also wouldn't feel normal. So this is no solution either.

At the moment you can play the brother as a "good enough" kinda guy. Which is fine by me.
I am hoping for a romance path with him.

P.S.: I would add the "male protagonist" tag, because you can switch between the characters.

 

[mistakenident7]

Thanx alot. Tell me what you think if you like! ^^

I liked it! Will be back to play it in the future too I'm sure.
There were some sections that seemed a bit rushed pacing wise but I liked being able to switch points of view. I agree with the earlier poster, might want to add multiple protagonist for the switching

 

[Crymax]

I loved the perverted little brother.

 

[kot9ira]

Need more updeta

 

[NordicSunWorshipper]

TheAlex still on the forum? On SS there is 0.4, ever made public?

 

[hornet]

This game (and its future tags) looks so fucking prommising...damn i cant wait, pls dont abandon it <3

 

[TheAlex]

Working on the update again since two weeks. Still very slow progress but definitely not abandoned!

 

[NordicSunWorshipper]

Good news. This was a fun game.

 

[NordicSunWorshipper]

Working on the update again since two weeks. Still very slow progress but definitely not abandoned!

Any teasers for where the story goes.

 

[TheAlex]

Any teasers for where the story goes.

Have a look at

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if you want to see what I'm working on.

 

[Dragon1626]

Its behind a paywall

 

[papapa69]

Its behind a paywall

nice strategy.
it's like buying a horse that you've never seen, from a gypsy...

 

[TheAlex]

Oh sorry, that wasn't my intention. I'll setup the post to public. Wasn't aware of that... my apologies

EDIT:It wasn't behind a paywall but you had to follow me. Now the post is public (as it should have been in the first place), please try again and give me a like if it worked or tell me if it doesn't. Thx and apologies again.

 

[NordicSunWorshipper]

What is post on SS from december