discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Burned [V.03] [Deaufosse]

[Nastastic]

Folks...this game is meant to be weird and lighthearted.

Probably not for you if all you want to do is fap.

There are lots of other games for that. Come back to this one once you've nutted and try again.

 

[User_124703]

Come back to this one once you've nutted and try again

Yeah...
No.
I liked it a lot before the last update. Maybe I forgot, what it was, but... No. already deleted.

 

[M1gra1n3]

Folks...this game is meant to be weird and lighthearted.

Probably not for you if all you want to do is fap.

There are lots of other games for that. Come back to this one once you've nutted and try again.

there are a lot of great scenes to fap to just press the H button so you don't have to read the screen while doing so, unless it is mc with Kristy those are good scenes.
but yeah if you have to have guys calling their girls whores and such either play the typical [Big Ass], [Big Tits], stuff on f95, or the main update section.

this 3rd chapter is way the fuck out there with references to a lot of politically charged crap. from a parody type approach.



...oops, sorry. Kristen took that away.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

all other character's ages are tied to this one, but with all the surgeries then physical, speech and mental therapy he had to go through... it is possible to argue he was 2 years behind schedule and if he lived in Korea where students graduate the year they turn 19 not 18 like most other countries he could be 21.

Korean school with English writing in Roman letters? Ok (lol). Should just be honest and just say "No one as far as actual readers should believe the previous idiotic copy/pasted disclaimer, that's just a censorship-circumvention tool and only meant for the morons on Patreon and similar sites that believe everything they read and take everything literally or at face value". Of course the incest is a problem for them anyway so it's all for nothing as far as Patreon. Personally I kept it realistic and as it was probably originally intended (18/15). Actually a bit younger than that since Kristy looks like she's 12 (so made the MC 15) and also assumed the high school was also a middle school that included grades 6-8 (actually often the case in many less populous/rural US counties to save money, no need for an extra multi-million-dollar building to maintain along with those extra buses/drivers).

 

[M1gra1n3]

Yeah...
No.
I liked it a lot before the last update. Maybe I forgot, what it was, but... No. already deleted.

really did you think it was going to be dark brooding, sentimentality.

Even from the first release you had an MC whose best friend was getting freshmen girls hooked on nicotine so she could force them to service her.
Sasha then brings her nympho sister Mia over to fuck your pristine sister. this was all in the first release. as was Mia's banishment from the pound.
the signs were there from the first release. If you were too focused on the MC's relationship with his sister to see the freaky circus around you then that is not the dev's fault.
true all the sci-fi fun was a little "where the fuck did THAT come from"

 

[M1gra1n3]

Korean school with English writing in Roman letters? Ok (lol). Should just be honest and just say "No one as far as actual readers should believe the previous idiotic copy/pasted disclaimer, that's just a censorship-circumvention tool and only meant for the morons on Patreon and similar sites that believe everything they read and take everything literally or at face value". Of course the incest is a problem for them anyway so it's all for nothing as far as Patreon. Personally I kept it realistic and as it was probably originally intended (18/15). Actually a bit younger than that since Kristy looks like she's 12 (so made the MC 15) and also assumed the high school was also a middle school that included grades 6-8 (actually often the case in many less populous/rural US counties to save money, no need for an extra multi-million-dollar building to maintain along with those extra buses/drivers).

hey i was looking for a plausible explanation OTHER than the obvious. just change MC's age and your golden

hey i went with 17/14 as i didn't turn 18 until my first year of college

 

[Nastastic]

assumed the high school was also a middle school that included grades 6-8 (actually often the case in many less populous/rural US counties to save money, no need for an extra multi-million-dollar building to maintain along with those extra buses/drivers).

This actually makes sense if you have the Malignant girls at 13 like I do., since they all apparently go to the same school (from the Burned characters' cameo in the last version of Malignant and some comments above, I haven't actually played this update yet).

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Bummer that MC didn't trade v cards with his sis when she was wanting it so bad. Dunno what the hangup is. Hell I had no problem having my sis as my first (and still only, which to me that is kinda weird/unusual I guess more than the incest is when I think about it). I mean I'd still talk her into waiting I guess if she was 12 like in my playthrough or something and not a bit older than that (ie 14-16). Let hope in ch4 he puts a baby in her so the future daughter (or brother? never got to see the future incest kid) the older Kristy has can have a brother or sister (that's 25 years older than her, which will be weird/rare). I also second the move for a selfcest tag. Wait, doesn't sucking your own dick or giving yourself a handy count as selfcest? Or does it have to be with a time-traveling version of yourself? What about with a clone that's a few years younger/older (probably far easier than backwards time travel)?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

This actually makes sense if you have the Malignant girls at 13 like I do., since they all apparently go to the same school (from the Burned characters' cameo in the last version of Malignant and some comments above, I haven't actually played this update yet).

Yeah that too. I forgot what I had those ages set at but I think they were 13 too due to the amount of pube-stubble she had.

 

[M1gra1n3]

Let hope in ch4 he puts a baby in her so the future daughter (or brother? never got to see the future incest kid) the older Kristy has can have a brother or sister (that's 25 years older than her, which will be weird/rare). I also second the move for a selfcest tag. Wait, doesn't sucking your own dick or giving yourself a handy count as selfcest? Or does it have to be with a time-traveling version of yourself? What about with a clone that's a few years younger/older (probably far easier than backwards time travel)?

a clone would not be selfcest as it is not you, at best it is incest same as any of your prodigy. so if we determine that masturbation is not selfcest, actually if you could suck yourself off i will give that to you as nope nope nope. it would require a time travelling version of yourself or a dimensional rift where there are two you's even if they have some mental/emotional differences they are still you.

 

[Taws83]

Welllll, that happened... I love Deaufosse's work, and will continue to play his games, but I do feel that this one went a little off the rails. By off the rails, I mean a train chasing Leslie Nielsen through a forest. I hope it's all going somewhere and will eventually be tied up neatly, so I will continue to eagerly await each release.

P.S. Mods, I respectfully request that LC coins be awarded to people who got the train reference, they are old and probably on a fixed income

 

[User_43891]

P.S. Mods, I respectfully request that LC coins be awarded to people who got the train reference, they are old and probably on a fixed income

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And fuck off, the movie isn't that old....

*checks notes*

Released in 1998. 1998 was 26 years ago.

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[Deaufosse]

a clone would not be selfcest as it is not you, at best it is incest same as any of your prodigy. so if we determine that masturbation is not selfcest, actually if you could suck yourself off i will give that to you as nope nope nope. it would require a time travelling version of yourself or a dimensional rift where there are two you's even if they have some mental/emotional differences they are still you.

I disagree. Selfcest is diddling a second version of yourself, whether it's a past version, an alternate from another universe, or a clone. I'd argue a clone would still count because it would still be you, and genetics is the differentiator between incest and normal sex. I'd even argue that identical twins is also selfcest whereas fraternal twins is incest.

 

[Deaufosse]

I tried to update the tags to add Selfcest but I can create new ones. Mods maybe?

 

[cszero]

looks like a great game, testing it

 

[stangnomez]

I would argue that selfcest requires that the two involved had to be the same person at some point. Regular clones wouldn't cut it, but a person going back in time, or magic duplication, or transporter twins, etc. would

 

[Sharpy]

Looks like rollback got disabled in this update (yes I have it enabled in preferences).
EDIT: finished the update, it feels like some ADHD on drugs, and not the good kind.

 

[Deaufosse]

Looks like rollback got disabled in this update (yes I have it enabled in preferences).
EDIT: finished the update, it feels like some ADHD on drugs, and not the good kind.

It wasn't disabled, to my knowledge. Was it at the beginning of chapter 3? That whole section is timed.

 

[Gotenga]

The tag "Shota" should be added here. And if there is a tag Shota/Loli only it should be added. Without the Shota tag it makes it seem as if the male protagonist is older or that one that is older will be introduced.

 

[Deaufosse]

The tag "Shota" should be added here. And if there is a tag Shota/Loli only it should be added. Without the Shota tag it makes it seem as if the male protagonist is older or that one that is older will be introduced.

Added. Always a fan of more tags