discussion VN KN Ren'Py DAZ Blended Family [v0.30] [Glyph]

[skred]

Just started this. Does the writing get better? So much repetition and clichés, it's killing the few brain cells i have left.

 

[SeveredRealms]

It's avoidable, so just avoid it if you don't like it. I however am looking forward to it!

To bad the other tags are not avoidable. it ruins the game for a lot of people. Hell more people dislike those than they do Trans. just saying.

 

[jerry18]

I was thinking to give it a try after a couple of updates but At this rate It'll take a couple of years.

 

[Whazzup]

To bad the other tags are not avoidable. it ruins the game for a lot of people. Hell more people dislike those than they do Trans. just saying.

I know, and I agree it's perfectly fine to complain about not playing the game because of those tags being unavoidable.

However imo it's crying over nothing if you're not going to play a game because a tag you don't like is avoidable, especially if it's going to be easy to avoid it (as in the choice makes it perfectly clear it will or won't result in that kind of content).

 

[SeveredRealms]

I know, and I agree it's perfectly fine to complain about not playing the game because of those tags being unavoidable.

However imo it's crying over nothing if you're not going to play a game because a tag you don't like is avoidable, especially if it's going to be easy to avoid it (as in the choice makes it perfectly clear it will or won't result in that kind of content).

I have no problem playing games with avoidable content. It the unavoidable forced content such as stated on the OP that pushes people away.

 

[Whazzup]

I have no problem playing games with avoidable content. It the unavoidable forced content such as stated on the OP that pushes people away.

Me neither. I can't even think of any content I would avoid except for games that only have sexual content between "male-looking" men (so I have no problems with trans/futa), but the person I originally commented on was complaining about avoidable content. Imo that is just ridiculous.

 

[Beduin123]

Well that rules me out and its a shame because they are cute models but I dont share.

It is clear from the first release that both the husband and the son fuck the woman, so it's an essential part of the story. I sometimes do not mind sharing (in games only because I normally don't associate myself with the MC) if the game is good, though I'm not a fan of that stuff. But for me unavoidable gay/trans/futa content is a no go zone. If that kind of content is avoidable well...depends how good is the rest of the game and how much is that trans stuff is still there between the lines.

 

[Stoni1234]

150mb for a 0.3version? Does this have any content yet? Or is it just very compressed?

 

[cop666]

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[VForValhalla]

I absolutely love the story concept, so I am not going to criticize much.

I really liked the Alpha version. I loved the writing, scenes happened almost exactly how I would've wanted it to. But the quality of writing seems to have gone down significantly. Scenes just start and end out of nowhere. The animation quality has also gone down as well (I know the "animation" is just 2 images back and forth over and over again but it somehow looks worse than the alpha).

It's been 1.5 year since the alpha, so I thought I'd see much improvement. But I was a bit disappointed.

If the dev is reading this, I seriously hope you continue the game but improvement needs to be made on the things I mentioned above.

PS. just use ChatGPT or sth equivalent to fix the english/grammar.

 

[Glyph]

I absolutely love the story concept, so I am not going to criticize much.

I really liked the Alpha version. I loved the writing, scenes happened almost exactly how I would've wanted it to. But the quality of writing seems to have gone down significantly. Scenes just start and end out of nowhere. The animation quality has also gone down as well (I know the "animation" is just 2 images back and forth over and over again but it somehow looks worse than the alpha).

It's been 1.5 year since the alpha, so I thought I'd see much improvement. But I was a bit disappointed.

If the dev is reading this, I seriously hope you continue the game but improvement needs to be made on the things I mentioned above.

PS. just use ChatGPT or sth equivalent to fix the english/grammar.

Thank you i am reading every comment
I'll take into consideration.

 

[nem33]

It looks like we're missing a multiple-penetration tag.

I don't know why so many folks are getting all upset about the sharing or ntr tags on this game. The alpha is essentially an orgy. Who's the main character supposed to be anyway? In my world, Lily is the main character since she was clearly the star of the show.

 

[AllanBlackwater]

Thank you i am reading every comment
I'll take into consideration.

So, not to give you too much shit over a game that you clearly spent a lot of time on....and LOOKS incredible. The game has a lot of potential and I hope you continue! BUT...

You thanked your proofreaders at the end but, there's a lot of stuff that got missed, just FYI. Heck, there's a typo on the page that thanks the proofreaders. There just kinda needs to be a little more attention to the writing. I suspect that maybe english isn't your first language...and it shows. So if there's one main criticism it's to just spend some more time and effort on that part of things.

 

[jadas92280]

In the Emily anal scene animation (alpha story), there's a white block visible in her foot.

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[louisamay]

Well, after seeing the original "alpha" story, I was excited to see "v. 0.3" -- what a letdown! So unfortunate to go so precipitously from Hot to Not. Appreciate the effort, of course, but oh well. Probably take at least another nine months of gestation, too, even though wife Emily seems ready to drop any day now. Also, technically, I was unable to click on autosaves -- it just kept copying a scene that was already saved.
I suppose I'm wondering if this "beta" version, as opposed to the original "alpha" version that I saw at first, was somehow creeping its way, storywise, to finally come to the "alpha" material? It just seems a bit weird, or even counter-productive, to have the sexual/sensual (and very enjoyable) content at the BEGINNING -- and then turtle back to what seems a very mundane, UN-sexual ( except for some vanilla married sex woo-hoo) story, with scripting that is less interesting than that 60's movie "Yours, Mine and Ours" with Hank Fonda and Lucille Ball, where they work on blending 2 families... really, if you're going to do that story, it has GOT to be more intriguing, as an AVN, than the absolute norm of Dad with "work projects", girls with "school projects", son that has Everyone saying "we're here for you" (how did he not punch someone after the 6th iteration), and the big deal is him jerking off to his Mom fucking his new Dad. And then we wait a year to discover -- ? Mom now has a baby, so--? I just don't get how this story flows, after the initial brilliant beginning, which we now are told is called "alpha". Please forgive me if this seems hyper-critical, but I was SO into the original creation, and then SO disappointed when I played this.

 

[an0n]

Feels like the main story might be a slow burn, at least compared to the alpha. Will keep on my radar but expecting it'll take a while for new content -- hopefully the dev keeps at it.

 

[lillyrossy123]

1) Which one did you use? (pc, mac)
2) What site? (gofile, mega, pixeldrain, workupload)

I did the gofile link for pc and nothing showed up

I used all of them for the pc. It wouldn't let me finish downloading any of them. Stating that it had detected a virus.

 

[nem33]

In the Emily anal scene animation (alpha story), there's a white block visible in her foot.

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I noticed that one too. The funny thing is that it was in an animation loop that only consisted of 2 or 3 frames on repeat. It just wouldn't have been that hard to plaster over the defect with an image editing program. There was another animation loop (again of just a couple frames) where one character's hands were sinking entirely into the other character's legs.

 

[DaddyDegen]

Looks promising, but it is a shame you have to share your girls imo. Yes I know some people are into that, no judgement, this is just my opinion.

 

[solidsoup]

Any chance of an apk