I just noticed how creepy one scene looks, where the whole family is gathered on one couch, where the brother is fucking his sister (umm i mean STEP-sister) and in the background no one is moving. As if all the other members of the family were frozen in time and the little boy was left alone with himself and decided to take advantage of the situation before anyone caught him red-handed... Ava froze and didn't even blink her eyes, Lily and her father also froze and didn't move. It's scary to watch =)
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and it's also very interesting what happened to the boy's biological father and the girls' biological mother?
well, it's certainly good that they all are united ( i mean Emily's and MC's families into one big blended family).
Emily (that is, Alex's mother) told her part of the story that she had incest with her biological brother as a child - I wonder why she went looking for a husband if she already had a partner, my second opinion about who Alex's father is has already been formed. and really, why did Emily need to look for another man? did something bad happen to her brother?
and yes, I would like to know what happened to Lily and Ava's biological mother. why did the girls stay with their father.
and some disappointment
Emily is just a fool, she could take virginity from her own son, but now the train has left - toot-toot!! I so hoped that she would figure it out. it would be a tradition for this new family - parents take virginity from their children.
but on the other hand Alex is also a fool! He himself could have approached his mother and asked to be his first woman to take his virginity. and after that he could have fun with Ava as much as he wanted.
I'm sure Ava would have understood perfectly - because Lily gave her virginity to her father, and then Alex should give his virginity to his mother.
(errr maybe scenario writer rewrite this part? boy need a good woman like mother figure to take his virginity - it will be only fair, pal, please give a reader the choice)
I sometimes come across strange mistakes that are hard to make when typing text from a keyboard. These mistakes are like when the voice-to-text translator makes a mistake with some of the words or phrases it hears.For example, Emily^"You look so hot bouncing
and daddy's cock" - it's obvious that instead of and there should be the word on. (I wonder what kind of pronunciation it is that on sounds like and? In what area do they say it?)