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Please don't make it a Kinetic novel man, this game looks interesting ngl
 
The sharing is a little turn off, but the game after all is promising. I'm not sure how long I stay tuned when sharing goes more in.
 
It's amazing to see the alpha come out! I've already been in love with the premise and the renders, but I also very much enjoy the mood of the writing - it's a great balance of love and lust. The details need some polishing, but that can easily be accomplished.

Three suggestions for the start:

- The MC should have a reasonable default name, not "Anon". (I went with "Brent".)
- We are asked for Lily's age before we see her in the game, I think she should be on the screen when we are asked that.
- I kinda feel 3 years age difference between Lily and Ava is a bit on the low side.
 
The game, in its current version, looks pretty, I really like the models of the girls (mainly the loli, she looks very cute) and the boy.

Personally, in games I really like the emphasis on highlighting the eyes, expression is everything .. angle camera etc

Good luck for you r future <3
 
Unavoidable sharing? What a way to kill your game before it's even begun.

if it is with in the family i don't see why not to share in less it is with a guy same as the mc age if like in the cover i think that is ok to me got the mc, wife, oldest and youngest daughters, and young son got to teach them some how right why not keep it with in the family

think like this to me sharing with son is ok if young like cover can always put him in his place to no say they are mine and I'm just being nice to let you join in with us

dev could add in some thing like that to help with it in for people who don't like the sharing thing just a little altered scripting to be a little more dom over the son to keep him in check to let him no that the girls are his and just being nice and leting him get a little exp for win he gets his own girl
 
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not every man's thing(n)
Not every game is for everyone. This game is not for you. That is fine, you don't need to keep posting about it here.
 
Wow, it's out! Good luck with your game man! 😄

:bndr0014:
 
Btw, I love the tags. Loli and incest + sharing/swinging are rare thing together. Other tags are great too (in my opinion ofc) 😁
 
Congrats on the release! The game is off to a great start with this alpha. It was awesome to see the early concepts and renders for this project given life at last. As some have mentioned the english was off a bit, although it was primarily in the spelling from what I remember so that should be a easy fix. I think this one has a bright future ahead of it and I'll definitely continue keeping an eye out for further updates!
 
Congrats, awesome renders. Good luck with the game.
 
Wow, you got all the interesting tags in a single game. Great work, looking forward to its development, english isnt my first language either, but if I can help, ill gladdly do it
 
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