discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ AITA - Am I the Asshole [0.3.2][day 3 part 1] [Twisted Moon Games]

[SomeoneElse75]

A very nice start ! But I'm sad that there isn't any route for Ben..
I hope you will add it in the future since I'm not the only one to ask for it.

 

[Mulberry7258]

Houston, we have a problem.

Ha, you call that a problem. THIS is a problem. !!

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[CF432]

After the good looking first release, I gave this second one also a go. But now I'm a little disappointed, because the setup between the wife and daughter, were the player had to choose, felt extremly forced. It was more like "you have to choose to keep the drama going" than "choose your route". I will for now stick to it, but something like this I tend to avoid. Could have solved in a natural way, because they both are supposed to be the family of the MC not some random bitches, that you hooked up with once.

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

Welp ima give it a test cause i have free time. Will probably write what i think of it, any bugs i encounter and what feels not right/out of place.

to think that this comment started something that became a friendship and being "in" the game

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Ha, you call that a problem. THIS is a problem. !!

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yeah, it's better to be nice to the lolis rather than gag them.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

After the good looking first release, I gave this second one also a go. But now I'm a little disappointed, because the setup between the wife and daughter, were the player had to choose, felt extremly forced. It was more like "you have to choose to keep the drama going" than "choose your route". I will for now stick to it, but something like this I tend to avoid. Could have solved in a natural way, because they both are supposed to be the family of the MC not some random bitches, that you hooked up with once.

Well, I imagine like most wives they don't wanna have a threesome or throuple with their daughter and her dad (in real life that would be the ultimate wet dream if both were ok with that), hence if one is a pervert and his daughter is an option he has to pick one, her or her mom. My gut tells me this is probably not meant to be a harem AVN and you will get one bad ending or another sooner or later if you try to build one. Plenty of AVNs are like that, 10-20 LIs = 10-20 playthroughs if you want to fuck them all, in those you don't get to be some silly irresitable sex god with so much charisma every girl in the AVN falls at his feet and agrees to whatever he says just to get his cock. Frankly though in this one I don't see how such a Wish version of Dr. Strange and a wife that semi-ugly (Karen is an appropriate name, she's a bitch) could make such a pretty daughter, so she's the one I'm picking first and I probably won't bother playing again to fuck the wife.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Well, I imagine like most wives they don't wanna have a threesome or throuple with their daughter and her dad (in real life that would be the ultimate wet dream if both were ok with that), hence if one is a pervert and his daughter is an option he has to pick one, her or her mom. My gut tells me this is probably not meant to be a harem AVN and you will get one bad ending or another sooner or later if you try to build one. Plenty of AVNs are like that, 10-20 LIs = 10-20 playthroughs if you want to fuck them all, in those you don't get to be some silly irresitable sex god with so much charisma every girl in the AVN falls at his feet and agrees to whatever he says just to get his cock. Frankly though in this one I don't see how such a Wish version of Dr. Strange and a wife that semi-ugly (Karen is an appropriate name, she's a bitch) could make such a pretty daughter, so she's the one I'm picking first and I probably won't bother playing again to fuck the wife.

You're right, this game is no fuck em all harem game. There are different endings planned, one of those has a small harem of 3 girls (won't name anything here you might be able to guess and another ending will have a perverted mother (she is not in the game yet) who has a daughter and they'll be okay with MC and daughter, so a happy sharing family tending to MCs needs
And yes, I see more ppl already hating on Karen, well... there is more to the story and the story will be told. Karen didn't become a Karen over nothing.
There will be a flashback scene in day 3 just to give more context

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

You're right, this game is no fuck em all harem game. There are different endings planned, one of those has a small harem of 3 girls (won't name anything here you might be able to guess and another ending will have a perverted mother (she is not in the game yet) who has a daughter and they'll be okay with MC and daughter, so a happy sharing family tending to MCs needs
And yes, I see more ppl already hating on Karen, well... there is more to the story and the story will be told. Karen didn't become a Karen over nothing.
There will be a flashback scene in day 3 just to give more context

i told you karens a bitch

 

[TwistedMoony]

to think that this comment started something that became a friendship and being "in" the game

Love you too my guardian bitch or guard dog, I alway forget,... silly me <3

 

[hansdampf788]

I was waiting for more content before starting the game but with this

this game is no fuck em all harem game. There are different endings planned,

my interest in the game is 0

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

I'd love it if Karen was as perverted as the MC and lets Ben fuck her and put a baby in her SSP-style if on Noelle's path (or does the same to his sister if on Karen's path for some weird reason, it's not really NTR if she's not an LI, and it seems it's realsitic and the MC won't get them both in the same playthrough). He's kind of a momma's boy anyway.

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(There can be only one MC)

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

i told you karens a bitch

I noticed that she was bitchy if you chose not to call her etc, but if you made the correct choices she was rather sweet.

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

Yeah... sorry no shota content or NTR since MC is the only one who can have sex with Karen.

Thanks for making that clear (again).
I could've sworn you had a disclaimer in the OP, did you remove it? Maybe put one there in big letters. Even after your post above, another boy lover asked again.

A very nice start ! But I'm sad that there isn't any route for Ben..
I hope you will add it in the future since I'm not the only one to ask for it.

planned tags: anal, watersports, pregnancy, there will always be the choice of creampie or pullout.

Questions: If we choose to pullout, will there be no pregnant females? Will anal and watersports be optional?
Many of us find these fetishes off-putting.

I'll give the compliments to my writer

I'm glad you got such a good writer for your game.

Who do I yell at for coming up with that glory hole scene though? Lol

It's amazing what you have created already. It will be very interesting to see you and your team keep improving as you continue the journey.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Thanks for making that clear (again).
I could've sworn you had a disclaimer in the OP, did you remove it? Maybe put one there in big letters. Even after your post above, another boy lover asked again.


planned tags: anal, watersports, pregnancy, there will always be the choice of creampie or pullout.

Questions: If we choose to pullout, will there be no pregnant females? Will anal and watersports be optional?
Many of us find these fetishes off-putting.



I'm glad you got such a good writer for your game.

Who do I yell at for coming up with that glory hole scene though? Lol

It's amazing what you have created already. It will be very interesting to see you and your team keep improving as you continue the journey.

Thank you for your feedback!
First of all, the Gloryhole scene was not planned and just kinda happened. So that is on me!
I like it and there was a version with possible watersports but my writer and I came to the conclusion that wouldn't be fitting in that scene.
If you always pull out the chance of pregancy (in porn games only) = 0
Fetishes will always be optional, I won't force you to do what you don't wanna see. Or at least, I try.

I was waiting for more content before starting the game but with this

my interest in the game is 0

That is okay, your choice.

It's amazing what you have created already. It will be very interesting to see you and your team keep improving as you continue the journey.

Thank you, really! We do appreciate the positive feedback.



Just a side note:
Tomorrow I'll update this version with a bugfix + complete Russian translation. So the 0.2.2 version.

 

[eeriedaddy]

You're right, this game is no fuck em all harem game. There are different endings planned

This is both disappointing and also expected for this type of game (more serious than most VNs). I do sort of wish there would be a 'darker', corrupt-the-wife into being okay with you fucking the daughter (it's for her own good, you see), because Karen is such a bitch so far so I'd like to see her taken down a peg and put in the role of a slave/plaything. That and mother/daughter is hot (especially when either the mother or daughter are forced into it...).

Still, I guess I'll wait and see where your vision takes you and see if maybe you'll relent a bit on the possibility of multiple LI endings.

 

[Moss]

Thanks, I know about this one and in 0.2.2 it will be fixed.

Who's the freckled redhead that shows up at the end of the game? I don't remember seeing her in the game at all. I hope we'll see more of her soon! She's hot!

 

[Frazzanova]

Chandler Bing would be proud...

 

[CF432]

Well, I imagine like most wives they don't wanna have a threesome or throuple with their daughter and her dad (in real life that would be the ultimate wet dream if both were ok with that), hence if one is a pervert and his daughter is an option he has to pick one, her or her mom. My gut tells me this is probably not meant to be a harem AVN and you will get one bad ending or another sooner or later if you try to build one. Plenty of AVNs are like that, 10-20 LIs = 10-20 playthroughs if you want to fuck them all, in those you don't get to be some silly irresitable sex god with so much charisma every girl in the AVN falls at his feet and agrees to whatever he says just to get his cock. Frankly though in this one I don't see how such a Wish version of Dr. Strange and a wife that semi-ugly (Karen is an appropriate name, she's a bitch) could make such a pretty daughter, so she's the one I'm picking first and I probably won't bother playing again to fuck the wife.

You clearly didn't read my comment, never talked about a threesome with them both. I just said, the choice felt forced just to keep the drama going, despite both of them are supposed to be his family, yeah, with hickups in the earlier past, at least from what we get to know until now. So please, if you have nothing to add to my comment, don't comment at all in the future. Otherwise it's just post inflation, that I start to ignore at some point. Thanks!

 

[TwistedMoony]

Who's the freckled redhead that shows up at the end of the game? I don't remember seeing her in the game at all. She's hot! I hope we'll see more of her soon!

That was a thing on my Discord. There will be 2 more LIs a mother and daugther later on. So I gave the discord the choice between a redhead, goth chick and a blonde girl.
They all had a personality trait and the Discord did choose the blonde.
So I gave the goth a very small part (pineapple).
And the redhead gets to 'moderate' the game kinda.

 

[TwistedMoony]

This is both disappointing and also expected for this type of game (more serious than most VNs). I do sort of wish there would be a 'darker', corrupt-the-wife into being okay with you fucking the daughter (it's for her own good, you see), because Karen is such a bitch so far so I'd like to see her taken down a peg and put in the role of a slave/plaything. That and mother/daughter is hot (especially when either the mother or daughter are forced into it...).

Still, I guess I'll wait and see where your vision takes you and see if maybe you'll relent a bit on the possibility of multiple LI endings.

I do hear all of you (you're not alone with your opinion on this 'issue').

So far I have a clear vision on multiple endings and I would like to invite you all to my server (link is in my signature) where I have a channel about my plans and possible endings I have thought of.
When being a active VN player, I am all for Harems, in this game I do not think a harem is realistic and I hope the further we get into the story the more sense it makes.