discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ AITA - Am I the Asshole [0.3.2][day 3 part 1] [Twisted Moon Games]

[TwistedMoony]

Update is out, have fun!

 

[Reheake]

If you choose to take Noelle home with you, the mc still returns home alone. I thought the old save was to blame, but through a quick run I found out that this only happens if you first decide to call Karen at the beginning of the game.

 

[TwistedMoony]

If you choose to take Noelle home with you, the mc still returns home alone. I thought the old save was to blame, but through a quick run I found out that this only happens if you first decide to call Karen at the beginning of the game.

Yes, I am aware of that and will be fixed within the next couple of days. I am now waiting for the russian version to be updated and then I'll make a 0.2.2 bugfix
But thank you and keep me up to date if you found something else.

 

[molva]

Nice

 

[Uthuriel]

MC looks like Dr. Strange ordered on Wish...

 

[Ja69067]

Playing in Android the menu is gone.

 

[CrazyRosie]

Promising.

 

[eeriedaddy]

I ran into an error: name 'KarenFigh' is not defined.

Turns out the error is on line 1555 of day2.rpy: elif karenfigh and karenneutral:

--

First time playing this. Not bad, although the sex scenes are pretty choppy... With having different routes it sure would be nice if the game would label saves for us and/or allow us to name our saves (IE

You must be registered to see links

). If certain choices/routes lock us out of other paths it would be nice if that information was presented (for instance, some sort of warning like it saying: Noelle Path; Karen Path CLOSED -- it could also put some sort of indication in the affection/heart menu that you're locked out of that character's path? Like a black X over the affection amount?). Another example are the Gina and Paige paths... are those blocked off forever if we don't accept their offers the first time or will there be ways to accept their advances later?). Otherwise I am going to assume some sort of combination of choices will eventually end in a harem path (MC ends up with all of the women and they are all ok with sharing him).

If there are only going to be single path / endings where you can only end up with one woman, that would be good to know too so I can start playthroughs specifically for each character (although that's always a pain since juggling 7 different path/saves can be a lot). If that is the case I would also hope that sex with any other character is avoidable when on a specific path (has been so far but a lot of games force you into situations where you have to cheat for whatever reason...)

Anyways, good work so far. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

 

[Goofygoofygal]

Just played it and enjoyedn it - but would have been better if I could save it ... there's no save button (Android version) - please help! Also, any chance of 'content' with the son? Maybe with Noelle?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

incest + loli + Patreon = lol, good luck with that. Itch will prob get nuked too. Make a Backed.by at the very least if you expect to make money from this.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

"But I can assure you, all girls in this game are over the legal age of 18 and participate in it willingly."

1 They were made in Daz, probably in the past 1-3 years, so they are all 1-3yo, not 18 at all.
2 They can't participate in it willingly if they have no will of their own. Worse than that, they don't even have a physical body so can't even pass as a latest version Realdoll, let alone one controlled by an independent general AI that can even give the illusion of a will. If they had a will of their own they'd probably be begging for mercy, bitching and bellyaching about being put in lewd postions and told what to say.
3 So sick of seeing obvious bullshit like this. Yes perverts like us know hot coffee is hot, most of us also don't care what age cartoons are supposed to be or if they are being raped or if it's based on a true story or fictional/coincidental. All we care about is not seeing NTR in them. If we did care we probably wouldn't be downloading banned AVNs marked as such.

 

[pgm_01]

"But I can assure you, all girls in this game are over the legal age of 18 and participate in it willingly."

1 They were made in Daz, probably in the past 1-3 years, so they are all 1-3yo, not 18 at all.
2 They can't participate in it willingly if they have no will of their own. Worse than that, they don't even have a physical body so can't even pass as a latest version Realdoll, let alone one controlled by an independent general AI that can even give the illusion of a will. If they had a will of their own they'd probably be bitching and bellyaching about being put in lewd postions and told what to say.
3 So sick of seeing obvious bullshit like this. Yes perverts like us know hot coffee is hot, most of us also don't care what age cartoons are supposed to be or if they are being raped or if it's based on a true story or fictional/coincidental. All we care about is not seeing NTR in them. If we did we probably wouldn't be downloading banned AVNs marked as such.

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[Nicest_Incest]

I'd love it if Karen was as perverted as the MC and lets Ben fuck her and put a baby in her SSP-style if on Noelle's path (or does the same to his sister if on Karen's path for some weird reason, it's not really NTR if she's not an LI, and it seems it's realsitic and the MC won't get them both in the same playthrough). He's kind of a momma's boy anyway.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Houston, we have a problem.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Playing in Android the menu is gone. - Sorry but I have no idea how to fix things in the android port.

I ran into an error: name 'KarenFigh' is not defined. - will be fixed in the 0.2.2 version, already knew about it, but thanks, keep looking

Turns out the error is on line 1555 of day2.rpy: elif karenfigh and karenneutral:

--

First time playing this. Not bad, although the sex scenes are pretty choppy... With having different routes it sure would be nice if the game would label saves for us and/or allow us to name our saves (IE

You must be registered to see links

). If certain choices/routes lock us out of other paths it would be nice if that information was presented (for instance, some sort of warning like it saying: Noelle Path; Karen Path CLOSED -- it could also put some sort of indication in the affection/heart menu that you're locked out of that character's path? Like a black X over the affection amount?). Another example are the Gina and Paige paths... are those blocked off forever if we don't accept their offers the first time or will there be ways to accept their advances later?). Otherwise I am going to assume some sort of combination of choices will eventually end in a harem path (MC ends up with all of the women and they are all ok with sharing him).

If there are only going to be single path / endings where you can only end up with one woman, that would be good to know too so I can start playthroughs specifically for each character (although that's always a pain since juggling 7 different path/saves can be a lot). If that is the case I would also hope that sex with any other character is avoidable when on a specific path (has been so far but a lot of games force you into situations where you have to cheat for whatever reason...)

Anyways, good work so far. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Houston, we have a problem.

Thanks, I know about this one and in 0.2.2 it will be fixed.

 

[TwistedMoony]

I'd love it if Karen was as perverted as the MC and lets Ben fuck her and put a baby in her SSP-style if on Noelle's path (or does the same to his sister if on Karen's path for some weird reason, it's not really NTR if she's not an LI, and it seems it's realsitic and the MC won't get them both in the same playthrough). He's kind of a momma's boy anyway.

Yeah... sorry no shota content or NTR since MC is the only one who can have sex with Karen.

 

[TwistedMoony]

I ran into an error: name 'KarenFigh' is not defined.

Turns out the error is on line 1555 of day2.rpy: elif karenfigh and karenneutral:

--

First time playing this. Not bad, although the sex scenes are pretty choppy... With having different routes it sure would be nice if the game would label saves for us and/or allow us to name our saves (IE

You must be registered to see links

). If certain choices/routes lock us out of other paths it would be nice if that information was presented (for instance, some sort of warning like it saying: Noelle Path; Karen Path CLOSED -- it could also put some sort of indication in the affection/heart menu that you're locked out of that character's path? Like a black X over the affection amount?). Another example are the Gina and Paige paths... are those blocked off forever if we don't accept their offers the first time or will there be ways to accept their advances later?). Otherwise I am going to assume some sort of combination of choices will eventually end in a harem path (MC ends up with all of the women and they are all ok with sharing him).

If there are only going to be single path / endings where you can only end up with one woman, that would be good to know too so I can start playthroughs specifically for each character (although that's always a pain since juggling 7 different path/saves can be a lot). If that is the case I would also hope that sex with any other character is avoidable when on a specific path (has been so far but a lot of games force you into situations where you have to cheat for whatever reason...)

Anyways, good work so far. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Now replying to all of your questions/suggestions.
First of all, thank you for you input. Some answers can be found on my Discord in a channel called #What is the plan. I write about the different kind of possible endings I plan to do... The emphasis on 'Plan' like it didn't plan on the Gloryhole scene at all it just kinda happened. Stange girl aka Gina wasn't supposed to show up until day 3.
About the saves - I will look into it and see how hard it would be, since I am no expert on that field but try my best. Same with the WT I don't want to give too much away, so for the moment it will stay as is.
But a valid point and I will see what the possibility is to mark the paths being on or off... again, no expert here but I will look around.
Again, thanks for your feedback and suggestions!

 

[Lunesta]

Honestly didn't expect much for some reason but I was pleasantly surprised by the writing. Serious tones usually means the writer cares and it shows. Really looking forward to more! Very well done! ❤

 

[TwistedMoony]

Honestly didn't expect much for some reason but I was pleasantly surprised by the writing. Serious tones usually means the writer cares and it shows. Really looking forward to more! Very well done! ❤

I'll give the compliments to my writer