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Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ AITA - Am I the Asshole [0.3.2][day 3 part 1] [Twisted Moon Games]

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Since today it is offical, not that it came as a surprise since I had the restricted title already.

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Banned on f95... those bastards :D
 

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Since today it is offical, not that it came as a surprise since I had the restricted title already.

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Banned on f95... those bastards :D
What a bunch of lazy cucks.
Oh well, restricted is a badge of honour. Even though this game from the preview looks like it might've just barely skootched under rule 7 it's almost better to have the tag
 
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What a bunch of lazy cucks.
Oh well, restricted is a badge of honour. Even though this game from the preview looks like it might've just barely skootched under rule 7 it's almost better to have the tag
I think they're afraid of what is to cum... come.
The first update WILL break rule 7 :D Spoiler hint hint :D
 
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Alright, I made a 0.1.1 version, it is not much but I thought I'll let you know.
See the changelog in OG post1
 
PC and Mac links for GoFile are reversed.
 
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Just played the game for the first time (the updated version). Promising, but now that your game is officially [Restricted], I think you can drop the pretense that Noëlle is 18. :ROFLMAO:

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Yeah...no. She's obviously not that much older than her brother, who looks maybe 8-10 (remember that adolescent girls are taller than their male peers for a while). She's probably 13 or 14 at the oldest. You could either just state her (young) age or give us the option of picking her age. Either way you need to get rid of references to her college and such, which are just silly. :rolleyes:

Also, it seems like the MC's wife has not "set boundaries" with him so much as maybe "kicked him out and filed a restraining order against him" or more likely "divorced him and fucked him over on custody" especially since she's referred to (at least in one of the choices) as his "ex". Not exactly supportive, and many if not most players will probably hate her right away...so you'll have a tough row to hoe to rehabilitate her in the eyes of the players if you want to make her an LI. :unsure:
 

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Just played the game for the first time (the updated version). Promising, but now that your game is officially [Restricted], I think you can drop the pretense that Noëlle is 18. :ROFLMAO:

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Yeah...no. She's obviously not that much older than her brother, who looks maybe 8-10 (remember that adolescent girls are taller than their male peers for a while). She's probably 13 or 14 at the oldest. You could either just state her (young) age or give us the option of picking her age. Either way you need to get rid of references to her college and such, which are just silly. :rolleyes:

Also, it seems like the MC's wife has not "set boundaries" with him so much as maybe "kicked him out and filed a restraining order against him" or more likely "divorced him and fucked him over on custody" especially since she's referred to (at least in one of the choices) as his "ex". Not exactly supportive, and many if not most players will probably hate her right away...so you'll have a tough row to hoe to rehabilitate her in the eyes of the players if you want to make her an LI. :unsure:
Thank you for your feedback. I was actually thinking about that picking your age stuff and how to implement it.
There were still college references? Okay, we kick them out :D
But storywise, there will be more to come when it comes to MC and his Ex, it might not make sense now, but will come at a later point. I mean day 2 can already be a maybe stepping stone towards something, but no, I need to keep my mouth shut. ;)
Edit: there was indeed just one mention of college. Changed it.
 
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@TwistedMoony i know it is not importend but you forget to change the day1_35_1.png to day1_35_1.webp
Oh really? Damn it
Thanks for letting me know
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That is the extra render I added :D
 
I think they're afraid of what is to cum... come.
The first update WILL break rule 7 :D Spoiler hint hint :D

Let me guess...

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...Is really...


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An interesting surprise for the MC upon awakening from his "dream"? :cool:
 

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Let me guess...
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...Is really...


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An interesting surprise for the MC upon awakening from his "dream"? :cool:
Close, but no!
 
But storywise, there will be more to come when it comes to MC and his Ex, it might not make sense now, but will come at a later point. I mean day 2 can already be a maybe stepping stone towards something, but no, I need to keep my mouth shut.

Surely not this...

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...though that would go a long way toward rehabilitating her in the eyes of the players... :ROFLMAO:

Especially if she were willing to do it right next to her daughter who is sleeping in the MC's bed! :cool:
 

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Ahahahahaha, no that is also not correct :)
Keep guessing ;)
 
@TwistedMoony do you plan for all girls add the age question or only for the daughter? and i found an other mistake.You wrote in the changelog that you added russion translation but if you change the language the game stay in english :)
 
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@TwistedMoony do you plan for all girls add the age question or only for the daughter? and i found an other mistake.You wrote in the changelog that you added russion translation but if you change the language the game stay in english :)
We will work on the age changer, first for Noelle ofc but also for the other girls.

I didn't test the translation, since I thought it should work - will look into this and if the problem is fixed I will uplaod it again with a 0.1.2 :D
 
I didn't test the translation, since I thought it should work - will look into this and if the problem is fixed I will uplaod it again with a 0.1.2 :D
normaly i didn´t test it because i don´t speak this language but after i read that in the changelog i was little confused because i didn´t see the russian script file that was the reason why i test it
 
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