discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ AITA - Am I the Asshole [0.3.2][day 3 part 1] [Twisted Moon Games]

[Cr8tiveM3dia]

Nice start TwistedMoony. Looking forward to seeing how you progress with this.

I would suggest 3 small things for you moving forward.
1. If you have all the .png images saved, I have an external denoiser program that could sharpen up all your images and remove the grainy look over them. I use it on every single image, even when it doesn't really require it, but it really does help majorly.
2. The doctor scene goes from a very dark image where its a little hard to see the doctor to then being majorly bright, too bright. Not sure if you have used the camera flashlight in these images, but could do with being toned down.
3. I get the use of the fading to dark when MC is getting off to sleep... I just sometimes found it a little long.

Story seems interesting going forward, so best of luck with it.

 

[NotLooking]

No it is not. Different themes will be the focus in my game.

Sweet, I'll check it out then. Just didn't feel like diving into some dark game where the MC is a jerk roleplaying as a caring human being again.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Nice start TwistedMoony. Looking forward to seeing how you progress with this.

I would suggest 3 small things for you moving forward.
1. If you have all the .png images saved, I have an external denoiser program that could sharpen up all your images and remove the grainy look over them. I use it on every single image, even when it doesn't really require it, but it really does help majorly.
2. The doctor scene goes from a very dark image where its a little hard to see the doctor to then being majorly bright, too bright. Not sure if you have used the camera flashlight in these images, but could do with being toned down.
3. I get the use of the fading to dark when MC is getting off to sleep... I just sometimes found it a little long.

Story seems interesting going forward, so best of luck with it.

Thank you for the kind words and feedback. I already use a external denoiser

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And I am very aware of my lack of lightning skills, I try to improve those and will hopefully get the hang of it.
The Fading,... yeah I was thinking about that too, but I thought it would help a little to get into the MC...

 

[Jobbie1973]

Keep up a good start with a game developement.
I will follow that project. Go for it.

Greeting with love.

 

[Cr8tiveM3dia]

Thank you for the kind words and feedback. I already use a external denoiser

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And I am very aware of my lack of lightning skills, I try to improve those and will hopefully get the hang of it.
The Fading,... yeah I was thinking about that too, but I thought it would help a little to get into the MC...

Lighting in Daz is always a pain in the ass and very tricky to really ever master.... we can only try. If you normally favour the use of the camera flashlight, instead, I would suggest getting an asset called "Iray Ghost Light Kit 1". With this you can add in invisible panels and direct lighting towards characters, or from above etc... makes brightening up a room easier without it being too much, also you can increase or reduce the brightness also.

Not sure what that one is, the denoiser you have, but if you ever want one myself and a few others use, like Az and 13 I believe then hit me up on here or Discord and I'll give it to you.

The flashing/fading does work, and I can understand entirely the use of it..... just be mindful of the amount in a row, that's all I would suggest.

Keep it up though, story seems intriguing and I look forward to seeing where it goes.

 

[Mr. Tearson]

Alrighty, folks. Seems there has been some arguments. Please try to stay respectful at all times and do not insult each other. You are all entitled to your opinion about the game but it has to remain respectful. Constructive criticism if you feel like this game could be better or whatever. Keep the peace, stay perverted.
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[hotgirl99]

Love it so far, keep up the excellent work!

 

[TwistedMoony]

Thank you very much!

 

[pgm_01]

I enjoyed this demo, and I am looking forward to seeing more.

 

[TwistedMoony]

I enjoyed this demo, and I am looking forward to seeing more.

So am I
But I think all will be good. Started the render process for the first update. And I must say I am off to a good start.
15 renders done, another 16 posed and those are rendering now

 

[kexoj]

Ok, was an enjoyable first edition, but here's one thing that takes me right out of it whenever it happens. A girl (in this case Noelle and Paige) that look like they're 12-15 (young features, height, etc), talking about being 18, going to college or work. It just doesn't fit with the imagery

 

[TwistedMoony]

Ok, was an enjoyable first edition, but here's one thing that takes me right out of it whenever it happens. A girl (in this case Noelle and Paige) that look like they're 12-15 (young features, height, etc), talking about being 18, going to college or work. It just doesn't fit with the imagery

How dare you
They are just small in build... no of course there was a reason behind it. I make them 18+ years old in game and if someone lets say made a mod for it, I can't do anything to forbid it.
So officially they are all 18+ years old!

 

[МONKEEMAN]

Cebs will usually do one if he sees the post, used to be a section to ask him but I couldn't find it when looking for it so I just posted here hoping him or someone else would see it and try to get us one

Unfortunately Cebs may be done porting, he hasn't said for sure yet but he has said he probably will quit

 

[Isoya]

Unfortunately Cebs may be done porting, he hasn't said for sure yet but he has said he probably will quit

Well damn that sucks but someone made a port yesterday

 

[TwistedMoony]

Well damn that sucks but someone made a port yesterday

We can do it ourselfs as well now

 

[Nikt_Wazny]

A little suggestion. It's better if you move the link to download the game on your Discord. We all know that of course all the girls in the game are 18 years old, or they are millennial demons who only look and act like children, or they are adult midgets who only disguise themselves as children. We all know the truth, but sometimes Patreon doesn't see it ^^

 

[TwistedMoony]

A little suggestion. It's better if you move the link to download the game on your Discord. We all know that of course all the girls in the game are 18 years old, or they are millennial demons who only look and act like children, or they are adult midgets who only disguise themselves as children. We all know the truth, but sometimes Patreon doesn't see it ^^

You mean to say, no download link on Patreon, just direct people to the download link on discord. Otherwise someone from Patreon might download it, play it and goes, "naaaah not on here?

 

[hrmm]

That's generally the safest way with Patreon. Your options are basically: hope Patreon doesn't notice you and no one notifies them, have links but they're for a sanitized version of the game and any incest/loli stuff is in a patch offsite, or no links to the game on Patreon at all and subs get directed to the Discord.

For Subscribestar they're pretty much fine with whatever and you don't need to jump through those hoops, but they're glacially slow at approving new dev accounts.

 

[exobite]

@Isoya & @TwistedMoony, I made a quick Android port. Hope it helps.

AITA v0.1.0 - Unofficial Android​

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Is this patched already?

 

[TwistedMoony]

That's generally the safest way with Patreon. Your options are basically: hope Patreon doesn't notice you and no one notifies them, have links but they're for a sanitized version of the game and any incest/loli stuff is in a patch offsite, or no links to the game on Patreon at all and subs get directed to the Discord.

For Subscribestar they're pretty much fine with whatever and you don't need to jump through those hoops, but they're glacially slow at approving new dev accounts.

Thanks for the tipps! It is appreciated!