My Daughter, My Wingman.
Hi, 13. Sooo, my personal preference from the presented tales is My Daughter My Wingman.
Incest and loli content is a popular combo. The narrative may not seem as fulfilling as a murder drama or a weird furry story, but you can jazz up the narrative with some creative writing. I'm not sure on balance about the split protag. Players invest(read insert) themselves in the mc. There is generally a desire to "conquer" the love interests. Having the daughter do the footwork and vetting and pushing the girls, takes agency away from the male character. I'd recommend a reconceptualization that maybe allows the man to meet and win over the girls with less efforts from the daughter. Let the man lead. If the daughter wants to secretly help, ok. But I'd find it personally more fun to choose my own love interests and seduce them without help.
Add-ons:
Lillyana from the farm should be added. She has the looks of a sexy airhead.
Audio: the crackling fire and the rain ambience was so nice. So peaceful. Find some scenes to use that. Ambient sounds are under used in avns.
Also, I may pm you with a story concept that combines exotic adventure, violence and lolis. Uh... ok that sounds weird. Haha. The second and third elements don't get combined.