Ok, I like the premise, but some MAJOR issues jumped out at me. First, why is MC's mom being turned the third issue he is concerned about. Like an afterthought? OK, he almost died and found out for sure they are vamps, so that is first, but HIS MOM WAS TURNED. He acts like its a minor inconvenience. (Note: This is one of MY top reactions and she's not my mom). There is no true explanation for why before he just moves on to the next issue. "Ok, mom's a vamp. Interesting, well, I hope she's happy, I guess. No more wine at least!"
A lesser, but also problematic issue, is that he didn't tell Kelly that her psycho ex tried to kill him. Anyone with a brain would understand that if he was willing to kill the MC just for being seen with her, that he might do something terrible to her and her family??? This is set this up for conflict later, but it makes the MC look like an idiot and he's already leaning that way with the way he fell for Kina to begin with and left his sisters with their vamp mom when he suspected her, but didn't know "the rules"
I like the premise, but this needs some logic thrown into it a bit more. We can understand the why you might not want to push the Mom turn or the Ex BF narrative right away, but give us a better reason why from the MC's POV. Like with Ravenous, I like the LIs designs and the personalities we've seen from them. There is enough good here and I will certainly continue playing to see were it goes.