discussion VN AI Ren'Py Unity Domination In Desire [0.130 beta] [Fap-e-Nator]

[doctorpinch]

Great game and I love it. As someone else said, I can't wait for the corruption of more girls (equally hot, I hope) and the family. I think your hebe girl hits the perfect sweet spot. While I can't wait to corrupt the younger sister, I hope she's only a year younger, not the young child that's in the image for that imagining. That said, I do think this is pretty dark. Obviously, I like dark as a pure fantasy, and what can be more pure fantasy than AI. No complaints about any of it (though her fantasy of being killed was more than a little offputting. I think it would be better to play on the fear of abandonment. But that's me and you're writing to your own kinks. I'm just standing by, admiring....)
Videos are great, btw! and so is the model (obviously)
As far as future kinks to add, I would love to see anal. I'm not that into impregnation, and the humiliation of coerced anal is as hot as anything!

Specific items:

1. Screen 1 - "Enter the main characters [s.b. "character's"] name and age..." - these two screens are confusing. The standard expectation is that we're going to be putting in her name and age, so even though I put in my fictional avatar's name, I put in her fantasy age. (The screen asking for the MC's age is actually a page later in the story after the narration says "... his gaze settles on a pretty young woman nearby...")
Later, when I find out that I've got a VIP room for my 15th birthday, that was a little off. Getting the MC's name and age should be done at a blank screen before the story starts to avoid this confusion.
2. Line 20 - s.b. "Someone so good[-]looking and well[-]dress[ed] must be here with a lot of people, wouldn't he?)"
3. I'm sure you know this already, but her drink changes as she walks down the hall.
4. Line 27 - tears are a little early, but I love the tears....
5. Line 30 - hear panties have disappeared early. We're going to be ripping off the panties later. (plus the tears have disappeared).
6. Line 52 - what a GREAT image!
7. Images are really consistent and lovely, but I think they start to drift around line 92. The image at line 106 seems way off, with a much broader face and wider waist. (I haven't gone through all the choices yet, so don't know how the other choices play out.)
8. The girls at line 149 look AMAZING (even though they are already pregnant). I can't wait to fuck them!
9. Great family, but can we age mom down by 8 or 9 years and age little sis up by 5 or 6? (line 153)
10. Having a no pregnancy option would be great, with the future pictures defaulting to the same girls without pregnancy....

Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for chapter 2 (3, 4, 5, 6, etc!)

 

[pregame]

nice start, the age and name thing is confusing as I was not sure who we were aging and naming originally. However keep this option in. the content is good and I hope you maintain the original story idea. Please hurry to the mother and younger daughter, I think the mother could be aged down a bit but dont mess with the daughter, she is fantastic and would be a great addition to the vision. Hope to see the middle school kids and hope they really look like middle school. thanks for the game

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

Pro: girl is really really hot. nice find on that face lora (or if you made it yourself well done)

Cons: i have an attention span even shorter than my tiny dick. the text speed has to be nearly instant so that I'm not waiting around for letters to appear 1 by 1.

because of the con I only browsed the game with the skip mode on. it has a ton of potential and I love how active the dev is.

I hope you dont burn out tending to all of us whiners

Looking forward to what comes out in the future.

the text speed is adjustable in settings, but there is a 2 second delay before you can continue to next dialogue so ill look into linking them a bit.

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

Great game and I love it. As someone else said, I can't wait for the corruption of more girls (equally hot, I hope) and the family. I think your hebe girl hits the perfect sweet spot. While I can't wait to corrupt the younger sister, I hope she's only a year younger, not the young child that's in the image for that imagining. That said, I do think this is pretty dark. Obviously, I like dark as a pure fantasy, and what can be more pure fantasy than AI. No complaints about any of it (though her fantasy of being killed was more than a little offputting. I think it would be better to play on the fear of abandonment. But that's me and you're writing to your own kinks. I'm just standing by, admiring....)
Videos are great, btw! and so is the model (obviously)
As far as future kinks to add, I would love to see anal. I'm not that into impregnation, and the humiliation of coerced anal is as hot as anything!

Specific items:

1. Screen 1 - "Enter the main characters [s.b. "character's"] name and age..." - these two screens are confusing. The standard expectation is that we're going to be putting in her name and age, so even though I put in my fictional avatar's name, I put in her fantasy age. (The screen asking for the MC's age is actually a page later in the story after the narration says "... his gaze settles on a pretty young woman nearby...")
Later, when I find out that I've got a VIP room for my 15th birthday, that was a little off. Getting the MC's name and age should be done at a blank screen before the story starts to avoid this confusion.
2. Line 20 - s.b. "Someone so good[-]looking and well[-]dress[ed] must be here with a lot of people, wouldn't he?)"
3. I'm sure you know this already, but her drink changes as she walks down the hall.
4. Line 27 - tears are a little early, but I love the tears....
5. Line 30 - hear panties have disappeared early. We're going to be ripping off the panties later. (plus the tears have disappeared).
6. Line 52 - what a GREAT image!
7. Images are really consistent and lovely, but I think they start to drift around line 92. The image at line 106 seems way off, with a much broader face and wider waist. (I haven't gone through all the choices yet, so don't know how the other choices play out.)
8. The girls at line 149 look AMAZING (even though they are already pregnant). I can't wait to fuck them!
9. Great family, but can we age mom down by 8 or 9 years and age little sis up by 5 or 6? (line 153)
10. Having a no pregnancy option would be great, with the future pictures defaulting to the same girls without pregnancy....

Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for chapter 2 (3, 4, 5, 6, etc!)

wow detailed response..

"though her fantasy of being killed was more than a little off-putting." - this was meant (at least in my head) more so to be a submission to the MC saying he was going to off her, and her deciding (if he's going to kill me then I might as well go out in a blaze of glory) , not really her fantasizing about actually being killed.

optional anal will be added.. (personally I hate being forced to do anal when there is a pretty pussy right in front of me..)

1. I guess I shouldn't have assumed MC would be "You" or the Male as default for everyone. Ill change the wording a bit to make it pretty hard not to know.
2. sorry I'm not sure what you are saying here.
3. in the dialogue he hands her another glass (Non Alcoholic Beverage) although I might have been 1 render off.
4-5. yeah... I may edit the dialogue a bit to make that flow a bit better.
6.
7. ill have to look back through I'm not sure.
8. I definitely gave the impregnation crowd a few Easter eggs.
9. the Mom I agree, the sister well I think I need to go to 2 younger sisters 8-11-ish and 12-15-ish , there's two crowds here that like certain age ranges. ill have a choice of 'i want both girls' , or 'only the older sister the little sister too young.'
10. I may modify a few things and only show pregnancy if its chosen.

Thanks for the great feedback and ill see what I can do on more content.
it'll be at-least a few weeks before I start a new chapter as I want to fix some of the reported issue and get the Linux and Android users taken care of soon.

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

nice start, the age and name thing is confusing as I was not sure who we were aging and naming originally. However keep this option in. the content is good and I hope you maintain the original story idea. Please hurry to the mother and younger daughter, I think the mother could be aged down a bit but dont mess with the daughter, she is fantastic and would be a great addition to the vision. Hope to see the middle school kids and hope they really look like middle school. thanks for the game

yeah I've had a few complaints about not being clear about who the MC is, so ill likely edit the dialogue to make this clear.

for the rest
thanks for the feedback

 

[Davidtoxy]

so nice start i take a seat here for futures updates and new story

 

[doctorpinch]

wow detailed response..

"though her fantasy of being killed was more than a little off-putting." - this was meant (at least in my head) more so to be a submission to the MC saying he was going to off her, and her deciding (if he's going to kill me then I might as well go out in a blaze of glory) , not really her fantasizing about actually being killed.

optional anal will be added.. (personally I hate being forced to do anal when there is a pretty pussy right in front of me..)

1. I guess I shouldn't have assumed MC would be "You" or the Male as default for everyone. Ill change the wording a bit to make it pretty hard not to know.
2. sorry I'm not sure what you are saying here.
3. in the dialogue he hands her another glass (Non Alcoholic Beverage) although I might have been 1 render off.
4-5. yeah... I may edit the dialogue a bit to make that flow a bit better.
6.
7. ill have to look back through I'm not sure.
8. I definitely gave the impregnation crowd a few Easter eggs.
9. the Mom I agree, the sister well I think I need to go to 2 younger sisters 8-11-ish and 12-15-ish , there's two crowds here that like certain age ranges. ill have a choice of 'i want both girls' , or 'only the older sister the little sister too young.'
10. I may modify a few things and only show pregnancy if its chosen.

Thanks for the great feedback and ill see what I can do on more content.
it'll be at-least a few weeks before I start a new chapter as I want to fix some of the reported issue and get the Linux and Android users taken care of soon.

That #2 thing is just that the English grammar is not perfect. "Good-looking" and "well-dressed" take hyphens, and it should be "well-dressed", not "well-dress". That was the only real grammar error I saw, though I have to confess that I wasn't reading as carefully the second time through....
I appreciate the detailed thoughts as well. I really like the game and it hits all the right buttons, so extremely happy you are engaged with it and so willing to take feedback. The story is outstanding, and I appreciate that it's difficult to stay reasonable when there are a thousand voices barking in your ear, so responding to each of us as we have comments is very impressive.
Thanks!

 

[tom45]

Nice game and very nice art. I am looking forward to your next update. Keep up the good work.

 

[SilentHunter]

The optimization has clearly benefited the project. I'll keep an eye on further development, it's a very good start.

 

[Grankaiser]

here what i see from playing it.
1st.
there is to much disconnect between what is going on in dialogue to what the actual renders show. this probably cause to many ai been trained on scraped data from soft porn sites. this is why the whole time most people are soft smiling like idiots.
2nd
debug goes nuts when a onscreen choise like cum inside is shown. i can literaly see tghe games backend begin toi chug.
3rd
like people mentioned the people are to much a clone of each other.

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

here what i see from playing it.
1st.
there is to much disconnect between what is going on in dialogue to what the actual renders show. this probably cause to many ai been trained on scraped data from soft porn sites. this is why the whole time most people are soft smiling like idiots.
2nd
debug goes nuts when a onscreen choise like cum inside is shown. i can literaly see tghe games backend begin toi chug.
3rd
like people mentioned the people are to much a clone of each other.

The soft smile is an annoying issue, its the default for a face (not just NSFW content) and is hard to prompt away.

I'll look more into whats going on with the choices and why they are bugging out / slowing down the game (likely an issue in my code in the update function calling repeatedly) as there is no reason that should be happening.

Were you on the newest update? .125beta as it had some really good optimizations added.

The clones are mostly in the school girl pics ? Yeah the overall with out context was good looking but it did look like a lot of incest already took place .
Thanks for the feedback.

 

[NoPoints]

Played thought it, and wow the model is hot as hell! Animations also good, here and there some bugs but it's beta no problem.
The menu needs work and is almoste 1980's bad.
Like my fellow friends above also said, the hand icon needs to swap for something else. Like spacebar or enter.
The skip function needs to be the 'ctrl' like in most games.
Love to see where this go's.
Would love to have multiple paths for re-playable content.

Keep up the great work!

 

[Goofygoofygal]

Looks great! Can't wait for the Android version

 

[Elezghar]

Alright, finally tried it out and man do I hate unity to start with but let's not get into that (somehow managed to get every click on enter making the story go backwards at some point ).

No but I'm no fan of AI-art generally, it's a bit uncanny for me but this was surprisingly good. The girl is 10/10, just my taste in every single way possible so that alone will make we want to keep playing.

Also love the hint of corrupting her family, that is exactly the way I want to see the game moving forward.

Not much else story wise to talk about but renders and animations are top class and given how much time I know you have spent trying to make it look right/quality control I will just applaud you. Was the time when she was drinking wine in the corridor that her face looked different but other than that it's very consistent.

Great work overall but please let me set text speed to 1.0! I can't stand waiting for text to roll att all.

Overall 9/10 and I hope you will continue now when you have got things going a bit.

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

Alright, finally tried it out and man do I hate unity to start with but let's not get into that (somehow managed to get every click on enter making the story go backwards at some point ).

No but I'm no fan of AI-art generally, it's a bit uncanny for me but this was surprisingly good. The girl is 10/10, just my taste in every single way possible so that alone will make we want to keep playing.

Also love the hint of corrupting her family, that is exactly the way I want to see the game moving forward.

Not much else story wise to talk about but renders and animations are top class and given how much time I know you have spent trying to make it look right/quality control I will just applaud you. Was the time when she was drinking wine in the corridor that her face looked different but other than that it's very consistent.

Great work overall but please let me set text speed to 1.0! I can't stand waiting for text to roll att all.

Overall 9/10 and I hope you will continue now when you have got things going a bit.

Can i ask what things about it being Unity was an issue ? Maybe i can improve them.
Didnt i add Dialogue typing speed in the settings in this update ? (hint: the number is time between each letter, so lower .01 is faster)

Going backwards ... Must be a coding issue ill look into that.

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[Sharpened]

Redheads definitely gonna give this a go soon, looks great dev!

 

[StealthGiant25]

Im just doing this for fun and to give back to the community. Appreciate the kind words and if there's anything you didn't like feel free to post that as well. That's how I'll get better.

Also a note to everyone, interest in another chapter is what will motivate me.

As others noted continuty could be better, I know that can be hard with AI. I hope we get to see those younger girls.

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

I'll sit here waiting for the droid version lol

Android version is live... Let me know of any issues you may have with it. I already know i forgot to lock the screen rotation that will be fixed fairly soon.

Post automatically merged: Dec 16, 2025

As others noted continuty could be better, I know that can be hard with AI. I hope we get to see those younger girls.

Each chapter will relate to each other. Like a book. But youll be able to select a chapter rather than just being one continuous AVN.

 

[kamakaze274]

Android link not working

 

[Elezghar]

Can i ask what things about it being Unity was an issue ? Maybe i can improve them.
Didnt i add Dialogue typing speed in the settings in this update ? (hint: the number is time between each letter, so lower .01 is faster)

Going backwards ... Must be a coding issue ill look into that.

Thanks for the feedback.

Yes but I want instant speed, 1.0. I don't want to wait for them to pronounce it. I think 95% of pple want 1.0 speed. Other than that I'm actually quite pleased