discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Early Love [v0.8.2] [KindyGuY]

[Myuhinny]

@KindyGuY

You might want to watch character placement so that they match with everything around them. The MC's floating a good foot or more above the ground which is even more noticeable when looking at the MC's school desk.

I also saw that some proofreading is needed for the English translation there were also some spelling errors and some places where character names were spelled wrong like Jum instead of Jim Fran and Franl instead of Frank.

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[Frankly51]

@KindyGuY

You might want to watch character placement so that they match with everything around them. The MC's floating a good foot or more above the ground which is even more noticeable when looking at the MC's school desk.

I also saw that some proofreading is needed for the English translation there were also some spelling errors and some places where character names were spelled wrong like Jum instead of Jim Fran and Franl instead of Frank.

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well from the point of view that i have of that scene .. he is touching the ground .. he's heading behind his desk from the door .. so if we check for field of view and perspective ... its normal that his foot be were it is right now ... or he is superman and is really floating .. what do i know

 

[Leion141]

I keep trying to download mediafire and mega but get download errors when I do. I am trying to get the full 7.1 game and it just keeps failing. Any suggestions or anyone have a compressed or zip file I can download?

 

[User_5261]

I keep trying to download mediafire and mega but get download errors when I do. I am trying to get the full 7.1 game and it just keeps failing. Any suggestions or anyone have a compressed or zip file I can download?

Use 7zip to extract the archive. it needs a password. If you use only the windows .zip extrractor it will give you an error.

 

[Leion141]

Use 7zip to extract the archive. it needs a password. If you use only the windows .zip extrractor it will give you an error.

not what im asking but thanks - I cannot download the media fire EarlyLove-0.7.1-pc_ENG_RUS.zip in the first place - it keeps saying the file is incomplete or corrupted.

Never mind - I figured it out. Mediafire's links just kept dying for some reason.

 

[pothb]

well from the point of view that i have of that scene .. he is touching the ground .. he's heading behind his desk from the door .. so if we check for field of view and perspective ... its normal that his foot be were it is right now ... or he is superman and is really floating .. what do i know

I think you're right that he's touching the ground, i put it up to shadows, or rather the lack thereof. It looks like he's higher up because there is no shadow to basically show where his foot intersects with the ground.

 

[KindyGuY]

@KindyGuY

You might want to watch character placement so that they match with everything around them. The MC's floating a good foot or more above the ground which is even more noticeable when looking at the MC's school desk.

I also saw that some proofreading is needed for the English translation there were also some spelling errors and some places where character names were spelled wrong like Jum instead of Jim Fran and Franl instead of Frank.

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Thank you very much for your review!)) I'll try to fix everything, and about the screenshot you attached, it's just there is no shadow, so that's why it seems he is floating above the ground , I don't know why , but I'll try to fix it too

 

[KindyGuY]

not what im asking but thanks - I cannot download the media fire EarlyLove-0.7.1-pc_ENG_RUS.zip in the first place - it keeps saying the file is incomplete or corrupted.

Never mind - I figured it out. Mediafire's links just kept dying for some reason.

Honestly, I don't know why you are getting errors when trying to download, I tried to download on my phone and it's working, no errors, it's already 200+ people downloaded and there were no complaints))

 

[Rider]

Knew update were the link for android

 

[Hellster]

Knew update were the link for android

Click the download link, it has PC/Mac and Android

 

[SoulRipper1990]

Is there maybe a Walktrough Mod ?

 

[KindyGuY]

Is there maybe a Walktrough Mod ?

Not yet, but I want to make a gallery walkthrough in future updates, so everyone could know what scenes they missed

 

[User_480]

Hello Kindy, what is the password to open the images?

 

[KindyGuY]

Hello Kindy, what is the password to open the images?

Hello, What images? Are you talking about the old gallery?

 

[lolsis]

Is anyone else having problems extracting the 0.7 and 7.1 update on linux? I keep getting an error even when putting in the password. I'vbe also tried using unzip and unrar command and it either says it doesnt exist and cannot open.

 

[oldfart69]

@KindyGuY​

I have now finished this update. I liked it.

1. I knew there had to be something up with Frank and young girls. Will we find out there was more to his Giving Lily and Maggie a ride?
2. Also enjoyed the scene with Maggie, she is very forward.
3. I guess Arya will be a part of his harem, I also see her dad, Jim as a young girl type. Will we learn if she knew she flashed MC.
4. Lastly a question, How did Lily get so good at giving head? Will we find out? Did she play with Maggie and maybe Maggie's Brother, before she could stopped them?

 

[KindyGuY]

@KindyGuY​

I have now finished this update. I liked it.

1. I knew there had to be something up with Frank and young girls. Will we find out there was more to his Giving Lily and Maggie a ride?
2. Also enjoyed the scene with Maggie, she is very forward.
3. I guess Arya will be a part of his harem, I also see her dad, Jim as a young girl type. Will we learn if she knew she flashed MC.
4. Lastly a question, How did Lily get so good at giving head? Will we find out? Did she play with Maggie and maybe Maggie's Brother, before she could stopped them?

Hello, thank you!

1. Yeah, I'm planning to show scenes when Frank gave Lily and Maggie a ride.
2. Yes, she is, there will be more good content with her)))
3. Didn't think about Jim, for now - it's just a secondary character. Do you mean about flashing during the massage? She did it on purpose, she decided to reward MC for a good massage.
4. She didn't know about her skills in blowjob, she just doesn't have a gag reflex when giving a blowjob))) Maggie's brother? AFAIK Maggie doesn't have a brother, or maybe I forgot something, but I think I didn't mention anything about something like that..

 

[KindyGuY]

Is anyone else having problems extracting the 0.7 and 7.1 update on linux? I keep getting an error even when putting in the password. I'vbe also tried using unzip and unrar command and it either says it doesnt exist and cannot open.

I'm sorry, I've never had linux, can't help you with that, all I can advice you is that you better use Winrar or 7zip to not getting any errors when extracting)

 

[lolsis]

I'm sorry, I've never had linux, can't help you with that, all I can advice you is that you better use Winrar or 7zip to not getting any errors when extracting)

I've just tried both all of them in the terminal I Keep getting Error: No More files
and
unknown error -2147024872

Ill try downloading the whole game rather than just the update and see if that works.

Update:

I downloaded the full game, I was able to extract it with 7 zip but it would extract all of the files into the same folder regardless of how I tried and now I'm getting an error:
Please compile the platform files using the instructions in README.md
or point them to an existing installation using ./after_checkout.sh <path>.

Alternatively, please set RENPY_PLATFORM to a different platform.

I can't get it to work I've never had this problem before even with other passworded games. Hopefully this doesnt happen with future updates.

 

[oldfart69]

Hello, thank you!

1. Yeah, I'm planning to show scenes when Frank gave Lily and Maggie a ride.
2. Yes, she is, there will be more good content with her)))
3. Didn't think about Jim, for now - it's just a secondary character. Do you mean about flashing during the massage? She did it on purpose, she decided to reward MC for a good massage.
4. She didn't know about her skills in blowjob, she just doesn't have a gag reflex when giving a blowjob))) Maggie's brother? AFAIK Maggie doesn't have a brother, or maybe I forgot something, but I think I didn't mention anything about something like that..

Thanks for answering my questions.

1. The ride with Frank can go so many ways. He has to drop one off 1st, so he will alone with the other. Who will drop off 1st? Maggie, then he can sweet talk an upset Lily. Drop Lily off 1st and then he already has heard about Maggie being willing, Frank try for a turn? Or Both together does he try to get them to play with him?
2. Maggie has done anal with MC don't see much more shocking she can go. Maybe Dad/Daughter/BFF scene? That would be a step higher.
3. As for Arya, I was talking of her flashing when the played the game and she got up to stretch. Did she remember she had no panties on? And did she want MC to get another view?
4. Lastly I had mixed up Maggie with a BFF from another game. In that one the older brother and father taught the BFF to kiss. I just have a hard time sometimes keeping all these back stories straight.

Also I still haven't been able to get on Bootsy, having trouble with my credit card being declined, my bank they are not getting the transaction MasterCard is the place that is stopping the approval. I will figure something out.

Great Game BTW.