discussion Ren'Py [Koikatsu] A World Of My Own [Day 1-5] [SmogJonkler]

[HuiEtyud]

Okay. All platforms mirrored. Happy gooning, folks. =D

 

[mandomedo]

can someone make a compressed version ?

 

[ObservantShadow]

mega is the worst mirror....

Mega isn't bad overall
Of course there a 5gb limit when free
And it's slower than PixelDrain and GoFile
But I wouldn't say it's bad
No ads

 

[Call Me Huff]

Mega isn't bad overall
Of course there a 5gb limit when free
And it's slower than PixelDrain and GoFile
But I wouldn't say it's bad
No ads

its freezes a lot for me and i even have premium. I usually stick to pixeldrain now.

 

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[Corellius]

finally someone who understands these things aren't their secret audition to become novelists, running around trying to go "look how great i am, i write so good" and that the story in a porn game exists only to explain the context of the scenes. magic god powers is more than enough of a "why/how" don't need more. i look forward to your career with great interest.

 

[SmogJonkler]

finally someone who understands these things aren't their secret audition to become novelists, running around trying to go "look how great i am, i write so good" and that the story in a porn game exists only to explain the context of the scenes. magic god powers is more than enough of a "why/how" don't need more. i look forward to your career with great interest.

I suck at writing. If I had to choose between a Saw trap and writing a mediocre story to save my life, I'd flip the table and go for a shotgun to the face.

 

[HuiEtyud]

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I suck at writing. If I had to choose between a Saw trap and writing a mediocre story to save my life, I'd flip the table and go for a shotgun to the face.

Just a heads up, I added the German translation to the OP. Thought you'd like to know.

 

[SmogJonkler]

Just a heads up, I added the German translation to the OP. Thought you'd like to know.

That's alright.

 

[SmogJonkler]

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I am honestly surprised that I got a translation this early, thank you for your service.

 

[SmogJonkler]

Here's an unofficial proofread script by jaredh72.
I haven't checked it out yet though.

 

[lazysherlock]

A World Of My Own [Day 1-5] [SmogJonkler]​

Compressed Windows (Untested)

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[Pero3]

Holy shit dude, I get it, the MC is *thinking*.
You somehow failed to foresee this being very annoying for the player when reading?

 

[SmogJonkler]

Holy shit dude, I get it, the MC is *thinking*.
You somehow failed to foresee this being very annoying for the player when reading?

I thought the pauses would help the flow but I guess I can delete them if it's that bad

 

[Pero3]

I thought the pauses would help the flow but I guess I can delete them if it's that bad

Just do it in italics or something. It's not that intrusive.

 

[jaredh72]

Here's an unofficial proofread script by jaredh72.
I haven't checked it out yet though.

To clarify for others - while I wasn't super thorough and probably missed a few things, most likely grammatical than spelling, I did correct a LOT of typos. I did spend a couple of hours going through it. I am a native English speaker, and my spelling has always been impeccable. I have proofread a few other games before (ex. Lewd Town Adventures). I did leave the original wording. If there were any coding issues in the text, then they would still be there. I have some knowledge of Renpy coding, but not much (ex. I could probably correct a misreferenced image or misspelled variable, but not really add new ones).

I sent it to the dev first in case they wanted to go over it first, and also because I wasn't sure it would be appropriate for me to just post it myself. I likely won't be able to do it every update, but I might be able to every couple of updates or so. Feedback (if any) might sway the likelihood, but I won't ask people to go out of their way to compare.

 

[94-kun]

I wonder if we could see both girls and women being pregnant with their pregnant stomach.

 

[SmogJonkler]

I wonder if we could see both girls and women being pregnant with their pregnant stomach.

Maybe on the next Saturday.

I haven't yet started working on Sunday yet so I could also use it to do non canon content if there's enough proper interest within the next week.

 

[SmogJonkler]

I'm pretty sure Koikatsu has pregnancy settings so it shouldn't be too hard to do but dealing with the game mode puts more stress on my laptop than the studio mode for some reason.

 

[SmogJonkler]

Itchio has started delisting and deleting games just like steam.
This means that the Mom only version which is currently the only thing I have made any money from will likely be gone by the end of the month.

fuck Master Card, fuck Visa and go sign this thing

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These are fucking American companies as usual and the fact that the fucking Orange baby is the current king of the hill means that absolutely fuck all will be done in the next 4 years.
It's been fun working on this so far so I'm definitely not going to abandon it over this, I'll just start treating it like a hobby and only work on it whenever I have time to spare or need to destress.
Good day and I hope you all wake up to better news than me.