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5.00 star(s) 2 reviews
I found this game somewhere else and they mentioned this site so I had to interrupt my.... gaming session... to check it out.

The game is quite intense - not that much story and the story is really more of an excuse for the h-scenes. Worth a look.
 
I found this game somewhere else and they mentioned this site so I had to interrupt my.... gaming session... to check it out.

The game is quite intense - not that much story and the story is really more of an excuse for the h-scenes. Worth a look.
I'd dispute that. A lot of writers bloviate and say nothing at all. This is succinctly written, encompasses a lot of the backstory in a natural way, and has well above average narrative pacing for this space. I could wipe my ass with all the Hugo-length (but not quality) tripe that VN writers put out; more so now that they aren't even typing the drivel themselves but outsourcing it to energy-intensive speech token generators.
 
A game that is a supernova in the Ren'Py, I look forward to the creator's next game. (y)
 
This was such an unexpected delight, came out of nowhere and its a complete (albeit short) game. Is there anywhere we can support this dev? Would love them to keep making games.
 
This was such an unexpected delight, came out of nowhere and its a complete (albeit short) game. Is there anywhere we can support this dev? Would love them to keep making games.
There are no support links, and afaik he did this just for fun. Dunno if another is planned just for fun or not but given the time and effort it takes I doubt it, and I also kinda doubt he has interest in making boring crap Patreon would approve that would be mostly the opposite of this one (no lolis, hebes, incest, forced sex, or anything else that make an AVN worth fapping to).
 
Sucks this was so short, but I guess there's only so much you can do with a story about being stuck in a metal maze and forced to fuck your family.
Honestly, brevity is one of this game's strengths. Not many VN creators have and execute a concept with definitive, fully self-contained, start and end points.
 
I'd dispute that. A lot of writers bloviate and say nothing at all. This is succinctly written, encompasses a lot of the backstory in a natural way, and has well above average narrative pacing for this space. I could wipe my ass with all the Hugo-length (but not quality) tripe that VN writers put out; more so now that they aren't even typing the drivel themselves but outsourcing it to energy-intensive speech token generators.
Overall I agree. Some tend to go in all directions and often present way too many characters to get interested in any. It may just be the theme/topic in this particular case that I didn't connect with.
That said, short is often better as others have said as well. At least the story here had a beginning and end without losing itself - and it still told an actual story... maybe my message was harsher than I meant it :unsure:
 
This game starts out really fun, but mid way through they ruin the game by revealing everything to soon. It could have gone on for a lot more fun without the protagonist knowing what was going on. I think the dev rushed to end it to quickly.
 
This game starts out really fun, but mid way through they ruin the game by revealing everything to soon. It could have gone on for a lot more fun without the protagonist knowing what was going on. I think the dev rushed to end it to quickly.
Nah, because then you end up with never-ending shit AVNs that were wore out years ago like Grandma's House. At least with this one no one can say the dev was milking subs to death, aside from there's really only so long you can drag a story on about being kidnapped and stuck in a maze without it getting repetitive and monotonous and/or devolving into just the sex scene of the month.
 
Hearing alot of good things about this dev, looks like ill be trying this and his new one.
 
Really good VN. Making the plot obvious makes it a lot more fun and way less rapey.
 
Some of us like rapey though =P (in a video game).
Not my favourite thing, but I can support it. I'll never insult a person's kink on here. Hell, I like NTR and seeing the way people freak out about it is pretty much just a joke at this point.
 
rapey, even in digital, fantasy format still sometimes goes too far.

if it's consensual by all means go for broke but not just random thugs raping others, that's not cool.
 
rapey, even in digital, fantasy format still sometimes goes too far.

if it's consensual by all means go for broke but not just random thugs raping others, that's not cool.
Ironic coming from someone whose handle is "fthegovernment" lol. I'd expect a more live and let live perspective.
Not my favourite thing, but I can support it. I'll never insult a person's kink on here. Hell, I like NTR and seeing the way people freak out about it is pretty much just a joke at this point.
Yea, the anti-NTR fervor is insane. I'm not a fan of the genre; I don't hate it though. The analogy I make is to other kinks I'm neutral on like foot stuff. If a game has some foot content, I'll play it; I'll even look at the foot content. If it's like 70% or more foot content, I'd definitely ignore it, and go about my day. I'm not gonna start an anti-foot content brigade and organize on discord and in DMs with other anti-foot loons to threaten and harass devs that make foot content. But that's what the anti-NTR crowd does. They literally center their whole online lives around trying to destroy people who are into a genre they don't like. Seriously can't imagine something more demented that isn't criminal.
 
Ironic coming from someone whose handle is "fthegovernment" lol. I'd expect a more live and let live perspective.

Yea, the anti-NTR fervor is insane. I'm not a fan of the genre; I don't hate it though. The analogy I make is to other kinks I'm neutral on like foot stuff. If a game has some foot content, I'll play it; I'll even look at the foot content. If it's like 70% or more foot content, I'd definitely ignore it, and go about my day. I'm not gonna start an anti-foot content brigade and organize on discord and in DMs with other anti-foot loons to threaten and harass devs that make foot content. But that's what the anti-NTR crowd does. They literally center their whole online lives around trying to destroy people who are into a genre they don't like. Seriously can't imagine something more demented that isn't criminal.
you really gotta make this happen in public ??
ok, here you go.

 
This game was a nice surprising find and was delightful... so far i like this game developer and cant wait for more from them
 
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