discussion Abandoned Ren'Py DAZ My Sister's Devious Plot [0.4] [MacroxssZ]

[Dean]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

You play a 20-year-old whose father has been missing for six months and is presumed dead by almost everyone else. You know otherwise, as he is not an easy man to kill. You are determined to find him, or at least what happened to him, all while you are doing everything in your power to care for your younger sister and keep her happy. Little do you know, your sister has been working on a devious plot that will help bring numerous other girls into your life. Between taking care of your sister, the needs of these new girls, and your investigation into your father's disappearance, you will eventually begin to find out the reason for her plot.

This game (as of 0.3) has a NETORI scene. This is different than NETORARE so please understand the difference before getting upset. This netori scene is 100% AVOIDABLE. Meaning if you choose to, the scene DOES NOT HAPPEN. This is different than skippable where you just do not see it. It never happens.
SPOILER for those who want to know more. MC fucks Alexis and her husband finds out.
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Spoiler: Genre

3dcg, Incest, loli, Male protagonist, oral sex, small tits, vaginal sex

Spoiler: changelog

0.4
445 new renders
Start and end of day5

0.3
297 new renders
4 (well, 6, but 2 are small) animations
Day 4 starts and ends (with a little preview of Day 5 morning at the end)

0.2
306 new renders
day 2 and 3 finished
newer portraits for speaking/thinking character
made Roxy scene optional due to extremely vocal request (She is very sad)
better splitting of versions to keep the normal and f95 versions separate
new main menu image
changed fanbox button to patreon
all new buttons as the exact font/color of the old ones was lost.
added discord button to point to new server
fixed K's name change code as it was not working properly

0.1.1
added character portraits to side of text
lowered text so it covers less of the images
fixed the phone number to not show Heather's name before MC would have had her number in his phone
edited name labels to show "unknown person" if we do not yet know the characters' name
edited K's name to change color after an event lets us know more about them
lowered bitrate of the strip club animation video as it was not able to play for multiple users

0.1
Initial Realease

Spoiler: DevNote

This game will never have Netorare or sharing (with other males). There will be choices, but none in the early game. Also, I hope to improve my hardware to allow me to make higher quality renders if the game is successful so that the overall quality of the visuals improves.-Please join our discord and let us know in #msdp-feedback if you find any bugs.

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(Please note saves from 0.1* will no longer work as making Roxy's scene avoidable caused changes that would break them)

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[Tiur]

Is this game going to be longer than WBAF or JWTDO? (And please take that as an avid appreciation of those games, rather than anything like criticism; I liked them a lot, I just wanted more, heh.)

 

[Darkrift411]

He went to bed shortly after posting, but I can tell you this should be a LOT longer. Although ive never played either of those games I know the approx amount of content and I believe this first episode/release should have as much or more than those did.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Yay another Daz loli incest AVN. May sub on SS after a few more updates, if that is an option eventually as .1 versions come and go too often sadly. " your sister has been working on a devious plot that will help bring numerous other girls into your life". Sounds like the opposite of my real life sis. She had 1 devious plot after another to make sure she had me all to herself with no competition. 17 years later she's still that way for the most part, only less devious and more open (she tends to scare off any potential female friends she learns of that gets a bit too friendly, one of her few bad traits).

 

[Tiur]

Yeah, after playing through this one, the pacing definitely suggests a significantly longer game than the other two, which makes me very happy. Great cute girls so far, and the premise is a lot of fun already. Insert Palpatine "watching your career with great interest" gif here in your mind.

 

[LostMarble]

I had a soft spot for Family by Fate, despite it's issues, and I'm looking forward to giving this a read. It's likely the author has learned from that previous effort; especially the part about keeping backups

 

[LostMarble]

Is this game going to be longer than WBAF or JWTDO? (And please take that as an avid appreciation of those games, rather than anything like criticism; I liked them a lot, I just wanted more, heh.)

Are those games also by this dev? I don't recognize either of those abbreviations...

 

[User_4346]

Are those games also by this dev? I don't recognize either of those abbreviations...

Yes they are here too

 

[Augustus]

Promising start! I like both the balance between the main plot and the relationship development; as well as the balance between relying on cliches and subverting/expanding on them.

What I found a bit jarring was how the narration switches between first, second and third person. For a kinetic novel, I really dislike second person. Either first or third person can work, or even a mix if it is clearer structured.

The animation with Roxy didn't seem to play properly for me. She was just hovering on the top of Caleb's dick. I guess she should actually go down prior to the creampie?

Kinda sad that Dad won't get any. I wouldn't want him to get anywhere with Celeste, but a bit of father-son bonding action with Roxy would have been nice.

Any chance for some pregnancies on the horizon?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

So why is 12 the min age for Celeste? Why not 10 or 11? (or anything but a negative number, though if she has tits 9 and under would be unrealistic I guess). Had the same damned problem for the loli ages in Proud Father as well, kept reverting to 18 everytime i tried to set it under 12 without modding the code.

 

[Davnier]

So why is 12 the min age for Celeste? Why not 10 or 11? (or anything but a negative number, though if she has tits 9 and under would be unrealistic I guess). Had the same damned problem for the loli ages in Proud Father as well, kept reverting to 18 everytime i tried to set it under 12 without modding the code.

For the realism of a pregnancy, if i remember it correctly he will that the MC can impregnate his sister. But when the sister is under 12 is a pregnancy not realy realistic (who cares, that the youngest mother of the world is 9 xD)

 

[S7aard]

For the realism of a pregnancy, if i remember it correctly he will that the MC can impregnate his sister. But when the sister is under 12 is a pregnancy not realy realistic (who cares, that the youngest mother of the world is 9 xD)

5*. 12 isn't very unrealistic at all if you take a look at the ages that many mothers were in history

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[Tiur]

Are those games also by this dev? I don't recognize either of those abbreviations...

Yeah, they're the two games linked under "Other Games" in the OP.

 

[Darkrift411]

For the realism of a pregnancy, if i remember it correctly he will that the MC can impregnate his sister. But when the sister is under 12 is a pregnancy not realy realistic (who cares, that the youngest mother of the world is 9 xD)

It had to do with timeline stuff, not pregnancy age.

 

[pothb]

5*. 12 isn't very unrealistic at all if you take a look at the ages that many mothers were in history

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Huh... last time I checked that list, I thought it was 4, maybe i misremembered or somethign changed. But yea... it's crazy.

 

[User_9]

Just in time for my bday

 

[Riger82]

Did this get reposted? It still says 0.1 but the thread says it was updated 8 minutes ago.

 

[User_4346]

Did this get reposted? It still says 0.1 but the thread says it was updated 8 minutes ago.

Theres going to be a couple changes incorporate for future updates but to my knowledge we havent made those changes yet

 

[User_9]

Did this get reposted? It still says 0.1 but the thread says it was updated 8 minutes ago.

Threads show "updated" whenever there is any change, even a reply such as this.

 

[Jack Of Blades]

Threads show "updated" whenever there is any change, even a reply such as this.

Theres going to be a couple changes incorporate for future updates but to my knowledge we havent made those changes yet

Did this get reposted? It still says 0.1 but the thread says it was updated 8 minutes ago.

my bad, I didn't mean to have the thread go to the latest updates, but the promote option was disabled for restricted games, so the game went just to the latest and not categories on the latest updates page.