discussion Complete VN Ren'Py DAZ THAMAR [0.18] [iOtero]

[D4WN5_KN1GH7]

man how do you write the main love interest as completely uninterested in the MC. main i really want to like this and she is a well designed character, but everytime he is "like omg i love you more than anything your perfection" and she is like "yeah cool whatever ill go screw one of these other girls who actually do love you" man its a dick punch

 

[User_79797]

I like this game so far, but I really miss a mod for "BOTH"-routes-choices!!!

EDIT: Have to correct myself: As many of you already stated; really good models and plot, but the story telling is ridiculously stretched and 95% posing naked or lewd lingerie. I get the slow burn, but here: that's not even a spark.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

man how do you write the main love interest as completely uninterested in the MC. main i really want to like this and she is a well designed character, but everytime he is "like omg i love you more than anything your perfection" and she is like "yeah cool whatever ill go screw one of these other girls who actually do love you" man its a dick punch

Yeah it's why I quit playing this like after 0.08, and got tired of the bullshit and just started ctrl-skipping everything even then about 20 mins in just to see if the MC was ever actually getting his dick wet (nope). It's like I said awhile back, she's pretty and all, but not much else going for this and beyond clikbait she's a waste of a good model that probably ends up fucking everyone BUT the MC.

 

[pitin198]

is it abandoned? does someone knows?

 

[max666]

it is not abandoned version 0.18 is on subscristar

 

[Dragon1626]

Its a play for pay kind of thing. You have to subscribe to play it

 

[AlfaBit]

Its a play for pay kind of thing. You have to subscribe to play it

What? So even if someone shares the link to the game, we wouldn't be able to play it?

 

[max666]

no but one of the patreons must agree to share

 

[zmladvzv]

Well that's disappointing one of the few that has a lot of good watersports.

 

[Tiur]

What? So even if someone shares the link to the game, we wouldn't be able to play it?

So the thing about iOtero is that he's kind of an ass. He's got a small cadre of very loyal subscribers, and a lot of people who look at his games and think they might be worth playing, until they actually play them.

This puts his games into a rarified category, that of "games that do not have free/public versions, but that are mediocre enough that no one gives enough of a shit about them to pirate them".

(Backstory on iOtero: he is categorically hostile to any sites that post non-public versions of anything, and is deeply insistent that piracy is inherently all freeloaders, with no pirates ever going on to support any games. He is also highly resistant to criticism of any kind from any source, no matter how constructive, strongly resists correction of even his most obvious/egregious errors, and just generally considers himself a much better writer than he is.)

 

[hotya]

Is it possible for any hero to upload version 0.18? Some parts of the game are really good for me.

 

[Stun1960]

seems a bit of a grind

 

[TomCat72]

Is it possible for any hero to upload version 0.18? Some parts of the game are really good for me.

I messaged IOtero on Subscribestar and the feedback I got is pretty sad: Thamar is not available at all anymore. Not even for patrons, it has been removed from all sources it has been previously available on.

 

[Seo In-guk]

I wait more and thanks for game

 

[crunch]

The developer launched the 0.18 April 10 and a week later withdrew and now on subscriber deleted all downloads related to Thamar
Abandoned game?

 

[Tiur]

The developer launched the 0.18 April 10 and a week later withdrew and now on subscriber deleted all downloads related to Thamar
Abandoned game?

Going off the dev's previous reactions to criticism, maybe someone on Substar was mildly critical of the game.

 

[Stryker101]

It's a good story, I hope there is an update!

 

[A.K.A78]

I agree with the general opinion on here about the game. This is a total crap show. I thought how bad can it be.
I did not believe the people ,, i am so sorry guys,, from the bottom of my heart.

First thing should be a NO Protaganist Tag for this.. cause you look at it from the outside Stopping any immersive storytelling immediately. You are not in the story at all in any way.
This however is not a movie. that does not work in overall with vn's
On top of that the writing is bad,,, REAL BAD. It feels like translated russian into english by someone who does know both languages but has no idea how to tell a story or put anything in context.
It has dialog like: I should strangle you for what you did until you are dead, but you are my father so i forgive you, but you will pay dearly for what you have done.
Dads reply then is, I don't doubt it my son , i don't doubt it.
Wtf

And as a final point if i'm not in the story nor can i imagine being in it in any way or form and random males in the story start fucking the girls i do find interesting,,, to all people that hate ntr that is ntr.
Now you can say she is not a LI for you.. Go fuck yourself. you do not define what ntr is for others just because you do like it.
That's like letting a serial killer define what murder is so there is no punishment for what he is doing. Are you kidding me.

I'm out and deleting and blocking this game so i never see it again because it can pop up with the false tags it has as incest, loli, multiple protagonist, small tits, vaginal sex.
You ain't getting none any of that

 

[JGNeon]

On top of that the writing is bad,,, REAL BAD. It feels like translated russian into english by someone who does know both languages but has no idea how to tell a story or put anything in context.
It has dialog like: I should strangle you for what you did until you are dead, but you are my father so i forgive you, but you will pay dearly for what you have done.
Dads reply then is, I don't doubt it my son , i don't doubt it.
Wtf

Indeed, but the other language seems to be Spanish (given that's the other language available to play this, and iOtero's other VN). I, too, get annoyed with the weird phrasing in the dialogue a lot, but I power through it. If I had to guess, it's due to some weird cultural difference when it comes to dramas in a Spanish-speaking country (not necessarily Spain's mainland), but I can't be bothered to dig deeper. The dialogue both here and in At Home Again seems overly dramatic (you might even call it "

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"), as if it was a soap opera or telenovela, or something like that.

 

[Tiur]

The reason iOtero's writing is weird is that he is firmly and indelibly convinced that he is a far better writer than he is, and he resists and rejects any and all constructive feedback.