discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ AITA - Am I the Asshole [0.3.2][day 3 part 1] [Twisted Moon Games]

[TwistedMoony]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

Developer Name

Twisted Moon Games

Developer Links

itch.io - discord - pixivFanbox - bootsy - Subscribestar

Version

0.3.2 (Ongoing)

Latest Update

Apr 29, 2024

Release Date

Nov 23, 2023

Language

English - Russian

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. MacOS
4. Android

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Overview:
MC deals with depression, PTSD (childhood trauma), and various other personality disorders. His depression got so bad that he tried to take his own life a few years ago. His wife found him after he overdosed on his medication. She was so shocked and hurt by the MC's action that she set strict boundaries for him. At this point, they are separated. They have a girl and a boy together. Will there ever be some reconciliation, or what will be our MC's path? (The default name will be Marc, but it can be changed)
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Spoiler: Genre:

3dcg, handjob, incest, loli, male protagonist, teasing, milf, vaginal sex, creampie, prostitution
planned tags: anal, watersports, male domination, female domination, pregnancy, there will always be the choice of creampie or pullout.

Spoiler: Installation:

1 - Extract and run.

Spoiler: Changelog:

0.3.2
Russian translation added
WT modified and the problem with the 'None' is fixed.
Also now you can use your keyboard for the choices!

0.3.1
412 new rendera
3 animations
1500 lines of code
~ 10k words

0.2.2:
Several bugs fixed
Clickable socials in main menu
typos and punctioation were fixed
0.2.1:
449 new renders
2679 lines of code
38 full pages written ~ 10k+ words pure dialogue
UI changed Added in game WT
Adjust age added
Intro and outro added
added new music
Main Menu music changed
Overhauled some scenes in day 1 because of lighting was terrible

0.1.1:
Russian translation added - now for real!
re written day 1, essence is the same
added 1 extra render, well that I forgot in the 1st release

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[User_48642]

Hello @TwistedMoony. Congratulations on your first release.

As stated in your game request, I posted your game and added some mirror links.
You can apply for a developer role by following the instructions here. and then open a support ticket by clicking Support -> Open new ticket -> General Support. You can also gain ownership of this thread that way.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Hello @TwistedMoony. Congratulations on your first release.

As stated in your game request, I posted your game and added some mirror links.
You can apply for a developer role by following the instructions here. and then open a support ticket by clicking Support -> Open new ticket -> General Support. You can also gain ownership of this thread that way.

Perfect, thank you very much!
I did submit a ticket indeed for dev role.

 

[Landerk]

Nice start, looking forward to seeing more.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Thank you Will do my best!

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

Welp ima give it a test cause i have free time. Will probably write what i think of it, any bugs i encounter and what feels not right/out of place.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Welp ima give it a test cause i have free time. Will probably write what i think of it, any bugs i encounter and what feels not right/out of place.

Please do!

 

[BadJM]

You should probably try to make a Subscribestar page because unless you do a separate patch for the loli content, this will not last long on patreon and itch.io has started to crack down on games with loli.

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

Ok so i just finished it and first of all i've got to say that for the first release the length was totally understandable and the story is actually pretty good and wholesome which will probably change some versions from now that it gets more lewd and i've also have to say that the characters actually look pretty high quality and good. Now to the negative and something that wouldn't need to be there, i've instantly noticed that in the doctor scene the background is a lot worse quality which would probably not annoy most people but it does annoy me and probably some other people too. The thing that i found to have no use for the story was the pineapple on pizza discussion cause it just doesn't really fit in. I've encountered no bugs while playing it so well done. Overall i would say that it is a 9/10 which is actually very good for a first release. Good job

 

[TwistedMoony]

Ok so i just finished it and first of all i've got to say that for the first release the length was totally understandable and the story is actually pretty good and wholesome which will probably change some versions from now that it gets more lewd and i've also have to say that the characters actually look pretty high quality and good. Now to the negative and something that wouldn't need to be there, i've instantly noticed that in the doctor scene the background is a lot worse quality which would probably not annoy most people but it does annoy me and probably some other people too. The thing that i found to have no use for the story was the pineapple on pizza discussion cause it just doesn't really fit in. I've encountered no bugs while playing it so well done. Overall i would say that it is a 9/10 which is actually very good for a first release. Good job

Thank you very much for you honest feedback, I really appreciate it.

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

Thank you very much for you honest feedback, I really appreciate it.

I mean honest feedback is always important for new games and people who have never made a game before.

Edit: One thing i forgot to mention is that the name Noëlle just looks weird so i would advise to change it to Noelle cause there are placer where people dont know what that sounds like so it could be confusing for others and also cause it just looks better in my view.

 

[User_48178]

Girl and boy? Does that mean there will be some shota content at some point?

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

Girl and boy? Does that mean there will be some shota content at some point?

According to the dev there will be NO shota content.

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

Btw if people want to change the ages in the game you would need to go to game/dialoges/day1.rpy (now i am NOT telling you to do it as it may cause moral Dilemmas or maybe (im not sure) break you game) and change them there and if they have no idea where to place the ages (like what age) have the ones i am speculating

Noelle: 12-14
Paige: maybe same age or maybe like 15-16
Gina: no content at the moment and there is only 1 pic on the discord so i am unable to speculate

 

[Death Angel Studio's iconDeath Angel Studio]

You will need to set the ages in the game in the next actual version​

Thats why i removed the patch cause there will be no need
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ages confirmed by DEV

Noelle and Zoey 13
Paige 16
Gina will be 17

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[cenros]

Good start... Let's see what happen next...

 

[Greybourn]

Ok so i just finished it and first of all i've got to say that for the first release the length was totally understandable

For me I really don't get an 86meg first release. He's had his entire life to build his first release and he put out 86 meg. How much should a subscriber expect 2-3 months from now?

 

[Draver]

When I saw this scene,

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All I could think of, was,

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[BeowulfKnight]

Good start, hard to judge without more really though. I'm just thrilled about having a new loli dev! Don't let those harpies at F95 scare you away from it we need more good loli games! <3

 

[TwistedMoony]

For me I really don't get an 86meg first release. He's had his entire life to build his first release and he put out 86 meg. How much should a subscriber expect 2-3 months from now?

What subscribers? I have non and I don't expect subs or anything of that sort. I made that clear since I started the project.
I give people who want to donate something a possibility to tip me but all links for the game will always be free when done.
And even if it takes 2 to 3 month, why do you care? I do it for myself and having people liking it is good for my ego

When I saw this scene,

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All I could think of, was,

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Fucking hell man, that made me laugh out loud for real