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3 Years of Service
I assume due to future content with the youngest daughter.
2 Years of Service
I love this game. I'm playing all its ramifications and it's really worth it.
Me encanta este juego. Estoy jugando todas sus ramificaciones y, realmente, merece la pena.
Me encanta este juego. Estoy jugando todas sus ramificaciones y, realmente, merece la pena.
3 Years of Service
any chance we can get this VN with other download options, preferably some of the ones with no DL limit like Gofile or something this VN is stupidly huge even compressed you can't DL it from Mega or Pixel and it still in early game
3 Years of Service
i dont really want to say it again a day later but gofile link plz
3 Years of Service
i said this yesterday and again not long before my reply to you
3 Years of Service
still no smol content?
2 Years of Service
From the Patrion
100 new renders = 3600 renders
-2 animations = 42 total
-UI fixes, new font, coded outline for better reading experience on any surface
-Option to name your save (convenience because game have many choices)
-Fixed MRI scene missing renders
-Sound design for new scenes
-General bug fixes
-Because all changes and new things implemented old saves are most likely incompatible
It could be that this version was just patching up his old version. Also he mentioned someone leak his game so the version we had was probably a version that was pre-patched to fix bugs and such.
Edite: I did more reading and the version that came before was the version 2 was to test for bug and the version .25 that was released publicly was patch version that meant for distribution. So the last version was a test version that was not meant for public release.
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2 Years of Service
There is marked technical improvement in the writing, but there are still a few wrong word instances that wouldn't get picked up by a spellcheck:
comma instead of coma
"memory line" -> "memory lane"
"your tight" -> "you're tight"
"she seams" -> "she seems"
"Did you liked some?" -> "Did you like some?"
There's at least one more that I thought I'd remember but I didn't.
Word order and sentence structure is occasionally odd but that is because of how language shapes how we think and then it comes out weird in a different language than your native one. So thats not a worry. But there was one sentence pair that was kinda butchered:
"You can stop fighting [MC] if you continue like this. At best, you can end up paralyzed."
...should be something more like...
"You can stop fighting, [MC]. If you continue like this, at best you'll end up paralyzed."
There were a couple other instances of what should have been a complete sentence that was interrupted by a period where a comma should be, making two incomplete sentences. But that one above is the worst instance because it confused the meaning of the dialogue.
Last grammatical note, the semicolon is being used more than it should. The ; is a weird little dude with specific rules on when it should be used, and its not really needed as often as this game's dialogue would indicate. I don't remember them exactly so I wasn't tracking specific things that looked wrong, but there were a few. But really, even less people would notice or care about that than would be bothered by any of my corrections at all.
My intent isn't to be insulting or anything, I'm just trying to use my stupid superpower for good. I didn't even LIKE writing classes.
comma instead of coma
"memory line" -> "memory lane"
"your tight" -> "you're tight"
"she seams" -> "she seems"
"Did you liked some?" -> "Did you like some?"
There's at least one more that I thought I'd remember but I didn't.
Word order and sentence structure is occasionally odd but that is because of how language shapes how we think and then it comes out weird in a different language than your native one. So thats not a worry. But there was one sentence pair that was kinda butchered:
"You can stop fighting [MC] if you continue like this. At best, you can end up paralyzed."
...should be something more like...
"You can stop fighting, [MC]. If you continue like this, at best you'll end up paralyzed."
There were a couple other instances of what should have been a complete sentence that was interrupted by a period where a comma should be, making two incomplete sentences. But that one above is the worst instance because it confused the meaning of the dialogue.
Last grammatical note, the semicolon is being used more than it should. The ; is a weird little dude with specific rules on when it should be used, and its not really needed as often as this game's dialogue would indicate. I don't remember them exactly so I wasn't tracking specific things that looked wrong, but there were a few. But really, even less people would notice or care about that than would be bothered by any of my corrections at all.
My intent isn't to be insulting or anything, I'm just trying to use my stupid superpower for good. I didn't even LIKE writing classes.
2 Years of Service
Pretty good so far, here's hoping it continues.
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enjoyab
enjoyable- but i recommend to be patient and wait a lil more for a better experience
4 Years of Service
Title says 2.5, and OP info block says 2.5, but link says 2.0.... Is there a 2.5?
3 Years of Service
I hope there's pregnancy in this game in the future.
2 Years of Service
^
That sentence should look something like this:
"Word order and sentence structure is occasionally odd, but that is because of how language shapes how we think, and then it comes out weird in a different language than your native one."
Your superpower failed you in that sentence.3 Years of Service
Because they just throw everything in the game+ section now which defeats the entire purpose of it.
2 Years of Service
You're not wrong, I was rushing through it and didn't really proofread.^
That sentence should look something like this:
"Word order and sentence structure is occasionally odd, but that is because of how language shapes how we think, and then it comes out weird in a different language than your native one."
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