discussion Complete VN Ren'Py DAZ THAMAR [0.18] [iOtero]

[CrapFace]

Apparently the dev doesn't like critique... made a post last week on itch about the intermezzo's being too long winded because the choices following are mostly self-explaing enough already, and the fact she has the expression of a dead fish (as in totally none)
Went back today to see if he responded and post was gone... so made a new one... game itself is a nice filler in between, but oh boy, those intermezzo's are annoying a.f.

 

[Tiur]

Apparently the dev doesn't like critique...

Every interaction I've seen from this dev on multiple sites has shown them to be thin-skinned and hostile.

 

[Yodasy]

I love the game but i have a question if it possible to add a scene where one or more (young) girls get tickled till they pee?

 

[Tiur]

I love the game but i have a question if it possible to add a scene where one or more (young) girls get tickled till they pee?

There's no real point asking that kind of thing here. The dev is not here and won't respond. As far as I am aware, he doesn't interact anywhere other than Itch.

 

[Montimer]

There's no real point asking that kind of thing here. The dev is not here and won't respond. As far as I am aware, he doesn't interact anywhere other than Itch.

No idea if he'd like it here when nearly all pages of his both games are criticism.
Rightfully so written criticism.

 

[Tiur]

No idea if he'd like it here when nearly all pages of his both games are criticism.
Rightfully so written criticism.

That (on another site, though) is why he doesn't interact anywhere other than Itch. He is rather thin-skinned and hostile, and does not take criticism well. Probably for the best overall, though; he was also dismissive and insulting even to people who gave him positive feedback on non-Itch sites because in his opinion, they were all filthy freeloading pirates (and he didn't understand the link in this industry between piracy and attention/support).

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Apparently the dev doesn't like critique... made a post last week on itch about the intermezzo's being too long winded because the choices following are mostly self-explaing enough already, and the fact she has the expression of a dead fish (as in totally none)
Went back today to see if he responded and post was gone... so made a new one... game itself is a nice filler in between, but oh boy, those intermezzo's are annoying a.f.

What annoyed me the most is she's just bait. MC never gets to fuck her, but ends up having to settle for fucking some other chick that is not even half as pretty. Most people do that in real life already, they don't want to have that happen in their AVN too (it's also why NTR is so unpopular and there's that as well if you count lesbian scenes).

 

[Nicest_Incest]

I love the game but i have a question if it possible to add a scene where one or more (young) girls get tickled till they pee?

I doubt he takes such requests. As far as tickle-till-pee only time that happens off the top of my head is when the MC tickles his little sister Emmie in Apartment 69. Sadly that's a sandbox (not a huge fan of those when I just wanna read and fap).

 

[User_36254]

I started this, but it shows only Daniel fucking the girls.
Does MC later get some action, or he's just listening to the story?

 

[whisperpuppy]

I came here for lolis. Where did they go?

 

[Alanray64]

Interesting so far, but so much dialogue on single renders is a little monotonous.. Maybe things will change in the future, Have yet to try Version 0.14 so hopefully.

 

[MssoR]

Hi, any chance someone could re-upload v.10 for android. People like complaining but I like the story. Anyway best to everyone.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Mac and droid links replaced.

 

[thyand27]

Here's my unofficial android port of THAMAR v0.08

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Spoiler: Features

Swipe Down - Hide Ui
Swipe Left - Rollback
Swipe Right - Start Skipping Text
Swipe Up - Save Your Game
Swipe Up and Down - Enable Auto Forward Mode
Opacity Slider and Text Size on Preferences
Save Naming

Spoiler: Saves location

All saves are located on Documents > Cebs
..::GRANT PERMISSION ON FIRST RUN::..

please update v0.10 compressed sir, if you have time. ty

 

[CrapFace]

I started this, but it shows only Daniel fucking the girls.
Does MC later get some action, or he's just listening to the story?

For some stupid reason, the dev gives you as player, the role of observer and even lets you name yourself... resulting in thinking you are the MC, but the true MC's in this case are still Daniel and Thamar
Don't ask me why, this whole game (and others from this dev) show a weird moral and viewpoint (mostly notable in the style of writing). Case in point. Daniel refuses to fuck Thamar, but has no qualms fucking his mother towards the end of this update.

Having said this, and even though I think it's not one of the better games, I'm still hooked enough to want to know how it continues, so if a kind soul wants to share

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, I (and likely others) would be much obliged

 

[AntuanShotaLover]

Curiously, but Daniel doesn't look like a shota.

 

[PTPorts]

Android port updated
Edit: Added v0.10​

 

[JGNeon]

I just randomly discovered that

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. Does anyone have it downloaded from there?

 

[salieri101]

Playing the game first and then reading through all the comments here i have to add a few things that might not have been talked about much here i guess.

About the dev being unable to take criticism and reacting to criticism in a hostile way i can only say that if someone cant take all the criticism (that can be both positive and negative oppinions), then he/she shouldnt make and post any games anywhere at all.

About the intermezzos, the choices after the intermezzo monologues could have been simply made with colored texts like in walkthrough mods that were made for VN games, since there are a lot of FORCED DECISIONS that the game makes the player to chose with bullshit monologue parts like "if i were you then blablabla", and there are also some ridiculous bullshit "game over endings" if a player doesnt chose the option that the game wants them to chose, so no wonder there are so many negative oppinions about this game, since many ppl dont want to be forced to make a choice they dont want to pick if there are more options, so i woudn't be so damn surprised about the negative oppinions if i would be in the devs place.

The dev forgot to add NTR to the tags, while the game should even have "strong/hard NTR" tag cuz it's like 99% sharing and kinda cuckoldry and stuff.

I' might be wrong but i think that an AVN game (and also VN games) should have a good balance between teasing and "action" (no matter if it is more focused on the story or not), while this game is like 95% (or even more) teasing and 5% (or even less) "action", that's another thing that many ppl dont like.

 

[salieri101]

To say some good things about the game too, i must say that the story is good, although maybe a bit too complicated, and maybe emotionally too challenging, but i kinda liked it. I' think it has more parts where the player should have had choices to pick (without forcing the player to pick any), instead of the MC character Danny picking a choice automatically for himself and carrying on, at least as i played through the game, i ran into many situations where i would have let the player chose from a few options on how to go on.

I' was looking for "story games" like this one and other kind of story games too but i rarely ran into ones so if anyone could suggest any VN story games (on this site or anywhere else) with choices to pick that are maybe less complicated than this one i would appreciate it very much.