discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ Found in Translation [0.19] [Gadgeteer]

[Jack Of Blades]

any other ways to download?

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[Gadgeteer]

Not a bad start. Definitely putting this on my watchlist.

There are a few sentences starting in lowercase, or lacking a period. A few times "I" is is lowercase.

As someone stated above, Audrey might not be what many are here to see... For now there are two options for how to interact with her. You can stay passive and get a blowjob, or you can get up, kiss her, and she'll leave. This seems a little backward... I would have thought showing less interest results in less sexual behavior. Personally, I wouldn't have minded a third option to turn back to the computer screen and keep working, but maybe that's just me.

One thing that screws a bit with the immersion is the Russian. I don't have a problem with Aijla speaking Russian and Kitka translating for her. The problem is whenever the MC asks what a specific word is in Russian, and the answer is something in the Russian alphabet I have no idea how to pronounce. Obviously IRL you'd hear it and be able to mimic the sound, but the way it's done here, it almost feels like she's writing the answer on a paper for all the good it does me...
I suppose I can liken this to texting. If someone asks me how to say "light" in Japanese, I can just tell them. If they ask me in a text, I have a few options. I can answer with "光", which is correct, but not helpful if they want to know how to say it. The best option in that case would be to give the transliteration, "hikari".
Anyway, what I'm trying to say is, it might be a good idea to give the player an idea how to pronounce a word if the MC is supposed to say it. The player might even learn something vaguely interesting that way, while right now, those of us who are unfamiliar with that alphabet can only shake their head and give up.

Poor Audrey ? All I can say about Audrey is that she isn't going anywhere yet, but she is a means to an end... tolerate the THICCness for a bit longer?

Yea, before 0.3 I'm going to comb through to check for all the grammatical things I missed.

Speaking to the Russian text: That's fair, I'll have to see if the phonetic spelling is something @nicoll89 can help me with in the future, at least in the spots where the MC is being taught a word. From a storytelling perspective(in a smut game? wtf?), I like when the girls talk amongst themselves and you (as the MC) have absolutely no clue what's going on, but yea, phonetics would make sense when MC is supposed to be learning the word.

Got me thinkin @LGM thx for the constructive feedback!

 

[Nastastic]

Speaking to the Russian text: That's fair, I'll have to see if the phonetic spelling is something @nicoll89 can help me with in the future, at least in the spots where the MC is being taught a word. From a storytelling perspective(in a smut game? wtf?), I like when the girls talk amongst themselves and you (as the MC) have absolutely no clue what's going on, but yea, phonetics would make sense when MC is supposed to be learning the word.

Google Translate will work well enough for this task.

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[Anon7483]

THE NUMBERS, MASON!

WHAT DO THEY MEAN?????????

 

[Blank]

While my personal feeling is to not have on-topic on a mobile device, I'm not your parents, do as you like. I'm okay with the unofficial port TY cebs

Is that why the Android port wasn't added to op?

 

[PTPorts]

Android port updated​

 

[Gadgeteer]

Been workin hard on the next update, wanted to come share some images to let everyone know I haven't disappeared

My Fanbox supporters should be getting their hands on the update this weekend, barring any problems. Public release should be the following week. (June 9)

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[kmiller123]

Been workin hard on the next update, wanted to come share some images to let everyone know I haven't disappeared

My Fanbox supporters should be getting their hands on the update this weekend, barring any problems. Public release should be the following week. (June 9)

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cant wait love what yyou have put out so far

 

[Anon7483]

Been workin hard on the next update, wanted to come share some images to let everyone know I haven't disappeared

My Fanbox supporters should be getting their hands on the update this weekend, barring any problems. Public release should be the following week. (June 9)

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[snieovi]

WoW, did not expect to wake up to such a response.? I'm so glad everyone is enjoying FiT so far!

I have noticed the grain/noise more and more and I'm not a fan. I think today will be the day I work on it while I'm writing, since other people are also noticing it.

that's a good attitude

 

[gaudard]

[/QUOTE]

One day while walking to work, you happen upon a couple of foreign homeless girls in trouble. The meeting promises to be interesting, as one of them doesn't understand English, and the other is a very forward young woman.[/CENTER]

Spoiler: Features

corruption system, ensure choices matter, harem, pregnancy, incest, loli, lesbian

The MC finds two girls on the street, who don't have any blood ties.
"Features: Incest"
I don't know where the incest is.
I think Dev needs to buy a dictionary to know the meaning of incest.
I uninstalled the game

 

[hawaii]

While my personal feeling is to not have on-topic on a mobile device, I'm not your parents, do as you like. I'm okay with the unofficial port TY cebs

Please send the new Part 3 .0 to LewdCorner !!

 

[snieovi]

The MC finds two girls on the street, who don't have any blood ties.
"Features: Incest"
I don't know where the incest is.
I think Dev needs to buy a dictionary to know the meaning of incest.
I uninstalled the game

i think the girls are sisters

 

[Gadgeteer]

Please send the new Part 3 .0 to LewdCorner !!

Public release will be Friday?

 

[snieovi]

 

[Lefty]

The MC finds two girls on the street, who don't have any blood ties.
"Features: Incest"
I don't know where the incest is.
I think Dev needs to buy a dictionary to know the meaning of incest.
I uninstalled the game

In the newly released pics the dev shared with us: who is that new girl? A daughter? A sister? A cousin? A niece? A combination of these? She could also be either a friend or a bully of the two girls we do know at this time. Just because there wasn't incest yet, doesn't mean there won't be. Maybe we'll find out MC is related to Aubrey, and the two don't know it yet. There is your committed incest right there.

 

[gaudard]

In the newly released pics the dev shared with us: who is that new girl? A daughter? A sister? A cousin? A niece? A combination of these? She could also be either a friend or a bully of the two girls we do know at this time. Just because there wasn't incest yet, doesn't mean there won't be. Maybe we'll find out MC is related to Aubrey, and the two don't know it yet. There is your committed incest right there.

If I guessed the future I would be a millionaire.
My opinion is based on the game I played and the description of that same game posted by the Dev.
Nothing shows it's incest
Either in the description or in the game

"One day while walking to work, you happen upon a couple of foreign homeless girls in trouble. The meeting promises to be interesting, as one of them doesn't understand English, and the other is a very forward young woman".

 

[snieovi]

If I guessed the future I would be a millionaire.
My opinion is based on the game I played and the description of that same game posted by the Dev.
Nothing shows it's incest
Either in the description or in the game

Features


corruption system, ensure choices matter, harem, pregnancy, incest, loli, lesbian

 

[Gadgeteer]

In the newly released pics the dev shared with us: who is that new girl? A daughter? A sister? A cousin? A niece? A combination of these? She could also be either a friend or a bully of the two girls we do know at this time. Just because there wasn't incest yet, doesn't mean there won't be. Maybe we'll find out MC is related to Aubrey, and the two don't know it yet. There is your committed incest right there.

Without giving any spoilers: you aren't far off with your guess.

Which guess though? Stay tuned until next week kids! ? Incest is coming, you perverts

 

[snieovi]

In the newly released pics the dev shared with us: who is that new girl? A daughter? A sister? A cousin? A niece? A combination of these? She could also be either a friend or a bully of the two girls we do know at this time. Just because there wasn't incest yet, doesn't mean there won't be. Maybe we'll find out MC is related to Aubrey, and the two don't know it yet. There is your committed incest right there.

or MC had sex with the girls' mother during his vacation in Russia