discussion Take a Peek: My Latest Renders Await Your Thoughts!

[AlfaBit]

Coincidentally, but you made this thread at a very good timing.

 

[corvegas]

I dig them, nice job!

 

[bernMCM]

Looking good, man.

Good luck on your project!

 

[Nikt_Wazny]

The protagonist is definitely young, so you have a very good option that would be a sin not to use it. Namely, his mother, who, considering such a young hero, may be very young. If you are planning a loli, you can assume that the mother became pregnant at a very young age and gave birth to our protagonist. Maybe even add a very young grandmother? Of course, as always, this is just my opinion.

 

[iCheetos]

The protagonist is definitely young, so you have a very good option that would be a sin not to use it. Namely, his mother, who, considering such a young hero, may be very young. If you are planning a loli, you can assume that the mother became pregnant at a very young age and gave birth to our protagonist. Maybe even add a very young grandmother? Of course, as always, this is just my opinion.

I'm going to post the MC with a different pose and expression, maybe he doesn't look very young, or just confirm that he is very young haha, I'm thinking of opening a vote to decide who will be the Mom, I'll make 3 or 4, and let you guys choose.

Because I might like one, but you guys might not be into it, so a vote would be ideal.

About the loli , i will add somes , but i need put them in the history i have de first cap donne.

 

[M3ricaPatriot1776]

For a first game your renders are looking very great interested to see what the game looks like when its released.

 

[kallekeke]

Excellent renders, especially the second sis friend was very cute!

 

[User_98287]

Pretty solid art, and poses!

 

[itsmethomast]

"I'm making my first game, still learning how to use Daz and Renpy, and I'd like to know your honest opinion... What did you think of the renders, did they please you at first sight? Leave your opinion, and I'll be happy to read, I'll show you some characters here, I have more, but I don't want spoilers...

My English is not so good ha ha, I speak Portuguese [BR]...

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I love the renders. The mouths might be a small amount off. I hope the girls remain small/short.

 

[itsmethomast]

I'm going to post the MC with a different pose and expression, maybe he doesn't look very young, or just confirm that he is very young haha, I'm thinking of opening a vote to decide who will be the Mom, I'll make 3 or 4, and let you guys choose.

Because I might like one, but you guys might not be into it, so a vote would be ideal.

About the loli , i will add somes , but i need put them in the history i have de first cap donne.

The mom could be 18, if their birth mother died and their father married a younger women. Then, if the father died, leaving their new mom as the only parent, then we have an interesting game afoot.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Renders look really good for learning. I am excited to see what you come up with. I am not the greatest in Daz or Renpy but if you need help let me know. I like helping new devs if I can.

 

[beryl]

These look pretty good. I'd definitely check out a game with these characters.

 

[iCheetos]

The mom could be 18, if their birth mother died and their father married a younger women. Then, if the father died, leaving their new mom as the only parent, then we have an interesting game afoot.

in the game u guys can set the age something around (14-17) maybe to fit the history n character , the Mom will have +-15 maybe 30 or 32 , but she ill be young

 

[archie]

Not bad at all

 

[iCheetos]

Renders look really good for learning. I am excited to see what you come up with. I am not the greatest in Daz or Renpy but if you need help let me know. I like helping new devs if I can.

Thanks buddy , i appriciate ...

 

[Easy1289]

Actually very good, I wish you good luck

 

[spiderfff]

The images look good but the faces have a childish appearance maybe you should change that.

 

[Muadib05]

The renders are nice but by using shadows you can make them pop much more i feel

 

[totallynotcrazy]

Renders so far look good, but I'd like to see some with actual environments and lighting. There is a little graininess in some of the screenshots already so not sure how it'll affect your overall renders with different the scenes and lighting.

 

[Annonx]

Looks good ! Keep going, you're doing well !