discussion Take a Peek: My Latest Renders Await Your Thoughts!

[VorpalGhost]

Looks good. Nice to have an MC with an actual face and distinct style.

 

[Laehl]

Let me start of by saying I really do think that the renders do look good! I think the body proportions are done well, and there is a good amount of variety. If you are looking at constructive feedback, I just have some things that seemed to stand out to me, but could also be preference. To me some of the faces, while well done, do not fit the body or person they are on. The other would be what I think some others might have said already and would be careful of clipping, mostly with the hair.

 

[Gravespawn]

looks good, Keep up the good work.

 

[Danv]

renders are irrelevant, writing is much more important
if your writing and/or translation is garbage - doesn't matter how good your renders are, no one stick around just for pretty pictures
you making a Visual Novel, not a collection of random pics to upload on some booru

 

[Deleted member 34138]

renders are irrelevant, writing is much more important
if your writing and/or translation is garbage - doesn't matter how good your renders are, no one stick around just for pretty pictures
you making a Visual Novel, not a collection of random pics to upload on some booru

dunno, I've run into some pretty jacked renders, though the stories were just as bad

side note, renders look great mate

 

[Laehl]

As much as I can agree writing is important, its a harmony of them all that will really bring it all together. And especially since what it will probably be and considering where we are, some sort of visual appeal should be there.

 

[Le_Gato]

For me, they look good.

 

[sten04]

As others have said, the looks could be more varied. That said it looks good, and if the scenes and writing is solid then the characters will be fine.

 

[JustSomeD00D]

Looks good, would have been nice to see how they would like in an environment as well to get a better look at how they will in a game.
As others have said, as long as their is good writing and story, they usually hard carry bad "graphics"

 

[iCheetos]

They're pretty good, but watch for clipping. The red hoodie is a pretty bad example of it TBH, and attention to that sort of detail can be pretty key if you want your art to come across as professional (and worth paying for) rather than amateur.

Yes, I saw it after rendering the image, but don't worry, the renders will be done with all the care and attention haha.

 

[iCheetos]

Everything looks very good, except for the fact that the MC's friend is very similar to himself, not that this is a problem, it just catches the eye
Really good work with the other characters though.

Yes, he was the first MC, but I decided to make a new MC... So the eyes were changed... only the MC will have different eyes.

 

[johnny453]

The eyes are a little unsettling to me, especially the bright blonde bun girl, though with that said they do appeal to me so id definitely download the game if i see it on the site soon.

 

[gostek]

I don't know if they are exactly my type, but they are unique in their own way, do your thing, that's the most important thing

 

[Dad70]

I like! No oversised titts!
And a god story whit some gang bang and sharing and i can pay for it.

 

[Here's Johnny]

The renders are looking great. Are you planning on also doing animations, or just still images? Because animations are an entirely different ballgame to make it look good!
If you're sticking the mostly images, the renders above look very promising for a game!

 

[sn0wf0x]

The renders look great and it is cool to see that you have already multiple characters modeled.
Big story game incoming?

The only critique - the faces of MC Sister and first Sis friend. While I know that we all have a different taste in women - I would describe both their faces as bitch faces. Really unattractive for me personally, especially the thin eyebrows.
I think Sis friend has way more potential with the figure, style and hair BUT that is just my taste.

Otherwise really good job!

 

[renevatia]

Looking pretty decent. I'd skip the nails imo, example the last image in the post looks a bit off imo, though that might just be the black colouring of the nails that makes it look that way.
Otherwise keep it up.

 

[assplorer]

Love the style you are going for honestly and like the other person mentioned, no oversized tits is always a plus for me. Keep doin what you are doin!

 

[Evil Surgeon]

I like the uniqueness. Nothing worse than playing a game where every girl is a cookie cutter version of somebody I've seen 1000 times already. It's a good start, keep it up.

 

[Demiurge299]

The renders look good, this is a very very small complaint, but maybe ditch the eyelashes on the MC's friend and Old MC/MC's friend, alongside maybe tweaking their lips? it could just be me and bias from other game characters I've seen, but it makes them look a touch too effeminate? Other than that, its nice seeing genuinely unique looking models.