discussion Abandoned Ren'Py DAZ Starting Over [0.01] [Anonymous Developer]

[saltydogmk]

@Dieseltech Thank you for telling me about that joiplay thing. Particularly about avoiding the play store version. I instinctively downloaded that, and it crashed immediately. I quickly realized my error, and downloaded the proper one. Until I can afford a new PC, this will be a nice way of trying out some more games.

 

[SoftheW]

Look into joiplay, but avoid the play store version it seems to be buggy. You can get it directly from the joiplay website

Download it from the patreon page (

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The latest stable, no allha or beta, are JoiPlay 1.20.023 (

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Run almost all game. Only very few need an old version, non Patreon.

 

[V&M]

Just out of curiosity, I took a look at the images, and I didn't see any characters that would justify the "restricted" tag in the game. The characters I've seen can be on other sites for sure, will "restricted" content be added in the future?
What I saw were many many milfs (which are not in the tags)

 

[Rycharde's Realm]

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Chloe --> MC

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[WhiteVanDaycare]

Just out of curiosity, I took a look at the images, and I didn't see any characters that would justify the "restricted" tag in the game. The characters I've seen can be on other sites for sure, will "restricted" content be added in the future?
What I saw were many many milfs (which are not in the tags)

Take it up with other sites like Cuck95, the Restricted are games that are not listed there.

 

[hansdampf788]

there is already a little girl-on-girl action

That's the first strike.

Ugly MC and the ugly wife? in the 3rd pic is the second strike,

so what will the 3rd strike be?

 

[Moo]

A note to dev on the use of your/you're.

You're is a contraction (shortening) of 'you are', it just removes the space and the 'a' while replacing it with an apostrophe. 'Your' is a possesive term, you can remember it by knocking off the 'y' from the front and then it's 'our'. So if you're writing and need to know if it's 'your' or 'you're', try out 'you are' or 'our' and see which fits better and then use the appropriate term. *

*(This has been a message on behalf of the Grammar Restoration Front.)

 

[User_31927]

more story before the fucking around would be nice but thats just my personal preference.
i keep an eye on this one for sure.

 

[IRedI]

Nice game

 

[V&M]

Take it up with other sites like Cuck95, the Restricted are games that are not listed there.

I don't think this game would have any problems there, as at the moment I haven't seen any loli that would break their rules. I've seen games there with younger lolis, even without a patch.
Note: I'm not complaining, but when I saw "restricted", I thought they were smol - smoll (I don't know how to spell that)

 

[Tiur]

Just out of curiosity, I took a look at the images, and I didn't see any characters that would justify the "restricted" tag in the game. The characters I've seen can be on other sites for sure, will "restricted" content be added in the future?
What I saw were many many milfs (which are not in the tags)

While the twins are clearly underage, they're not pre-pubescent and would probably be allowed on F95 unless some butthurt mod there arbitrarily decides they "act too young" (which has happened to a LOT of games). However, Natalie would almost definitely not be allowed on F95 though she hasn't been in the game much yet.

And, yes, the early action has mostly been with the milfs (mom and older sister), there are still four younger girls (the twins, Natalie, and Cara), with one of them already having lewd scenes (Molly's BJ, Molly's cunnilingus). It's a decent mix, and I find the pervertedness of the incest quite nice despite the less-attractive older women. It's an effective way to have early scenes with a more reasonable timeline for corrupting the twins and Natalie.

So, my verdict so far: it's a 0.1. It's not the best 0.1 I've played, but it's a very long way from the worst 0.1 I've played. It's got some flaws, but is otherwise just fine. Sure, people who dislike there even being any remote girl-girl interest will probably dislike it, but honestly, those people should just move on. Most people don't mind it, and a lot of people like it.

 

[BgileMunro]

I liked this a LOT. It's especially impressive as a first effort. And I suspect most fans here aren't bothered by girl/girl content. I don't seek it out, but most of the really good AVNs have some of that and if you eliminate it from your selection you are losing a lot of really good games. I also like the way the sex starts early on and continues. I don't like having to wait forever for that and I like that the girls are all interested in the MC from the get go and not bothered by societal "norms". Getting away from those is one reason I play these games.

 

[JoeTheMc84]

I don't have a problem with girl-on-girl in principle, it's all in how it is implemented. If the MC is still the focus, and he is directing it then it can be really good. Like the player can make the MC says, "You two should kiss," or "Use your tongue to clean out the creampie I just left in her." Stuff like that is good. What I don't like is when it happens behind the MC's back, or when the girls love each other as much as, or sometimes even more than, the MC.

It's like the expression goes, "What's better than one chocolate bar? Two chocolate bars." Which is true when I'm eating both of them, but two chocolate bars eating each other in another room is not better, because I have zero at that point. So, watching girls eat each other out is not inherently sexy to me (and hasn't been since I was a teenager). No judgment on anyone who really likes it, that just isn't me.

I want the MC to be the MAIN Character, not a walking dildo for a pair of lesbians who are more into each other than him... Any sex, lesbian, hetero, or whatever is not interesting to me unless it is the context of the MC and his story. It's why I dislike any voyeurism scenes. Lesbian or otherwise.

I've downloaded the game and will try it out, see how you've implemented the stuff that is there... if I keep track or not, either way I wish you all the success.


Edit: Played the release. The Mc is kinda funny looking, but I'm not playing to look at him anyway, . I also don't mind that the mom and older sister look like older women. The bisexual stuff happened in a context of a threesome with the MC as the main focus, so if that remains the consistent way it happens then I'm okay with it. Looking forward to the next release to see where everything goes.

 

[User_31001]

gonna wait for android since the whole joiplay thing is a drag but so far it looks good

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Restricted section so guessing MC did his time for being a **** and now after trading notes with other ****s in adseg/SNY gained some skills to not get caught this time. I guess I'll find out after the download is done.

 

[BeowulfKnight]

Other people have already mentioned the your/you're thing so I won't harp on that Otherwise this was a very nice start to a vn! I greatly enjoyed your work and will keep an eye out for future updates.

 

[Nastastic]

Restricted section so guessing MC did his time for being a **** and now after trading notes with other ****s in adseg/SNY gained some skills to not get caught this time. I guess I'll find out after the download is done.

Apparently he beat the shit out of an off-duty cop in a bar brawl and got 8 years.

Not too bad for a first start! Good action with the older sister, and the mom, if you like that sort of thing (I played the mom/sis threesome because...ya know...threesome, but not the mom BJ) and good progress with two very horny daughters.

The age choice in the beginning of the game is slightly confusing, simply because we don't actually meet the girl whose appearance seems to be our gauge to set our age in 0.1. So then you find out how you got your older sister pregnant 18 years ago and you might wonder if it's an error, before finding out you also knocked up your YOUNGER sister a few years later. Presumably this girl is your youngest daughter, from the younger sister. Anyway, if you set your character's age to 40 from the default of 45, the twins end up being 17 (and the youngest should be 13).

This will not be a slow burn, for anyone concerned about that. I would be surprised if we haven't creampied both of the older daughters (at least) by 0.3 (unless 0.2 is much smaller than 0.1 or the presumptive arrival of the younger sister and younger daughter in 0.2 slows progression with the current girls) since it seems we are well on our way to that goal already with at least one of them.

An aside that has nothing to do with the game per se: Is it just me or is the name "Chloe" WAY THE FUCK overused in VNs lately?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Apparently he beat the shit out of an off-duty cop in a bar brawl and got 8 years.

Not too bad for a first start! Good action with the older sister, and the mom, if you like that sort of thing (I played the mom/sis threesome because...ya know...threesome, but not the mom BJ) and good progress with two very horny daughters.

The age choice in the beginning of the game is slightly confusing, simply because we don't actually meet the girl whose appearance seems to be our gauge to set our age in 0.1. So then you find out how you got your older sister pregnant 18 years ago and you might wonder if it's an error, before finding out you also knocked up your YOUNGER sister a few years later. Presumably this girl is your youngest daughter, from the younger sister. Anyway, if you set your character's age to 40 from the default of 45, the twins end up being 17 (and the youngest should be 13).

This will not be a slow burn, for anyone concerned about that. I would be surprised if we haven't creampied both of the older daughters (at least) by 0.3 (unless 0.2 is much smaller than 0.1 or the presumptive arrival of the younger sister and younger daughter in 0.2 slows progression with the current girls) since it seems we are well on our way to that goal already with at least one of them.

An aside that has nothing to do with the game per se: Is it just me or is the name "Chloe" WAY THE FUCK overused in VNs lately?

Ugh, really wish if NOT doing a Shiny Devon (or a me eventually) and just skipping the age setter and making them 7-15yo by default at least suggest the correct ages before the player changes them even if they are 10yo, or at least set a range like Such a Sharp Pain does (ie 9-20 for Leana, 15-20 for Alice, etc). Otherwise you get the mess you pointed out or simply it not making much chronological sense (ie 5yo in middleschool) if a player picks the wrong number only to realize it later and having to start over.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Oops, Chloe says "Ohh baby girl, come here." to her dad. I think that was meant for her dad to say unless he got a sex change while in prison.

 

[timking161]

Android pls