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4 Years of Service
Those reporting this game please see the note in the OP.
2 Years of Service
Having played this game. The first Two pictures are good but it need better lighting to help it pop but it has the same problem the rest of the game have and that the picture are Too blurry, maybe look into making it more clear.
I see some of the pose are messed up such as the guy bowing, you can build up you pose database more, get better at pose, or zoom up as to avoid showing his mess up arms. The sons are a real eye sore sense they are just grown men that are just small, you can used different model for that can pass as teens or used the age up Daz program. The background looks off, I'm guessing they are real photos that are in a IRAY, consider adding something in the Middle ground and foreground to make it like a set so you just don't focus at the odd background. Consider working with scene packs sense they already have everything set up so you don't have to focus on if the feet touching the ground.
There is a scene with the God that TOO Bright and it wash out everything else.
The scene with the walking with the Bow and arrow , that the model not fitting it well. Their some program with Daz that can fix it or you can just position the camera in front to hid that it is bulging and stiff.
If you're getting started look to make a short self-contained story, could be a liner short novel with no option or one with two option that don't really change the story so you can get used to programing. Once you get better you can build up from it. In the Menus the yellow words are hard to see when you go to the white option menus.
Anyway don't feel discourage you basically already are making images and learning to program, most people can't even do that. You just need to get better at the image part. Consider making more image and posting it, they don't have to be about the game and it should help you learn more. When you work on the games you don't need to make lots of scene but simply take picture of the same scene in different angles to make it look like more stuff is happening or focus on the faces sense you don't have to move much. I hope this helps.
I see some of the pose are messed up such as the guy bowing, you can build up you pose database more, get better at pose, or zoom up as to avoid showing his mess up arms. The sons are a real eye sore sense they are just grown men that are just small, you can used different model for that can pass as teens or used the age up Daz program. The background looks off, I'm guessing they are real photos that are in a IRAY, consider adding something in the Middle ground and foreground to make it like a set so you just don't focus at the odd background. Consider working with scene packs sense they already have everything set up so you don't have to focus on if the feet touching the ground.
There is a scene with the God that TOO Bright and it wash out everything else.
The scene with the walking with the Bow and arrow , that the model not fitting it well. Their some program with Daz that can fix it or you can just position the camera in front to hid that it is bulging and stiff.
If you're getting started look to make a short self-contained story, could be a liner short novel with no option or one with two option that don't really change the story so you can get used to programing. Once you get better you can build up from it. In the Menus the yellow words are hard to see when you go to the white option menus.
Anyway don't feel discourage you basically already are making images and learning to program, most people can't even do that. You just need to get better at the image part. Consider making more image and posting it, they don't have to be about the game and it should help you learn more. When you work on the games you don't need to make lots of scene but simply take picture of the same scene in different angles to make it look like more stuff is happening or focus on the faces sense you don't have to move much. I hope this helps.
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3 Years of Service
If you could kindly give the name, I would be grateful. Thanks for the analysis. It helps in growing and knowing where I need to work hard.
2 Years of Service
Try RSSY Ultimate Clothing Fixer or Mesh Grabber, I haven't used them but I heard these are some of the program people use. Where do you get your stuff?
2 Years of Service
To use teens or make adults into teens/kids
Look for "growing up" on render-state.
You can easily make better kids/teens without using the scale slider.
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3 Years of Service
Actually, for my future (next) project I am using (or prefer using) gen 9 (since, it uses easy meshes and textures). Thanks for the suggestion. I have one or two scripts for it which I found after releasing version 0.1.
4 Years of Service
Here is a direct link to Growing up bundle.
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gen3-8 and for gen 9
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3 Years of Service
Degenerate South Asians lurking here fapping to VNs like the rest of us all of sudden appalled when they see this LMAO.
2 Years of Service
it's look good i will try it 
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