discussion Complete KN Ren'Py DAZ Making Memories [v1.0a] [Kvitravn Tales]

[Fauxcest]

felt short and rushed, like the dev was looking forward to wrapping this VN

I think I can count on my fingers how many VNs have proper well thought, non-rushed endings. I guess this is just something we have to live with when they don't get dropped or abandoned half way

 

[mrbobby]

this one is a hard one to rate, the graphic is most of the time really well done, the story is for a VN average but fine, BUT!!!! dang, the translation is most of the time bad!!! and at times so bad it makes absolutely no sense " i don't want to step on your wallet-" what is that even supposed to mean??? "to drag these waters again" Again what is that supposed to mean?? ok, i guess this last one could be a saying in im guessing whatever Spanish-speaking country the writer comes from, but again what does that mean?? "Ava: you wanna talk about it? next slide MC: tired.... I'll save that for home, to your face" Again im not trying to drag the writer but he or she needs some serious help with the translating it's REALLY BAD!!! heck try using

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[Nastastic]

P.S. There is NO EPILOGUE! I guess the dev probably didn't know what an epilogue actually is (a scene or two to wrap things up, generally taking place in at least the near future after the events of the main story, for example, fast-forward six months to a big belly or two ) and just thought it means "end". Fairly abrupt, at that.

The dev confirmed on F95 (to someone else since I don't post there) that he indeed did not know what "epilogue" actually meant. He just thought it meant "end".

Anyway, his new game has dropped. It's called Further Education, and he seems really excited for it and indicates that it will be a nice, long game. It revolves around characters introduced in the last couple of chapters (the MC is the hirsute son of Ava's friend that she is opening the restaurant with). Anyway, the game Kvitravn rushed this once-promising game out the door so he could get started on, his masterpiece, seems to be (hold your breath) (drumroll please) (da da da da da dum) another MOMMYFUCKER GAME!!! ?‍Because there JUST AREN'T ENOUGH OF THOSE!!! Apparently Kvitravn thinks he has found fertile new soil and something original to plant in it, in a field which has been repeatedly and extensively plowed, then burnt, blown up and finally nuked, and then fed to one of those giant Arrakis worms from Dune and shat out again! Sigh. Yeah. I'm done with this dev.

Ok, I was being deliberately a little over the top with this. I just don't see how anyone, dev or player, can get excited about yet another entry in the most overstuffed, clichéd and frankly boring subgenre of incest games. Obviously lots of people disagree with me though, or the damn things wouldn't be so popular (and we wouldn't get umpteen million crappy fan remakes of "Big Brother" every five minutes). I'm not kinkshaming here, if you love mommyfucker games, keep playing them and devs will keep pumping them out, as has been amply demonstrated. Just, devs...a little more variety, is it too much to ask?

 

[christyy]

that was fun

 

[wenwen2021]

This game is looks so interesting.

 

[podllboq]

A sweet and cozy game with a weird writing style and an abrupt ending

 

[Piet Friet]

This is a nice one.
Hot women and scenes.
I'm good.