If they wrote a book, they'd become a laughing stock on par with Empress Theresa. They only get away with it here because the standards for porn and porn games writing are so depressingly low.
Sweet Affection. I used to like it early on, but with each update, it just kept vomiting more and more words, sentences, paragraphs and eventually novels worth of text my way. Which isn't bad for a VN, if they didn't just repeat the same shit over and over again. It really needs to go through...