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The renders and the characters look great, superb even.

However the dialogue really pulls you out of the immersion.

Everyone talks as if they are in dreamland or been replaced by aliens who are on a script to butter each other up. The exception being the son, it's sort if refreshing that not all of the characters are in this state but I imagine that type of dynamic will change for him as well.

Don't get me wrong, I don't mind everyone being nice to each other, but only if it's done in a way that's written with more human like behavior in mind. Something like the parody of the Loud House.

Also is it known if the daughters are blood related to MC and son blood related to the Mom?
 
The renders and the characters look great, superb even.

However the dialogue really pulls you out of the immersion.

Everyone talks as if they are in dreamland or been replaced by aliens who are on a script to butter each other up. The exception being the son, it's sort if refreshing that not all of the characters are in this state but I imagine that type of dynamic will change for him as well.

Don't get me wrong, I don't mind everyone being nice to each other, but only if it's done in a way that's written with more human like behavior in mind. Something like the parody of the Loud House.

Also is it known if the daughters are blood related to MC and son blood related to the Mom?
Author is currently working on fixing dialog, be patient, no one is paying this dev its all one guy doing it for the love of the art.
 
ya, dialog is a bit strange sometimes but that's OK.
i cant imagine all the work it takes not only to make the game from scratch, but to translate it piece by piece too.
 
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Some of your comments about the story and how it reads, have resonate with me.
So i have begun looking into making the text more natural reading, not changing the story as i do have clear goal in mind.
But changing the way it reads, so look forward for hopefully soon coming update.
 

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Well, I'm pleased to see the dev is taking to heart feedback on the dialogue. It would really sink the project if left as-is.

I will also offer my two cents that the 2-frame animations are a detriment and I would rather look at a single still image.
 
Any news on when the next update is coming out or how much progress has gone into it?
its 45 days later with no reply.
I'd like to know the same
 
its 45 days later with no reply.
I'd like to know the same
He has no platform so is doing it for free with this the only site it's on, and he hasn't even been on here at all since Jan 11 (unless under an alt acct). 45 days is nothing, it's prob one of those AVNs in similar circumstances that get worked on when he has time and feels like it, so updates once a year, maybe.
 
I'm happy as long as we get an update I just wondered if there was an estimated release date or not. I just don't want this game to go down the abandoned route like many games+ entries...
 
i try to find games that could take the mantel of Such A sharp Pain since that game is abandon and so far this game is reaching that lvl of such a Sharp Pain so good job and keep it up
 
Its a short story so far just a few scenes. The dialog is a bit wonky as described above but it is understandable. I hope it gets updated because its pretty good.
 
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