Ok, i have finished it now. This is the first game I have skipped the sex to get to the story. It is the first soap opera I have ever liked. I would play this game forever if they would make weekly updates. I genuinely felt the MC and the main LI really loved each other. He would do anything for her and their banter was so organic and believable for their relationship. He never face fucked her and her reactions to being assfucked by him seemed real. i started to feel like I was intruding when I was watching them fuck. I saw no reason why the MC would be with any of the other LI's as he clearly only wanted his sister. I am entirely befuddled and discombobulated. This is not the sort of life affirming story I expect when I come searching for a reason to strum my vibratorium.
Seriously, was this written from memory or close personal fantasy. I refuse to believe this was all from the depths of someones imagination. The writer must have dipped his toe into this world. Camus said while all works are not autobiographies you know more about an author from the last pages than you knew during the first. You can't know these feelings so well without feeling a portion of them.
My criticisms are still veiled compliments. It ended too soon and too abruptly. Some of the early fumblings were in the dark and, while that is how I assume they would be, I wanted to see properly. (one actual criticism is that he kept telling people to be quiet while he was fucking them (even in non private situations) it doesn't mater how much of a sadist you are you wouldn't want that)
This story is a wonderful affirmation of the wonderful potential of the human condition.
Too bad it is a work of fiction and not a documentary. so any life affirming hopeful content was made up nonsense.
Maybe I'm bitter because as sexy as my brother may be he is 18 years older than me and married.