discussion KN Ren'Py DAZ My Parents Case [v0.1.25.1b] [Giandalf The Tall]

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Developer Name

Giandalf The Tall

Developer Links

Patreon

Version

V0.1.25.1b

Latest Update

Dec 22, 2024

Release Date

Dec 22, 2024

Language

English

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. MacOS

Overview:
You are 22 years old when your parents commit suicide out of the blue. Now you have to take over your father's company and look after an entire house. Luckily, you can count on your friends and especially your neighbor, who you've had a crush on for a long time.
Will you finally get together with your neighbor? If so, how is the relationship developing? Did your parents really commit suicide?
Oh yeah, before I forget, NO F***ING NTR!!!​

Spoiler: Genre:

3DCG, Animated, Groping, Kinetic novel, Male protagonist, Oral sex, Romance, Spanking, Teasing, Vaginal sex,

Spoiler: Installation

Extract and run

Spoiler: Change-Log

v0.1.25.1b
Initial Release

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[icecold]

High hopes. My kind of game!!

 

[JoJotheJoe]

Sounds a bit dark. Is this dark or more like a slice-of-life VN?

 

[capu5761]

You seriously need to proof read all of your dialog. There are so many misspelled word and just out right incorrect words for instance this line

"So, Melissa, my dad's right hand called me tight before and asked me if I could give her a visit my dad's company, which is basically my company now"

If you just fixed the errors use this

"So Melissa, my dad's right hand called me RIGHT before and asked me if I could let her visit my dad's company, which is basically my company now"

I would take it a step further and go with

"So Melissa, my dad right had called right before you showed up, and asked if she could stop by my dads company, which I guess is not actually my company"

another example about 10 seconds into the game it says "grab your spart phone" clearly you mean "grab your SMART phone"


"Pull Birhgten slightpy towards you and whisper something in her ear" I assume you mean "Brighten" & "slightly"?

 

[El Buho]

You say " Oh yeah, before I forget, NO F***ING NTR!!!" Thats a little harsh isn't it??

 

[ontach]

Hmm... "friends and neighbours" ? Any possibility of an incest patch?
Nice preview renders btw.

 

[ghostwerx]

Sooo...I'm willing to give this a shot...but I'm hoping that the dialogue is better than @capu5761 is reporting. "Cause if it is, the visuals had better be spectacular to overcome poor editing and grammer. That has resulted in my dropping games before and I hope it won't be the result with this one.

 

[WigglyWorld84]

"parent's"

hmm...

 

[elfieeven]

I'm so confused right now... the production values on this are so fricken high!

Great use of simple animations to bring the world to life, great render quality, great job taking a semi-commonly used house asset and making it completely original. Custom music, good sound effects...

But you can't find a single person to proof read for you?! Please... please find someone who can help

"So Melissa, my dad right had called right before you showed up, and asked if she could stop by my dads company, which I guess is not actually my company"

I assume you meant right hand? Also it would be dad's right hand. And "I guess is not actually my company" just makes no sense at all. Your first suggestion was way better

 

[ghostwerx]

And I'm out.

The grammer / writting isn't great but if the dev is not an english speaker then good job but it still needs editing. If they are a native english speaker....please re-take high school english classes and this time don't sleep through them. The graphics aren't awe inspiring, but are definately competent. They could use a bit more work, but I've played games with worse graphics and really enjoyed them so that wasn't a dealbreaker.

But the real point that pushed me out was the "choices". When you pause the game for some interaction or choice, it should not be a case of "oh look I've opened the fridge and now can make the choice of [drink OJ] or....nothing else & I have to click on it to continue. To then stack over a half dozen within 15? 20? lines of exposition.... That is not a choice based game or V/N. It is you the dev, the writter trying to hit me over the head with a "Your Involved" Hammer. I made it into Chapter one and just could not continue. Maybe it gets better, but I think that I will pass on this one.

All the best to the dev, but please play some other games, read some other V/Ns and take notes.

 

[xartma]

No NTR is good enough to give a try. The models look good as well.

 

[DaveH]

Here's a zip with updates script files (unzip in the game folder) to fix a lot of typos:

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[User_113984]

looks fun! hope the story is cool too, it sounds a bit dark lol

 

[lewdito]

I see Sarah from oh daddy everywhere now

 

[phoenix133]

loved it

 

[An0n125]

"Oh yeah, before I forget, NO F***ING NTR!!!" saw this and might as well give it a try.

 

[magnet35]

WOW. THis one looks amazing. The freckles are done so nicely

 

[astromix]

The story is intriguing, too bad there wasn't a sister too.....

 

[moistmoyra]

Guessing English isn't the dev's first language and they're using machine translation because holy shit it is unreadable garbage. Sorry, but it has to be said.

 

[bhedoets]

I wanna play it. But i using an android