discussion Complete KN Ren'Py DAZ Sandra [V1.0] [Anonymous]

[Deschain]

Overall another fun and wholesome release for a game that quickly shot into my top 5 games.

[...] Definitely needs some help with the English translation (I'll be glad to help out once I figure out a way to get a discord account that doesn't dox me) as the dialog is a lot rougher in this version. There is at least one place where I had no idea what the intent of the sentence was. [...]

Hi!
Yes, thank you first of all for your positive review!
We both invest a lot of time in our projects and are of course always very happy when the results generate positive feedback.
And yes, I would be happy to have the support of a native English speaker. At least for proofreading.

advance of 3-4 slides with one click is anoing (for me) ... I wish it could be changed perhaps in options like slides advance: normal or one by one
good music choice, it almost rip me a tear when the mother left the kid
I hope the "more" adult scenes will go as in reality, slow and with effort, with many tries and lots of failures
Good job !

The thing is that these "animations" in my opinion add a certain dynamic to the game. But, I get your point.
I personally find it annoying when you even have to click away every "scene separator black screen" in AVN's.
But I hope - and at least for me it is usually the case - that you can get used to the "rhythm" of the game.

Speaking of rhythm, thanks for the feedback on the music selection, yes, I also invest a disproportionately large amount of time in finding suitable tracks. For me, music also plays a big part in the atmosphere of a game. (Even if I know that many people immediately turn it off completely )

So, thanks for your feedback and you can be sure that even if I don't reply to every comment/suggestion, I read them all.

Greetings and keep having fun!
Deschain

 

[fallfallen]

i like this. nice renders and nice story.

 

[Thorplay]

Anyone get this to work in Joiplay?

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 359, in bootstrap
File "renpy/main.py", line 677, in main
File "renpy/main.py", line 145, in run
File "renpy/execution.py", line 951, in run_context
File "00start.rpyc", line 288, in script
File "renpy/script.py", line 1103, in lookup
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

 

[Lorudo]

Why are you making us download Mac, Linux and Windows versions all in one?

 

[Shaun80]

Thank You For This Wonderful Game.
Looking Forward To All Future Updates

 

[Rory-Mercury91]

Overall another fun and wholesome release for a game that quickly shot into my top 5 games.

Good

• Another wholesome, cute, fun release.
• Renders continue to be very well done.
• Sandra is still the cutest, most expressive character in any AVN I've seen. She sometimes acts a little to grown up but with a mother like that..
• Tom is an awesome, likeable, caring MC which you don't see enough of these days. This is not a corruption story, it's a love story and Tom plays his part very well. Curious to see if we're going to see things change up a little bit since that nasty "sex" word popped into his mind. Sure his conscious mind rebelled against it but the subconscious should be another story. It'd be funny to have him trying to hide an erection from Sandra the next time they're nearly naked rough housing with each other.

Bad

• Definitely needs some help with the English translation (I'll be glad to help out once I figure out a way to get a discord account that doesn't dox me) as the dialog is a lot rougher in this version. There is at least one place where I had no idea what the intent of the sentence was.
• Pretty sure Tom and Sandra are hovering above the bed (in the first bed scene) which I think makes the weird shadows even worse. Maybe Tom needs some non-white sheets to soak up some of that light and help reduce the shadows?

I'm writing to see if you'd be interested in taking over the English translation? I can discuss it with you via a message on the Forum and contact our coder to integrate your corrected version into the games.
I'm the French translator for this game. Alas, my English is catastrophic ( Thanks to online translators )

 

[Rory-Mercury91]

tes impressionner par l'écriture de cette vn. L'histoire est splendide! les personnages son d'un réaliste fou! le tout est simplement logique. je suis impressionner par l'écriture de cette saga. je ne peu qu'attendre avec impatience la suite. Bravo au créateur d cette vn!

Merci pour ton retour, je vois que tu es un Lecteur francophone. Est-ce que as tout hasard tu aurais vue des coquille, oublie ou autre sur la traduction française ? Comme j'en suis le traducteur ?

Thank you for your feedback, I can see that you are a French-speaking reader. By any chance, have you seen any typos or omissions in the French translation? As I'm the translator?

 

[Yodasy]

will it possible that more pee and tickle stuff in the next update?

 

[thyand27]

Unofficial android port for Sandra v0.2 (temporary until we get official port from cebs )

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Basic features:
Swipe up: Menu
Swipe down: Hide textbox & Quickmenu
Swipe left: Rollback
Swipe right: Skip
Save files

(App will crash until you give file and media permission to store save files)

wow, thank you very much for providing the android port sir.
really appreciate it.

really hope you can teach me too.

 

[LiriusArt]

Why are you making us download Mac, Linux and Windows versions all in one?

Hello, each file can be downloaded individually

 

[Lorudo]

Hello, each file can be downloaded individually

Yea I just saw from the protron drive link, you can download them separately, but any other link has an archive with all 3.

So for anyone that doesn't want to download unnecessary versions, use the protron drive link

 

[bravoswild]

Looked good, but early. Also sounds like slow burn and I HATE slow burn.

I think a slow burn is like anything else. If it is done good, it's worth it.

 

[tsunku]

i can't help but feel like agent 47 has a kid haha

 

[tsunku]

The bald MC whose head looks waxed or like a hairless mutant rather than someone who shaves his head screams either, "I'm too lazy or unskilled to deal with a male hair asset" or "I can't afford a male hair asset." The short female hair asset doesn't help. I know hair assets have been the bane of users of DAZ Studio, Poser and similar products since time immemorial (or at least since the early 00s when I was fucking with those programs) but come on.

Otherwise, loli...no mommyfucking...sure, I'll download it.

duh, that's what makes him such a good hitman, who ever notices the bald guy in a suit, with a menacing glare? lol..

 

[MattShizzle]

I think a slow burn is like anything else. If it is done good, it's worth it.

Not to me. No sex parts of a game are boring. I hate slow burn period.

 

[LiriusArt]

duh, that's what makes him such a good hitman, who ever notices the bald guy in a suit, with a menacing glare? lol..

That would be worth considering, and the game would be over quickly before it really got going...

 

[teejayy]

Unofficial android port for Sandra v0.2 (temporary until we get official port from cebs )

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Basic features:
Swipe up: Menu
Swipe down: Hide textbox & Quickmenu
Swipe left: Rollback
Swipe right: Skip
Save files

(App will crash until you give file and media permission to store save files)

came through again thanks

 

[elfieeven]

The bald MC whose head looks waxed or like a hairless mutant rather than someone who shaves his head screams either, "I'm too lazy or unskilled to deal with a male hair asset" or "I can't afford a male hair asset." The short female hair asset doesn't help. I know hair assets have been the bane of users of DAZ Studio, Poser and similar products since time immemorial (or at least since the early 00s when I was fucking with those programs) but come on.

Otherwise, loli...no mommyfucking...sure, I'll download it.

So.. no AVN can ever have a bald MC? That's just silly talk. At least he doesn't have an ugly beard like the MC at the start of Libertine had

 

[elfieeven]

The thing is that these "animations" in my opinion add a certain dynamic to the game. But, I get your point.
I personally find it annoying when you even have to click away every "scene separator black screen" in AVN's.
But I hope - and at least for me it is usually the case - that you can get used to the "rhythm" of the game.

Agree 110% with this. I'm actually including a few things like this to my own work because I loved how much life it adds to Sandra

 

[04michi]

compressed please this game, thanks